Name: Dawnglide. Cool! It's really nice to say. The suffix 'glide' is quite unique.

Past names: Dawnpaw, Dawnkit. Alright!

Clan: SunClan, a clan that pays attention to the sun and its blessings. They are made up of more out-of-this-world cats with a strong imaginations and mind. Okay! 

Past clans: n/a. Alright, a loyal cat.

Gender: she-cat. Cool.

Sexuality: tbd. A temporary one could have sufficed, even if you might change it later. It's not terribly hard to think of a simple one. 

Appearance: A mainly off-white cat with orange-red points in her fur, mainly the tips of her ear, paws, and tail. She has a medium-length coat and dusky-grey eyes that hold a lifetime's worth of ideas.  Okay! A few more details could be nice, but it's sufficient enough!

Personality: She is bright and academic, however, she tends to use heart over mind, falling into her fantasies and thoughts. When she hyper-focuses, she gets things done quickly. To the annoyance of her fellow warriors, she is too lost in her thoughts to do that more often.  Okay!

Mate: none currently. Maybe look a bit further into the future and decide whether she'll have a mate or not?

Kits: none currently. Same thing as above.

Other family/kin: Her two brothers, Whiteblaze and Cindersong, have similar grey eyes, flecked with fiery orange. Whiteblaze is pure white beside his left paw, where a small light-orange spot is found. Cindersong, looks more like his sister, taking the same off-white color and has a variety of orange points. He (Cindersong) has an orange mask and faint stripes across his back leading up to his tail which matches his mask. He has an especially fluffy tail, making it harder for him to hunt. What about her mother and father? 

Death: Possibly either by clan-wide sickness such as greencough/whitecough/ etc. Okay. A bit generic, but if it is written and explained well/ is very tragic/heroic, and serves a purpose, it can be fine. 

Final rank: senior warrior or elder. Okay.

Past rank(s): Kit, apprentice. Alright.

Good traits: She tends to be outside of the box, thinking up unusual situations that both get her in and out of harm's way. She pays careful attention even when many cats think she's drifting off to her imaginary dreamscape. If she drifts off often, I would imagine her attention span wouldn't be very good, prohibiting her to pay careful attention to much. 

Bad traits: When she thinks out of the box, she gets herself in dangerous conditions which she only has her stealth and mind to help her in. She also has trouble communicating her point and views on topics/in discussions. Okay.

Hunting: 9/10, stealth-related and quick

Fighting: 4/10, under average, takes a lot of both mental and physical strength

Swimming: 0/10, not near rivers, never been taught 

Climbing: 7/10, not afraid of heights, a way to see the land from a new point of view

leadership skills: 5/10, depending on the situation. She can be helpful in the short-term, in-the-moment types of events but not long-term, because of her lack of ability to communicate her point.

Reputation: 7/10, respected but odd

With swimming, a 0/10 isn't the best. Like, even a toddler can scribble on paper and technically call it a drawing. You can burn your toast, but you were still cooking. Nobody is ever really a 0/10, just like nobody is ever a 10/10. A .5 or 1 might be better. 

Likes: Fantasies, flowers, colors, smaller things in life. Okay! Normal things to like.

Dislikes: loud sounds, dullness. Cool.

scars/injuries: n/a. If she lived to be an elder, it's inevitable that she'd have a few scars, visible or non-visible.

other: I think I've covered all that I need :> What about the backstory? That's one of the most important parts. 

Overall, Dawnglide is missing quite a bit. Most importantly, her backstory. For now, I'm going to have to give her a 5.8/10. Thank you so much for submitting!

Bonus: What I think she looks like: