Name: Sparrowwatcher. Nice! I like the suffix Watcher a lot .

Past names:Sparrowkit, Sparrowpaw. Cool.

Clan: Shadowclan. Nice, ShadowClan is one of my fav Clans for fanfictions and OCs

Past Clans: Thunderclan. Okay, why did she move? 

Gender:Female/She-cat. Cool.

Sexuality:Lesbian. Good for her!

Appearance: A thin,tall night-black she-cat with gray spangles,she has a completely white face except her ears and nose. Her tail is fluffy and drags behind her on the ground,it has a white tail tip near the end of it. She has hazel eyes,swirled with amber-copper near the center. Sounds like an interesting, pretty cat. I like that her eyes are detailed in description, and you don't see many hazel-eyed OCs! 

Personality:She is very unsentimental and has never cared much for family, except her mate. She is kind and can't stand for other cats to be upset, she will pester them for days just to help boost their self confidence a little. Most cats say she is brave but,for other reasons besides things like fighting she had the courage to stand up to her mother when she and her brother wanted to leave Thunderclan. Lightly Sparrowwatcher has been depressed (Explained) So, she is unsentimental but is also kind and hates when cats are upset? She sounds like a pretty caring cat, so unsentimental might not be the right word. Maybe placid or calm? 

Mate: Snakerunner,a pale fawn she-cat with a bright orange flower tucked behind one ear.S he has a bright ginger tail and paws,with flecks of white strewn throughout them. Snakerunner was the deputy of Shadowclan before she died of greencough late at night. Poor Snakerunner.  She sounds like a gorgeous cat. 

Kits:None. Cool. 

Other kin:Halfleap,her brother. He is a pale sandy tom with matching hazel eyes,he has black swirls and two black tailrings, there is a small scar above his left eye. He belongs to Riverclan. So they both went to different Clans? Why?

Cause of death or future death:Old age. Good to see OCs that live a good long life. 

Rank: Warrior. Nice.

Past ranks: Kit,Apprentice,Warrior,Elder. Cool.

Good traits: Brave and kind-hearted. Okay.

Bad traits: Unsentimental,depressed and stubborn. Pretty balanced.

Hunting:8/10

Fighting:6/10

Swimming:2/1

Climbing:4/10

Leadership Skills:1/10

Reputation:4/10

Also pretty ballanced!

Likes:Hunting and visiting Starclan. Why can she visit StarClan? I thought only med cats/leaders could do that, but I know that sometimes normal cats can. 

Dislikes:Thunderclan (Her mother is leader) Is that all? Why does she dislike her mother? 

Scar/Injuries: A small pink scar near her shoulderblade. Cool. 

Other: After her mate died, Sparrowwatcher went into deep depression, she quickly moved to the elders den where she planned to live out the rest of her days. One day she felt a bit better so she asked her leader if she could be a warrior again. Shortly after a battle happened with Thunderclan, Sparrowwatcher happily attacked her mother taking out all her anger, her mother ran away though and Sparrowwatcher collapsed on the ground, she died soon after due to old age and not being used to fighting. A bit extreme for her to just... drop dead? Was she wounded badly, why did she choose her mother of all cats to attack, and cats usually can't just switch back and forth between Elder and Warrior. Why was she so angry? 

Okay! Overall, I like this OC! She is fairly balanced, but there are a few plot holes I would like explained. I give her, 7.5/10. Her personality is a bit mixed around, and why she switched Clans is quite unclear. But she sounds interesting, and pretty unique! Sorry it took so long to complete, I have a lot on my plate with School, plus quite a few other books, and contests.

Bonus: What I think she would look like! Not completely accurate, but as close as I could find. Hope you liked your rating, and again, sorry for the late review!