Name: Cottontail. Cool! Reminds me of Cottontail rabbit from Peter Rabbit. 

Past Names: Cottonkit/Cottonpaw/Cotton. I assume she was a rogue at some point?

Clan: Dawnclan. Cool. I love FanClans.

Past Clan: N/A. Alright.

Gender: Female. Cool!

 Sexuality: Straight. Good for her. 

Appearance: A beige she-cat, with light-brown/white soft, multicolored fur, white paws, and light-blue eyes. She has long, hazel-ears and a large, fluffy tail with flower petals and daisies embedded into them. Sounds like a very pretty cat! I can imagine her easily. 

Personality: Cottontail is a tender, and rather shy she-cat with a playful side to her. She can be stubborn and resistant. Her name fits her personality. 

 Mate: N/A. Independant lady, love to see it.

Kits: N/A. Cool 

Other Family/Kin: {deceased} What were the names of her family? 

 Cause of Future death/: Being chased by a dog, she slips in a lake and drowns to her end. She could have survived but her large tail sagged her down. Interesting! A unique death.

Rank: Warrior Past Ranks: App/kit/rouge. Cool, so she was a rogue. What drove her to be one?

Good Traits: Playful, dependable, loyal. Cool, but she could use one or two more.

 Bad Traits: Stubborn, antisocial, lazy. Alright, balanced, not a Mary sue.

Hunting: 7/10 

Fighting: 6/10 

Swimming: 1/10

 Climbing: 7/10 

Leadership Skills: 6/10

Pretty balanced, but you forgot reputation.

Likes: Selfless/kind ppl, picking flowers, dawn patrols, watching horizon, talking with a friend. Good things to like!

 Dislikes: Arrogant ppl, cocky ppl, murky water, sicknesses. I don't know if anyone likes those lol. Cool.

Scars/Injuries: She has a nick in one of her feathery ears. Not perfect! That's a problem that I see with a lot of OCs, that they are unmarked, uninjured and seemingly invincible. So it's good to see variety.

Other: N/A. Cool

Backstory- Cottontail was born into the Clan, after the leader, "Frondstar," gave birth to her before dying from blood loss. Most of the Clan members looked down on her for 'killing' their leader, and she was mainly a social outcast. Cottontail also had trouble when making friends. She was backstabbed multiple times, which led to her sensitivity and trust issues. It's a bit lacking, but is a good base. You have explained lots of other parts so it kind of ties in.

Okay. So I really like this OC! She is balanced, quite interesting and seems well thought through. Her backstory is a but lacking, I would love to see how she got to be a rogue and who her family is/was. Overall, I like her. 8.5/10 

Bonus: This is kind of what I think she would look like. (Add flowers on tail, more color and darker ears and it would match)