Name: Bloomflower Past names: Bloomkit,Bloompaw. Cool! I have a cat called Bloomfeather in Spottedsound's Survival.

Clan: WindClan. Nice.

Past Clan: None. Good, loyal cat. Nice.

Gender: She-cat. Cool.

Sexuality: Pansexual. Cool, good for her!

Appearance: Long-legged dark ginger she-cat with green eyes. Maybe some more details? Her fur length, scars, maybe some smaller markings, the size of her ears and tail, etc. Also, funny that she is a ginger cat with green eyes, Bloomfeather is too! Well, cream, but close enough

Personality: Enthusiastic, Short-tempered, Curious. Some more traits would be good. Complexity is key!

Mate: None. Cool.

Kits: None. Nice.

Kin: Roseshine ( mother) dark ginger she-cat with green eyes. Flamestripe ( father) light ginger tabby tom with green eyes. Brightpetal ( sister) ginger and white tabby she-cat with green eyes. Blazestorm. ( brother) dark ginger tom with green eyes. Petalstep ( niece) ginger and white tabby she-cat with green eyes. Gingerflower ( niece ) dark ginger she-cat with green eyes. Tulipnose (niece) tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with blue eyes. Ravenflight ( nephew ). Black tom with a white chest, and amber eyes. Crowtalon ( nephew ) small black tom with amber eyes. Bloomfeather's mom was named Rosefeather. Lots of similarities! Besides that, I like the names and all of the kin. 

 Cause of death: Greencough. Poor thing.

Rank: Elder. Good that she lived to be elder!

Past ranks: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Medicine cat apprentice, Medicine cat. Oh, so she's a med cat. Makes sense, all lines up with the no kits or mate thing.

Good traits: Clever, Curious, Enthusiastic. As I said before, maybe a few more? 

Bad traits: Stubborn, Indecisive, Short-tempered. Again, flesh it out a bit.

Hunting: 4/10

Fighting: 5/10

Swimming: 2/10

Climbing: 2/10

Leadership skills: 4/10

Reputation: 6.5/10

Seems pretty normal! But if she was medicine cat, the third in command over the Clan, I would think her reputation would be higher.

Likes: Eating, Running, Going on walks, Making friends, The smell of herbs. Nice.

Dislikes: Climbing, Swimming, Getting wet, Being alone, Fire, The smell of smoke. Pretty normal.

Scars: Scar on her shoulder, received by a ShadowClan warrior during battle. It's good to see cats, especially medicine cats, have flaws.

Backstory: Bloomflower lived a pretty ordinary life. She was born to Roseshine and Flamestripe, alongside her littermates Brightpetal and Blaestorm. She liked listening to the elder's stories and formed a close bond with Owlwing, and elderly tabby she-cat with amber eyes. She was also close friends with Berrykit ( shine) and enjoyed playing games with him, such as racing, play-fighting, prey-and-hunter, mossball, clans, and other various games. When Bloompaw was apprenticed she received Dawncloud as a mentor. Bloompaw wasn't very good at hunting or fighting, and dreamed of becoming a medicine cat. But Flowerpaw was already the medicine cat apprentice, so that didn't work out. She continued her training, but she wasn't very good at it, although she tried her hardest. Berrypaw noticed this and offered to help her with her training, to which Bloompaw accepted the offer. She eventually became a warrior, although she still wasn't the best at it, and planned to become mates with Berrypaw, who was now Berryshine. Then Flowerpaw, who was previously the medicine cat apprentice, decided to become a warrior since she was having trouble connecting to StarClan and found it difficult remembering herbs. Bloomflower, who was previously Bloompaw, was tempted to take up the role of medicine cat, as she knew she had a talent in healing, but she didn't want to give up Berryshine as her mate. She eventually talked it through with him and decided to become the new medicine cat apprentice of WindClan. You said "More in replies" but it's been a week and none have some, so I will work from here, and if you add more, I will rate the backstory again. I like the addition of her being friends with the elder, and her enjoying games. It's unusual for a cat to become a warrior, then switch professions, but it can happen. Since there is probably more missing, I will leave it at that.

So! I liked this OC quite a bit. But she just needs some more fleshing out, maybe some more definitive  struggles and, I don't know how to word it, but more unique? (For lack of a better word) Something to make her stand out. Thanks for submitting, and feel free to submit more! 

Bonus: What I think she would look like in real life: