Name: MouseGlide. I really like her name! I almost never see the suffix 'glide' used!

Past Names: MouseKit, MousePaw. Alright.

Clan: ThunderClan (I know, generic lol) It's a bit generic, but if it's explained well and not just a random choice, it's fine. 

Past Clans: none. Okay, loyal cat.

 Gender: Female. Alright.

Sexuality: Straight. Cool!

Appearance: she has fur that is cream with tints of a sweet mute pink on the end of her tail, paws, and nose tip. She has a light cream belly that leads down to her paws only. She also has sleek fur, and long legs, and is decently skinny. Plus, she has yellow eyes that tint blue often. She sounds like a very pretty cat! The pink tints are a really cute addition. 

 Personality: She is courageous, always being the brave one in front of everyone else, and she's always determined, and she always has faith no matter the situation. But sometimes, when she's in her 'good' personality, as she says, she can come off as annoying and vain. Some cats whisper of how it's weird she's always excited about a fight. Cool, pretty balanced!

Mate: BarkTounge (named after all of his shark remarks) he is a dark brown tabby tom that is almost black, and has amber eyes. He also has long ears and whiskers. Alright! Barktounge is a cool name. 

Kits: (her first litter) FlowerPounce, a sleek cream-dappled she-cat with hazel eyes. SplatterFace, is a black and red calico she-cat with most of her splatters surrounding her face. Yellow eyes and long whiskers. And BlackLuck, a jet-black tom with amber eyes, and matted fur. Long ears. (all warriors) her second litter is apps, BurrPaw, a white tom with yellow eyes and long ears and whiskers, he's teased for being a 'burr' in cats fur when he was named for a sort of shiver, like when you say 'burrrr! I'm cold!' And WinterPaw, a silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes and a shorter tail than average, calls it a 'scar' to sound cool when it's just a birth defect. They were born in LeafBare, hence their names. and her last litter is Kits, TarantulaKit, a brown tabby tom with black accents, and six toes! He loves to brag about his six toes to his sister. And last, FlameKit, a ginger tabby she-cat with a flame-shaped marking on the middle of her chest. I almost never see an OC that has more than one litter! Splatterface is a very unique name. Only, did she have her third litter when her second litter was still apprentices? That's very fast. 

Kin: I said her kits and mate, so I'll move on parents and siblings! So, her mother is HoneyComb, a pure-bred Siamese (she was a kittypet that left her home) cat with blue eyes, short fur, and a lean build. She is quiet and only speaks up when needed, but she can be as rowdy as MouseGlide. Her father is SnoozeBranch, an orange tabby tom with yellow eyes, medium fur, and a broad build. he is not afraid to speak his mind when needed, although his favourite thing to do is sleep...huh. ReedKit, a tabby tom with blue eyes and short fur and a lean build, is a bit bossy and loves to jump and run around. He died from blackcough. ChipmunkKit, a Siamese-looking she-kit that was quite shy, but she wasn't afraid to speak her mind, although she was quite frail and sickly looking. She died from blackcough too. Alright, cool! Snoozebranch is an adorable name. 

Cause of death/future death: I haven't decided yet. Okay. 

Rank (at death): Queen (the next will explain why) Nice!

Rank: Perma Queen. Cool, I almost never see Perma Queen used for an OC's main rank.

Past ranks: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Queen, Perma Queen. Alright!

Good Traits: she is courageous and never loses much hope, she always looks at the bright side of things and tries to be friendly (unless another cat is being hostile to her) Normal, and balanced.

Bad Traits: she is a little too overprotective and can be quite rude when her kits are made fun of, etc, she's weirdly always excited about fights. Okay!

Hunting: 5.5/10

Fighting: 6.1/10

Swimming: 2/10

Climbing: 3/10

Leadership Skills: 7/10

Reputation: 8.5/10

Balanced here, too.

Backstory: MouseKit was a rowdy kit back then, her two other siblings ReedKit and ChipmunkKit died from blackcough, and she was devastated by it shutting herself off from the world and snapping at any cat that came to comfort her.
Aww, poor thing. 

 When she was apprenticed to a warrior called WillowBreeze, a brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes, she got close to MousePaw. MousePaw always came to her for comfort, and WillowBreeze liked that. After a few moons of training went by, as MousePaw mellowed, her first battle came with RiverClan over the sunningrocks and in the end she had a scratch over her shoulders and a few on her body. But the result ended in WillowBreeze's death and she told MousePaw to move on and be strong no matter how many deaths she comes across. So, she tried her best although she didn't like her new mentor BunnyBlaze, a white tom with soft fur and a lean build, very much. 
I love the name Bunnyblaze! It's so cute. Poor Willowbreeze! But, there is actually a cannon cat named, Willowbreeze, she was Crookedstar's mate.

When it was time for her to become a warrior, she accepted it graciously and was named MouseGlide. She was a great warrior for many moons, and she achieved an apprentice named QuickPaw, a white she-cat with black spots and hazel eyes. And she trained QuickPaw until she became QuickWind. She also developed a crush on another warrior named BarkTounge when training QuickWind, she didn't have the courage to tell him yet and continued to be a great warrior for 3 more moons, on the third moon their deputy retired (his name was FlailLeaf) and MouseGlide was offered from the leader to be deputy before she was a (queen at all in a meeting) and she turned the leader down saying that she thinks she has a different destiny. 4 moons later BarkTounge and MouseGlide became mates and had their first litter of kits, FlowerKit, SplatterKit, and BlackKit. When she had them, she promised she would stay strong for them, and for WillowBreeze, ChipmunkKit, and ReedKit.

That's sweet! And I've never seen a cat reject a deputy position, it's quite rare. This backstory is good! It has the necessary details and explains things well. Only, I didn't see her father mentioned at all. Do they not have a relationship/ a good relationship?

Overall, Mouseglide is a good OC! She's well thought-out and has an entertaining story. She gets a 9/10! 

Bonus: What I think she looks like: