What can I say? I honestly did not expect these two poems.

I thought they were both very, very good!

FairyTaleFreak, wow, your poem had style. It was so nicely written--your use of words and flow was brilliant. It was a most enjoyable poem. You definitely slotted this poem into the paranormal genre!

AvisInlking, this poem was probably one of the best I have read in a while, writing paranormal can either make you or break you...and writing it in a poem is hard. You did it effortlessly. Amazing style, amazing words, and the imagery...perfect.

I had to read these poems three times to make up my mind about who the winner is. Even though it was super close, I give the winner a perfect 10 and the second place winner a 9.5.

And...the winner is........

AvisInlking!

You two are super talented, keep up the great work! :)

AvisInlking, don't forget to pick one of your poems for me to critique. I will also be commenting/voting on your poem and give a shout-out on my wall.