@A_Bored_Crow

Name: Ivytuft, Cool name! I like the suffix Tuft.

Past Names: Ivykit, Ivypaw. Cool.

Clan: Thunderclan.  Cool, a bit generic.

Past Clans: N/A. Okay.

Gender: Male (He/They). Cool.

Sexuality: Gay. Nice! Good for him

.Appearance: A calico (It's pretty rare for a tomcat to be a calico or tortie but let's say it's just a lucky chance) with yellow eyes and medium coat length, he's a bit rounded and has a shoulder scar. Unique! 

 Personality: He's well-meaning enough and certainly isn't dumb but he is an unremarkable cat. And they acknowledge that fact, often keeping his thoughts to himself, though isn't timid. They just think that their opinions and actions are not as important as others who are more unique than him. Maybe develop it a bit more? Just being unremarkable/boring is a bit, well, boring. 

 Mate: Smokey (Kittypet) Cool. Forbidden romance itself is a bit generic, but this cat isn't. So it evens out. 

Kits: A single tom named Ashkit/fang Cool.

 Other Family and Kin: Greenfang (Mother), Silvertree (Father), Nightgaze, Jaysong, Squirreltail, and Duskelm (All siblings) I like the names Duskelm and Silvertree.

Future Death: Old age Good for him! It's always nice to see a cat get to be an elder.

Rank: Warrior (At Death): Elder. Nice

 Past Ranks: Kit, Apprentice Cool! Good to see an OC that doesn't end up as a leader.

Good Traits: Well-meaning enough and has common sense, also decent at his job. Okay, maybe add a few more good traits? Curious? Quiet? Ect.

Bad Traits: A very unremarkable cat who keeps his thoughts to themselves, but just because he thinks he is not as important as other cats. Poor guy. Needs an ego boost! Does he have anything else to him? Maybe he is lazy, or clumsy? 

Hunting: 6/10

 Fighting: 5/10 

Swimming: 3/10 

Climbing: 2/10

 Leadership: 3/10 

Reputation: 5/10 

Well, he certainly isn't the most powerful cat! I think he needs more going for him.

Likes: Being alone, seeing Smokey, taking care of Ashkit, talking with his siblings and Rosevine. Cool, fair.

 Dislikes: Being in crowded places, being put into leadership roles, attention being put on him. Me too! 

 Scars: A long shoulder scar, along with smaller ones in different places, Alright.

Backstory: Ivytuft grew up well, nothing too bad or good, something one would expect of such a bland cat. They trained well along with their siblings and became a warrior along with them, but this is where it gets interesting. A few moons into his warrior life he met Smokey, a kittypet who they thought was remarkable. Smokey was outgoing and caring, though one couldn't tell whether he was brave or just thick-skulled, and he was occasionally stubborn. Ivytuft couldn't help but fall in love, but he was not ready to leave his clan. They kept visiting the kittypet in secret but it wasn't kept for long. Rosevine, a warrior who had not spent much attention to him before, found out about the two. But she kept their secret, as it turns out, she also had a secret mate, a rogue she-cat who doesn't wish to join a clan. Moons later, Smokey's twoleg adopted a tomkit, who was traditionally named Ashkit. To avoid suspicion earlier, Rosevine and Ivytuft had already become false mates, so the arrival of a kit was no surprise. Despite Ivytuft being hesitant to take the kit into the clan, Smokey encouraged him to, wanting Ashkit to be raised in a respectful life. (I haven't fleshed out the rest of their life yet) Interesting! May I just say that I am getting Onestar and Smoke vibes lol.

Themesong: Mr. Cellophane Cool! Good song.

Okay. Overall, he seems like an interesting cat, in the sense that his personality is unique. But the cat itself is kind of.... I don't mean to be rude, but he seems a tad bit boring. If his story was a bit more developed, I think I would love him, but at this point I am just kind of meh. He has a lot going for him, but yeah. I give him a 7.2/10 
Thank you for submitting! I am not trying to be rude! 

Also, bonus, this is what I think he would look like: