Reading My Old Justin Bieber Fanfic (chapters 2-4)

Hey I'm back! This time, I'm gonna do 3 chapters, and hopefully it doesn't make me wanna die.

Chapter 2: Talking To Justin Just Got Weirder

I can deal with the first half of this. It's not too bad.

But then Justin says "don't yell, you'll attract attention." I'm just?? Are you TRYING to be hella creepy, dude?

Also, Kaitlyn says "yep" and it's hard for me to imagine an angry person saying that lmao

Natalie is over here being the concerned friend because she thought Kaitlyn had just now gotten the sex talk 😂😂

Okay, let me address this: I don't think 12-year-old me was homophobic. I didn't have any reason to be, so I don't think that's what I was trying to get across when Kaitlyn replies "ew" to "it is a guy, right?" I think that was just my way of letting you know that she's straight. I just did a poor job of it. I'm sorry.

"......Yes."
"Is it......Trevor?"
GIRL WHY ARE THERE SO MANY PERIODS??

Also, how much do y'all wanna bet that Trevor is never mentioned in this book again?

This chapter would've been a whole lot shorter if she'd just told Kiara before school, and she went ahead and told Natalie.

More unnecessary periods ugh

"Just wear what you have on." I can't decide if that sounds creepy or not.

I don't think he'd ask you on a date if he was actually gay lmao

Oh god, I think the next chapter is the date.

Chapter 3: Before My Date With Justin

Oh, I guess the date is probably the next chapter?

Wow, this first paragraph alone is a lot. Ethan is a moron.

Also, "was he dropped on his head as a baby or something?" did make me laugh.

Okay, if this story was about Justin and Ethan, that would be so much more interesting.

"But first I check the chat rooms." I... were chat rooms even a thing still when I wrote this? What am I referring to? 😂

Oh. This... this is something I actually typed with my own two hands. I actually want to rinse my eyes out.

Haven't you ever heard of closing the goddamn door? How did you fall asleep so quickly? You should definitely snitch to your parents.

Oh god, I don't want to read this anymore, but y'all are here for quality ~content~ so I'll try to continue.

Okay, Ethan is creepy. Get a girlfriend or something, quit going in your sister's room!

Chapter 4: My Date With Justin

YOU GUYS WERE GOING TO THE DINER! IT'S ONLY BEEN A FEW HOURS, HOW DID YOU BOTH FORGET??

Why couldn't y'all just share a car? There's no reason they'd have to get 2 lol

It's just a big block of text + an information dump.

Also, how the heck do you miss pulling up to an amusement park?

I'm pretty sure there are various things in this story I pulled from random Quizilla stories. I think an amusement park date is one of them.

We went from a very vaguely written date to Justin being creepy by bringing Kaitlyn to his house and demanding she get on the bed.

YOU'RE NOT A TRUE JUSTIN BIEBER FAN UNLESS YOU WERE THERE FOR "ONE TIME" AND "ONE LESS LONELY GIRL" DON'T @ ME

How do you love him?? You barely know him??

One of the things about this story is that Kaitlyn wrote a lot of Justin's songs, but nobody really knows.

YOU LITERALLY NEVER HUNG OUT WITH HIM AS A KID; ONLY ETHAN DID, YOU JUST WENT UPSTAIRS AND IGNORED HIM.

THAT MAKES NO SENSE

Honestly, the best part of this is her realizing she didn't do her homework, then just not caring because she doesn't need that negativity in her life.

I fucking ended this chapter with "This is going to be a great day!" 😂 I either don't write anything else about this day OR it's not a good day at all.

Finally: according to that A/N at the bottom, I came up with a new date idea, but didn't bother editing the previous chapter.

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Okay, there are still more chapters, and I think Kaitlyn is done thinking Justin is gay, so if you want me to keep going, let me know! I remember something in this book that I took from another random Quizilla book, so tell me if you want to see more stolen ideas! 😂

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