Curlcreek
Name: CurlCreek. I love her name! It's really cute. I have a soft spot for the suffix 'Creek' because I have an OC, Withercreek, with it.
Past Names: Curlkit, Curlpaw. Okay.
Clan: CoveClan, A very soft and sweet clan once very different. They were very bloodthirsty and bold, they wanted the territory around the clan for themselves, so one by one they tried to take down the other clans but found a cat from CoveClan who told the other clans what Coveclan was planning and so the other clans formed an alliance to take down Coveclan and so they did. it was a bloody battle and Coveclan ended up with 7 cats left and those 7 cats got separated into the other clans. For moons, Coveclan did not exist and the other clans groomed the remaining cats to be sweet and gentle so this would not happen again but after 200 moons some cats got sent out to restart CoveClan. Alright! Really cool! But after 200 moons, the concentration of cats with CoveClan blood would be very, very thin. Something like 80-100 moons might be better.
Gender: she-cat. Alright.
Sexuality: Bisexual. Cool!
Appearance: A short-haired cat, with deep blue eyes scattered with flecks of green. She has white dapples fading as they get closer to her neck, She has only a small stub as a tail due to an accident that happened when she was a kit, and her whiskers are bent and twisted. What colour is the rest of her pelt under the white dapples? Gray, brown, etc.
Personality: An outgoing and emotional cat. She can be easily hurt and unforgiving but is very courageous and loves to do whatever she can. To stop her grieving she will bury herself in work to stop herself from thinking. What does she have to grieve so strongly about? Did she lose an important family member or kin or friend? Other than that, cool!
Mate: Riverroar (I haven't figured out his coat colours yet) He is very cold and he worries a lot. He lets his guard down around Curlcreek. Aww, that's cute.
Kits: none yet. Will she have any in the future?
Kin: Stormwillow (mother) short-haired white she-cat with green eyes and a black spot on her flank. Okay.
—JaggedFang (father) Black and gray tabby tom with amber eyes and a very pink nose. Alright, cool.
Birdkit(sister) is plain brown with a white paw and a blind eye. Did she die young? If so, of what? Was the blindness genetic, or from an accident?
DeepSpeck(brother) is a big white tom with deep amber eyes and black paws. Alright.
Future- death: Poisoned. Who, or what poisoned her?
Good traits: cheery and helpful she is ready to do whatever it takes to help her clan. Alright, could use a few things.
Bad traits: she is very emotional and will grieve for too long. She hates when other cats are in pain so she will lose all ability to work and concentrate. She has a very short attention span and that causes her some issues. She holds on to cats for too long and hates getting out of her Comfort zone. Her grieving period is too long and it's hard for her to recover. On the rare occasion, she can be very impulsive and aggressive depending on the situation. I feel like she could be a medicine cat, due to the fact that she hates when cats are in pain and is emotional. But warrior works too! Overall needs more balance with good traits.
Hunting:7/10
Fighting: 5/10
Swimming: 8/10
Climbing: 2/10
Leadership skills: 5/10
Reputation: 7/10
Okay, balanced!
Likes: sitting in her den on rainy days with her mate and watching the rain fall on the lake. She loves to eat fish and birds. She loves clouds and swimming when the water is a bit warm. At night is the only time she hopes the clouds are gone so she can see the stars. Cute!
Dislikes: she does not like hot weather and snow(she hates snow).she she also does not like mouse because it is too small and boney for her taste. She hates being underground because it makes her feel stuck and enclosed. Alright, maybe she's claustrophobic?
Scars/Injuries: Missing tail, when she was a kit she and her brother and other kits were playing by the rock wall that is behind the nursery. As they bounced around a rock loosened and crushed Curlkits tail soon falling off leaving her with a small stub(sorry it was not more interesting) Poor thing! I've got an OC with a missing tail, Hopepaw/wilt. She lost her tail in an avalanche. But tails don't usually fall off; she would likely die of an infection growing in the bone or flesh before it did. Amputation would be pretty much the only option unless the act of the rock falling completely amputated it immediately.
And now for the backstory: (this is not even most of the story, I'm still figuring most of it out) Born in the new Coveclan nursery on a clear night along with her big brother (born first), her sister (born second) and she was born last. Her apprenticeship was difficult due to her sister dying in a fox attack. That's okay, but you could have waited until her backstory was more well-developed, then submitted it. From here, it looks good! And poor Birdkit.
Overall, Curlcreek is pretty solid! She could use a bit more development in a couple of areas, but for now, she's pretty good. 7.8/10! Thank you so much for submitting! And Happy Birthday!
Bonus: What I think she looks like: (This was the closest I could find, due to the fact that I'm not sure what her pelt colour is under the dapples)
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