Lilac
Name: Lilac. I like the name! It's very pretty, and Lilac is quite underused. I have an OC named Brokenlilac!
Past Names: Sweet, Mistletoe. Three different loner/kittypet names? How'd that happen?
Clan: WindClan. Why didn't he receive a Warrior name if he joined a Clan?
Past Clans: Loner; None (at one point a forced Kittypet) Alright.
Gender: Male. Cool!
Sexuality: Pansexual. Okay, good for him!
Appearance: A black cat with a white muzzle, tail tip, and back paws. He has one green eye and one yellow eye, and has a flower crown on each ear that goes in a blue-white-blue-white pattern. Aww, characters with flower crowns are always so cute. He sounds like a very handsome cat.
Personality: Nothing was submitted, so I can't judge this part of Lilac's character.
Mate (If any): None currently, but had a former mate; Penguin. I love the name Penguin. It's so cute. Any description for him?
Kits: (If any) N/A. Alright.
Other Family and Kin: His father, Daring. His mother, Lioness died birthing him. Descriptions for them?
Cause of Death or Future Death: He likes to go for runs, no matter what state of health he's in, so most likely gets a wound from thorns and then opens it up more by running. So, he dies of a thorn wound? Does it get infected, or what?
Rank: (At death): Loner. He seemingly joined WindClan but was apparently born as a loner. At what point did he join, or leave?
Past Ranks: Loner, Kittypet. Alright.
Good Traits: Sweet, Friendly, Joyful. Nice, but it could use a bit more.
Bad Traits: Nervous, Anxious, A bit of a pushover in certain areas. Fairly balanced!
Hunting: 8/10
Fighting: 7/10
Swimming:9 /10
Climbing: 6/10
Leadership Skills: 5.5/10
Reputation: 9/10
A bit too high in most areas.
Likes: Butterflies, Flower, Running, Peace. Fair! Peaceful loners are nice to see.
Dislikes: Loud noises, Blood, Death. Fair enough!
Scars/Injuries: A long scar from his left shoulder to his tail. He got it fighting another loner who had taken his territory in the time he had been taken by a two-leg. Interesting!
Backstory: He was raised by his father, Daring, who while lovely was always on edge since Lioness, his mate died. He was open to the forests but always preferred the glades and meadows because he felt safer. He did take a mate at one point, a tortoiseshell tom with pretty blue eyes - Penguin. Penguin left him, and Lilac was left confused and frustrated in the forest he had been living in with the other tom. Since he wasn't super sure which way the meadows he desperately wanted to go to were, he ended up on the side of a thunderpath and a twoleg took him in and named him Sweet. After he finally escaped, he ran as fast and far as he could and somehow ended up in another twoleg home. This one named him Mistletoe because the twoleg found Lilac on Christmas. He finally escaped this one as well and managed to ask a friendly Kittypet directions to the meadows. Penguin gave him abandonment issues. He also always stayed away from the clans, not wanting to have anything to do with...that. Oh, so that's how he got three different names! And I feel bad for him, being abandoned by his mate. That sucks. Losing his mother, too. Having a father take over the parental role is quite rare in Warriors, and OCs, but how was he fed, if his mother died giving birth? Also, you said he belonged to WindClan, but here it specifically says that he doesn't want anything to do with them.
Other: Absolutely loves snowbells, and those are the flowers on his ears! Aww, that's really cute.
I quite like Lilac! He's fairly well-rounded, except for a few areas, and has a good backstory and character design. He gets a 9/10. Thank you so much for submitting.
Bonus: What I think he looks like: (Just add a yellow eye, and a flower crown)
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