(Note: These quotes are not copied word to word. I just distinctly remember them, and I don't have my copies of the books at the moment.)

Bree in TLOS 3: "never raised her voice for anything, never seemed to let anything affect her, very cool and calm"

Bree in TLOS 4: *screamed when shown a skeleton of a fairy*

Bree in TLOS 5: *stammered when the Masked Man intergoratted her* Her resistance against the Masked Man, if any, was not shown. (This is literally why I wrote Resist, to give Bree some decent developement.)

Bree in TLOS 6: *when realizing something, gasped so loudly that people around her jumped*

Umm Chris, if you're going to write about Bree, make sure her character is consistent, okay? I don't want her to be downgraded from a calm and cool person to a random sidekick who says a few lines. Or worse, to just Conner's girlfriend. She has a personality!