Name: FallowStar. Okay!

Past names: FallowKit, FallowPaw, FallowStorm. I like the name, Fallowstorm. It's nice.

Clan: SkyClan. SkyClan OC! I have a bit of a bias for SkyClan, but we're not gonna talk about that ;) 

Past Clans: none. Alright!

 Gender: Female. Nice!

Sexuality: straight. Not much to say here.

Appearance: She has ginger fur, and looks like a fox (pelt-wise) she has a bit of a build like a fox and huge ginger ear tufts on her ears. She has brown and purple eyes. Purple eyes? I don't think that's possible on a cat. Replacing brown with Hazel would also be a good choice, as that is the most similar to brown, that is cat accurate. Indigo, blue or violet-blue also works.

Personality: FallowStorm is a wise she-cat. She is usually antisocial and avoided talking when she could. She was also quite manipulative and married to being deputy. Okay, some more traits, good and bad, would be good!

Mate: none. Alright!

Kits: none. Cool. 

Other family and kin: her mother is named VolePad, a medium-sized, stocky she-cat. Her fur is night-black. It is ragged and short. She has a narrow face with narrow orange eyes. She has a reedy voice and a spicy scent. Volepad has long whiskers. She is considered average-looking by most, especially in other Clans. She is partially deaf. I like the name Volepad. 'Pad' is a nice suffix, it fits with pretty much everything. 

 And her father's name is RiverBelly, a medium-sized, skinny tom. His fur is a shaded fawn and golden. It is sleek and of medium length. He has an angular face with small yellow eyes. He has a fruity voice and a floral scent. Riverbelly has a twisted front leg. He is considered ugly by most, especially in other Clans. 'River' isn't technically a valid prefix, since it's also a Clan's prefix, but I'm guilty of using 'Sky' and 'Wind', so it doesn't really matter. Some writers chose to ignore that rule. 

She had littermates, PigeonSong, a small, scrawny she-cat. Her fur is dark cream. It is rough and of medium length. She has a narrow face with large light green eyes. She has a singsong voice and an overpowering scent. She has long whiskers. She is considered to have unusual looks by most, especially in her own Clan. The addition of describing her voice and scent is really unique! 

And MuddyHare is an average-sized, well-muscled she-cat. Her fur is brown and black. It is shaggy and long. She has a square face with small copper eyes. She has a deep voice and a salty scent. Again, voice and scent notes. Awesome!

Patchbelly has black claws. She is considered ugly by most, especially in her own Clan. She has asthma (from trying to save ThunderClan cats from a fire that was in TC camp.) Poor thing! 

Cause of death: When she became FallowStar, she died nine times. First, she was attacked by foxes and killed (how ironic, foxes) then, she fell off a cliff when being pursued by a badger, third, she died from blood loss after a battle with rouges, fourth, she was carried off by an eagle and slowly ripped apart, fifth she was attacked randomly by a rouge while on a walk, and brutally killed, sixth, she fell into a badger's den un-invited and was killed. Seventh, she ran into a pack of dogs while on patrol and saved a clanmate, dying. Eighth, she was arguing with her deputy when a rock fell came, she pushed the deputy out of the way and was crushed. Ninth, she died from old age, around the cats that loved her most. She never regretted a single thing. She goes to Starclan, but they say to her that she has unfinished business on earth and sent her back (though she never figured out what the unfinished business was) Those deaths are pretty brutal! Especially the fourth. And being sent back is cool, but if it doesn't seem to have a reason, it's a bit unnecessary. 

Rank (at death): Leader. Alright!

Past ranks: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Deputy, Leader. Nice.

Rank: StarClan Resident (in life it was Leader.) Cool!

Good traits: she was a wise she-cat that was devoted to being deputy, no matter what the cost. Alright, balanced. 

Bad traits: she was antisocial, and avoided talking when possible. She was stubborn and headstrong as well as manipulative. Okay! An antisocial deputy is a bit challenging because being a deputy requires quite a bit of socializing and talking, but that's fine.

Hunting: 5.5/10

Fighting: 7.6/10

Swimming: 2.3/10

Climbing: 4/10

Leadership Skills: 8.4/10

Reputation: 8/10

Balanced! 

Likes: bathing in the sun, aloneness, being right, climbing, and starling (a bird, just in case you didn't know.) Cute! 

Dislikes: too much social interaction, aching paws, smug cats, villains. Normal things to dislike.

Scars/injuries: she has tiny bite marks on her muzzle from rats (like a rat attack when at the gorge) If she died so many times and lived a long life, I would assume she'd have more scars. 

Backstory: as a kit FallowKit tried to be the smart and headstrong kit, but she failed miserably and it was usually her sister MuddyKit. (not much to say about kit hood)
Alright!

When FallowKit became FallowPaw, she was pretty overly confident and a bit of a bully to the other apprentices, except when the warriors came by she acted respectfully. But her mentor FluffyRipple, a fluffy white she-cat with yellow eyes, taught her better and FallowPaw became more respectful to the apprentices. When she was cleaning ticks from the elder's pelts, a rat attack came and FallowPaw fought bravely. But, she got scarred by the rats that had swarmed her muzzle, and her mother VolePad, hated her for it, although MuddyPaw, PigeonPaw and RiverBelly comforted her, she wasn't satisfied so she treated her mother with much disrespect and avoided her. 
Fluffyripple! I love that name. Does this take place in the time period after SkyClan was kicked out and found their new home, but before they disbanded? Why did Volepad hate her for it? It's just a small scar.

But when the rats came back, VolePad was killed in the process after FallowPaw and her mentor FluffyRipple killed the lead rat together. FallowPaw grieved all night, apologizing for her disrespect and eventually became the most respectful cat in the clan, even to cats that insulted her, as she became FallowStorm.As two moons passed, she got her first apprentice named NightPaw. But sadly, after a moon or two, NightPaw decided she wanted to be a medicine apprentice, and so she did. FallowStorm was disappointed, so her leader (CoconutStar) appointed her a new apprentice named LittlePaw. She trained LittlePaw well, and LittlePaw became LittleStone, and NightPaw became NightFeather. 5 moons after, she got another apprentice named RockPaw and she trained him harder than LittleStone, and he became an excellent warrior named RockRush. moons passed, and when the rats came back, the deputy (BoulderYowl) swiftly killed the new rat leader but died from infection after. And FallowStorm was named deputy, and eventually, she became the leader at 56 moons.
Can't say it's sad that Volepad died, just unfortunate. And wow, she had a lot of apprentices! 

Alright! Fallowstar is a pretty good OC! She's quite well-developed and has a good personality and a good backstory. She gets an 8.8/10!

Bonus: What I Think She Looks Like: