Name: Spiderpurr. Aww, that's a cute name! I almost never see 'purr' used in a name. 

 Past names: Spider, Spiderpaw. Normal. I assume he may have been a rogue/Kittypet? 

Clan: Skyclan(perfect name for Skyclan because spiders are technically climbers) Yeah, that does fit. Also, I love SkyClan OCs. It's such an underrated, refreshing Clan.

Past clans: none; he was a former rogue though. Okay, so I was right, he was a rogue. 

Gender: tom. Normal.

Sexuality: Bisexual(preference to toms) Alright, good for him!

Appearance/desc.: A tall, sleek-furred black Bengal with coppery-red eyes and a lanky build. He has soft-leathery paw pads and a nose which are brownish coloured in sunlight. He has a long, slim tail that is slightly crooked from an angle(something to do with birth problems I guess not every cat looks perfect!). He also has a few criss-cross scars on his front right paw from an accident while doing apprentice training. I like it! Quite detailed.

Personality: A bright-eyed, bold tom with a flirtatious demeanour that is quite witty and confident. At first, when joining Skyclan he was more meek and reserved but he slowly opened up during his apprenticeship. He sounds sweet and all but he is just a sarcastic, typical warrior underneath all that sugar coating. That last sentence is a bit confusing, not going to lie. I am kinda bad at deciphering meanings though, so that might just be me. Other than that, looks good.

Mate: Minkferret (fluffy large brown tom with slightly darker swirls and lime green eyes.) The name is a bit rhetorical, and I find that 'ferret' is not really a super good suffix. But everyone has their own naming style, so you don't have to change it. 

Kits(the kits are adopted because toms can't produce kits..): Spirekit(a sickly, small calico tom with hazel eyes that have green specks) and Hemlockkit (an elegant, long-limbed brown tom with darker and lighter dapples on his back and legs. He has pale green eyes. I like their names! I never see 'Hemlock' used, and it's a good prefix. 

Other Family/kin: Father-Arachnid(a black Egyptian mau tom with copper-gold eyes) Mother-Sahara (a leopard-like **ok she may be an Asian leopard cat** she with bold green eyes with small pupils) Brother(s)-Desert(a stock brown Egyptian mau with green eyes) Unnamed brother(a Bengal tom with unknown eye colour; was a stillborn) Sister-Spice (A cream Egyptian mau with an incredibly fluffy tail and pale copper eyes.)The names, especially his father's, are quite unique! 

Cause of future death: while the camp was being raided he died by accidentally breaking his neck at a great height; he tried to climb a tree and fell to his death, he was found a few sunrises later. (maybe he tried to evacuate the camp and get help?) A bit unclear. So he climbed a tree trying to escape the raiders, attack them, or evacuate, or what? And being that he is an elder at his death, climbing a tree doesn't make a ton of sense. 

Rank at death: Elder. Good for him, good long life. 

Past ranks: rogue, apprentice, warrior, senior warrior, deputy (he retired) I have an OC, (Spottedsound) who is a retired deputy! I always like the detail of retiring being added. 

Good traits: affectionate, loyal, high stamina, obedient.

Bad traits: He gets VERY moody when waking up early for dawn patrols, he's too clingy, and he isn't that brave. Both are pretty balanced. 

Hunting:6/10 (From time to time he catches good prey like a plump rabbit or a big sparrow but most of the time he catches small voles and scrawny mouses.

Fighting:7.5/10

Swimming:4/10

Climbing:9/10 (he's a Skyclan cat and he's got long legs so he would be good at that obviously)

Leadership skills:7/10 

Reputation:7.5/10

Alright, maybe a bit too high, and you forgot fighting and reputation. 

Likes: cuddling, teasing, playing games, specific instructions, pretty views, his family (talking about the Skyclan one he and mink made) Aww, cuddly cat. Love that.

Dislikes: rain, too much fog, getting lost, slugs and worms, blood, and death. Fair.

Scars/injuries: he gained the criss-cross scar on his front right foot as an apprentice(gonna explain in backstory).and he gained a small nick in his left ear from a battle as a senior warrior with a few rogues. Alright, cool.

Backstory: Spider and his siblings were initially born in a den that was somewhat near Skyclan's borders. His father died about a moon or a half due to a thunderstorm before they were born which didn't make anything better for his mother, Sahara who was struggling to cope with her mate's death. after being born, Spider was named Spider for his black pelt and in honour of his father. His siblings were named desert and spice leaving the last kit who was stillborn to be buried, his mother always said that she would've named the kit jade or ocean depending on its eye colour. Tragedy struck a few moons after when his mother died due to a fox attack(was gonna make it a badger but foxes would be good enough)he and his siblings parted ways in grief, and he eventually taught himself how to 'fight' and 'hunt' and occasionally he would steal bites out of kittypet food as the instinct of trying to survive.

Alright, seems that the backstory was cut short by a glitch or never finished. So I will work from here. The whole 'both parents died tragically and left him alone' plot is overused and a bit cliche, but can be put to use f it has enough explanation and if it is well written, so I will leave that be. Otherwise, not really any critiques. If you want to attach more backstory, I will give that a quick rate. Overall, this character is quite good but could use some... Defining features. Something to set them apart from the rest. I don't know what that would be, but he is just kind of hovering in that space between good, and slightly off. I give him a 7/10. Thank you so much for submitting it!

Bonus: What I think he'd look like:

Darker eyes and it would fit better, but I couldn't find one with darker eyes!