Name Spiderpaw. Love the name.

Past Names: Spiderkit. Normal.

Clan: StoneClan (fan-made) Love a good FanClan.

Past Clans: none. Loyal cat.

Gender: Male. Cool.

Sexuality: Straight. Nice.

Appearance: a short-haired almost black tom with darker swirls, hazel eyes, paws stained with soot, and a half-burnt face. Poor guy! How did he get burned? Also, love the addition of hazel eyes.

Personality: Spiderpaw is a nervous wreck most of the time. When he isn't he can be pretty smart (for an apprentice) and very gentle when it comes to any cat; he wishes no harm on any cat. Aww. I like him. You could flesh it out more, but don't need to.

Mate: Ash (Future mate) He doesn't have a warrior name, leading me to think he may have died early in life, but he already has a mate. Do you just not have a name decided yet? 

Kits: none. Cool.

Other family: Crowstar (mother/living-ish) Driftspeck (father/deceased) Nightpaw (sister/living) Fawnkit (sibling/deceased) Thriftstream (uncle/living) What does 'living-ish' mean? Other than that, sounds good. 

Cause of Future Death: Crushed in a rockslide, trying to save a little of newborn kits. Noble death.

Rank: Med Cat Apprentice (At Death) Elder. I'm just confused by the fact he doesn't have a warrior name. 

Past Ranks: Kit, Warrior Apprentice. Okay.

Good Traits: Smart, caring/kind, thoughtful, quick thinker, selfless. Pretty good

Bad Traits: Nervous/anxious, dwells on the past, clingy, perfectionist. Also balanced.

Hunting: 3/10

 Fighting: 2/10 

Swimming: 4/10 

Climbing (rocks): 6/10 

Leadership: 6/10 

Reputation: 7/10

All pretty good and balanced! 

Likes: Spending time with family, Learning, Ash ;) Nice.

Backstory: As a kit, he never truly knew his father (he was killed in a border skirmish) and grew close to his sister. Right at birth his sibling, Fawnkit, joined FallenClan (StarClan) early after having too much mucus in his lungs. When he turned seven moons old, a fire erupted in the camp and trapped him inside. Without thinking Lighttail, the deputy, jumped in and saved him, but not before the left side of his face was severely burnt. A little while after the incident his mother, Crowstar, saw him as "unfit" to be a warrior and forced him to become Mistheart's apprentice. In his first few days of Medicine Cat training, he watched her help deliver a litter of kits. But tragedy struck when his mother and Lighttail fell into a sleep-like state, not even a moon later. He had to help Mistheart keep them alive by chewing and forcefully feeding them prey. In the past few moons, he has learned how to be a filler medicine cat while Mistheart stepped up with Mistletoebriar as the clan's "Leader." 

You said this is where the story picks up but didn't continue. So, I will rate it from here! I like the backstory, poor little guy. Spiderpaw is an adorable name, I love it. Overall, this is a pretty good OC. He gets an 8.2/10!  

BONUS: What I think he would look like! (Couldn't find a scarred up cat, sorry!)