Name: Daffodilkit. Okay, cool. Did they die as a kit, or is that just how far their story has gone?

Past names: Daffodil. Okay, former loner/rogue I assume? 

Clan: ShadowClan. Okay.

Past Clans: None; it's a rogue kitten. Alright. You could have added 'Rogue/loner/Kittypet' to the list. And they're no longer a rogue if they joined a Clan.  

Gender: demi gender male. Alright! 

Sexuality: why are you asking a BABY that? Uh... I didn't know anyone was submitting a kit. You can add future sexuality, or hypothetical sexuality too, you know. 

Appearance: slender, lilac-point ragdoll kitten with almond-shaped, cloudy (%15 of vision lost/damaged), blue eyes and ashy paw-pads and nose. They have a large, plumy tail that weighs him down. Okay! What caused their vision loss? Other than that, pretty detailed! Except, how did he get the name Daphodil? They're not yellow, have no yellow or ginger on them anywhere, etc. It doesn't match very well. 

Personality: he's a down-to-earth, sardonic kit with little-to-no manners.  A neat kit but, a rude one is what most call them. This kit is highly intelligent though and makes up for its rudeness by its intelligence and sharp hearing, though his eyesight is more cloudy. Okay. A highly intelligent kit is rare, but not unheard of. I don't see 'down-to-earth' used as a trait often! Pretty balanced, overall. 

Mate: None; he's a kit but he might be picking up interest on a fellow denmate, Spirekit. Okay. Again, did they die as a kit, or is that just as far as his character went?

Kits: in the future maybe. Okay, so not dead. 

Other family n' kin: Slatefrost(mother)-a tall, lilac point she with hazel-blue eyes who is a former rogue. Flake(father)-a black and white tom with amber eyes. Magpiekit(sister)-a small, black and white patched she-kit with amber eyes Morningkit(non-binary sibling)-seal colorpoint-tortie ragdoll with blue eyes that reflect red(this is a gene in colorpoint-torties) Okay! I like their appearance. I like the addition of Morningkit's eye gene, I've never heard of it! 

Future death: prey poisoning-went into a coma for a moon or two after the poisoning before being confirmed dead and buried. Who would poison a fellow Clanmate? Why? And if the prey was naturally sick or ate a toxic herb before being caught, wouldn't they have smelled it?

Rank(at death): elder. Wait... If they got to be an elder, where's their Warrior name? Apprentice name? Sure, they might be a kit now, but look ahead. 

Past ranks: rogue, kit, apprentice, warrior, senior warrior. Okay. Again, names. 

Good traits: neat, sharp hearing, intelligent, high memory. Okay

Bad traits: sarcastic, cloudy eyesight dishonest, disobedient. Alright

Hunting: 4/10

Fighting: 7/10

Swimming: 2/10 

Climbing: 7/10

Leadership skills; 4/10

Reputation: 5.5/10

Pretty balanced!

Likes: voles, sun-bathing, teasing. Normal things to like, besides teasing, but that's fine. Maybe adding a mischievous or mischievous trait would be good? 

Dislikes: rainy days, spiders, loud noises, bright lights. Cool.

Scars/injuries: other than his eyes which got damaged I think a nicked ear and scars on his right hindleg are his only injuries/scars. How did their eyes get damaged? 

Backstory: Morning, Magpie, and himself were born as rogues in a small, abandoned fox den at Shadowclan territory. Shortly after birth, their father would leave them in search of new territory as he thought ShadowClan land would be too dangerous for them but he never came back. This became a struggle for their mother, Slate who can't look out for the three while hunting for them too. She'd eventually decide to move to ShadowClan, beckoning two of her kits while holding the other in her mouth she'd make a trip to ShadowClan and beg them to let her stay along with her kits. They'd soon move in and Daffodil would slowly adjust to life at Shadowclan.
Alright, cool. Good so far. 

 He and his siblings were the only kits there currently besides Pinestalk,(dark brown mackerel she with warm amber eyes)a pregnant nursery queen who would be giving birth to kits soon. He'd always get under the paws of his clanmates making him a bit disliked out of his littermates but it wasn't thought about much by himself. Pinestalk would soon give birth to a litter of 5 kittens-(yes five kitten litters are a thing, I know for a fact because I work around cats.1 Siamese and 2 tabbies. the siamese had 5 kittens in one litter and 3 in another)-and would name them Meadowkit, Spirekit,(sounds familiar?)Fallowkit, Applekit, and Hollowkit. (i will say their appearances/descriptions later)
Five kits are possible, my Siamese cat had six kits twice in two different litters, but both five and six are unlikely, especially for wild cats. She was an inside and well-fed feline. The possible shortages of food, general weight/food intake and lack of veterinary care for the mother, kit mortality rates etc would usually end in one or two stillborn kits, a smaller number of kits that is realistic for the mother to be able to feed, kits that passed away before their apprenticeship. I'm not saying it's impossible or 'wrong', but just unlikely. Sorry about the ramble! 

Overexcitedly, Daffodil and his siblings were always bouncing around the new litter of kits, asking when they could play with them and it was usually 'no'. Half a moon passed by and the former rogue kits were allowed to play with Pinestalk's litter. Morningkit taught the kits about the locations in camp and about themself while Magpiekit and Daffodilkit would start ranting about the history of the clan and how to play games like mossball. Daffodil eventually grew an affectionate liking for Spirekit but would never say. He and his siblings were always playing without Pinestalk's kits late at night when they were supposed to be asleep, making their mother angry. //ok that's all I have, I mean what do you expect when this is basically a backstory of a 3-moon kit? Nothing! 

Alright... So, they got to the age of an elder. Where's the rest of their story? I know they're a kit now, but again, think ahead. Why even bother making them evolve past a kit if they have no name or future backstory? They're lacking a lot and are quite confusing. 

Pinestalk's mate is Pasturesky who is a cream-gold-coloured tom with white patches and hazel eyes so don't get confused if some of the kits are cream or golden/amber/yellow in colour. Okay.

Meadowkit is a very pale cream she with a white, imperfect heart on her chest and amber-gold eyes. Alright.

Spirekit is a long-haired very pale cream kit with the tips of its fur a darker colour and a darker coloured imperfect heart on its left paw and sharp, green eyes. Cool!

Fallowkit is a fawn-coloured she-cat with slightly darker splotches and face markings with large, doe-like amber eyes. Sounds like a pretty cat.

Applekit is an almost white tom with cryptic, chocolate and ginger tortie markings and green eyes. Nice.

Hollowkit is a dark brown tabby with white patches of fur on its chest, paws, muzzle, and belly and with amber eyes. Alright!

Overall, Daphodilkit is missing quite a bit. Their backstory was short and did not describe their older life at all, which is quite important, considering they live to be an elder. Daphodilkit definitely needs quite a bit of work, but they have a good start! So sorry this took so long, and thank you for submitting! 

Bonus: What I think they would look like: