WRITING PRACTICE 1 - PART ONE
Did you read the title of the chapter? Good. Now I don't need to explain my self to you.
Actually, I still have to. *sigh*
So, I'm planning on writing two stories.
One ORIGINAL I'm not going to post online and one I am going to post online.
And I wanted to get a little practice before then. And I've already asked one of my friends for a 'plot fit for a oneshot'.
And because of how freaking OCD and boring I am, this is going to be separated into two parts.
So ladies and gentlemen, I present to you...
WRITING ATTEMPT 1 - PART ONE
by Crazycruise
The "I'm too lazy to come up with names so you got this."
G/N - Girl Name
B/N - Boy Name
B/F - Best Friend
F/C - Favorite Chracter
F/A - Favorite Animal
F/R - Favorite Restaurant
F/N - Friend Name
"Are you really going to do it?"
"Of course I am! Why would you even ask that?"
"I mean, whenever you talk to him you stutter and run away and-"
"Okay, okay! I know that, but this time I really will do it."
"Well then, good luck. I've gotta get to get to class. See you."
I've liked B/N since last year, and I decided I'm going to confess.
Though B/F worries that I might back out since... well...
•FLASHBACK•
"Hey G/N!" He says.
"H-H-Hi! H-H-How are you?" I blush.
"I'm fine. I just wanted to ask about the project, when is it-" He tries to ask.
"I-I-I-" I run away.
"Huh?"
•FLASHBACK END•
And it happens everytime he talks to me.
But this time, I really really really will do it.
I get a text from B/F saying that she already told him to meet me at the park.
Hopefully it goes well.
•TIMESKIP TO END OF THE SCHOOL DAY•
Alright! To the park.
I see B/N sitting on a bench.
"B-B/N!"
"Hi! B/F said you wanted to talk to me. What's up?"
"I-I... I-I..."
"Hmmm?"
"I-I-I like you!"
"..."
I blush.
"G/N... I like you too!"
"Really..?"
"Yeah! I really care about you like a little sister!"
I felt like time just stopped.
I was shocked and confused at the same time.
"W-W-What...?"
"I like you as I sister." He smiles.
"I-I..." I start to get teary eyed.
After a few second of silence, I run away crying back home.
"Did I say something?" I hear him say from afar.
•TIMESKIP BACK HOME•
"HE WHAAA!?"
"H-H-He d-d-did..."
"That guy is going to get a piece of my mind! I swear I will-"
"N-No! It's okay. I-I'll get over it."
"G/N... You know what? We're going to the mall tomorrow to cheer you up whether you like it or not!"
"B/F, wait! I-"
"No excuses. I'll be at the mall tomorrow by three o'clock. It's a weekend after all."
"B/F..."
She hangs up. Well, I guess I'm going to the mall tomorrow.
Who knows? Maybe it will cheer me up.
I guess I'll just go to sleep.
•TIMESKIP TO TOMORROW•
Ring
Ring
Ring
I turn off my alarm clock.
Ring
Ring
Ring
What? It's still ringing... Is it broken?
I check again and it was just B/F calling.
I pick up.
"Hello..?"
"Are you ready?"
"Ready with what?"
"Oh my... For our mall day, of course!"
"Mall day...?"
"Don't tell me you forgot. I said we'd go on a mall day to cheer you up!"
"Oh right! That!"
"Do... Do you even know what time it is..?"
I checked the clock.
2:00
"IT'S ALREADY TWO! I'm so so sorry! I'll be there in an hour."
"Be quick, I'm really exited!"
"Alright, alright. See you."
I hang up. I guess I gotta get ready.
•TIMESKIP TO THE MALL•
"G/N! You're finally here!"
"Yeah.. I'm here."
"G/N? Are you still upset about yesterday?"
"I-I..."
"You know what? I'm going to give you the best mall day ever! So amazing you won't even remember his name!"
"O-okay..?"
She then drags me to... somewhere.
And that somewhere is the arcade. Yay!..?
I wanted to play the crane first, but B/F wanted to play something else.
So we decided to split off and meet at the prize booth at three thirty.
I have half an hour to spend, so I might as well get started.
I went to look at the cranes. Nothing really interested me.
I got to the other side and saw a F/C keychain.
After that I instantly went mental. I NEED THAT KEYCHAIN!
I instantly took out my tokens and inserted them in the crane.
I tried getting the keychain.
First attempt, nothing.
Second attempt, nothing.
Third attempt, nothing.
•TIMESKIP TO THE LAST ATTEMPT•
This is it! This is my last token! It's win it or lose it!
I move the claw and....
Nothing.
I felt upset. I really wanted it.
"Need help?" I hear someone say behind me.
I looked back and saw..
"B-B-B/N?" I blush.
"What do you want? I'll get it for you." He smiles.
"I-I-I..." I point to the keychain.
He goes in front of the crane, inserts a token and...
He got it. He really got it.
"Here." He said as he gave it to me with a smile.
"T-T-Thanks..." I said with a blush as I got the keychain.
"So... Are you out here with someone?" He asks.
"Y-yeah. I'm here with B/F for a mall day." I answer.
"That's nice. Do you mind I come along? I-" He tries to ask.
"B/N!?" B/F cuts him off.
"Let's go, G/N." She says as she walks up to me and drags me away from B/N.
We go to the prize booth. She got a F/A plush.
"WHY WERE YOU WITH B/F!? DIDN'T I TELL YOU WE WERE HERE TO GET YOUR MIND OFF HIM!?"
"I know, I know... But..."
"BUT WHAT!?"
"He got me this keychain from the crane." I say as I show her the keychain.
"That's not the point. I told you that- You know what? Let's just go."
"O-okay... Why are we going next?"
"We're going to F/R!"
"Really!?"
"Yup! I knew it was your favorite. But since it's really full on weekends, I got us a reservation just in case."
"You are the best!"
"I know right?" She said. We both laughed.
•TIMESKIP TO F/A•
We sat down on our table.
"I'll have a *insert food* and *insert drink*" B/F says.
"And I'll have a F/F and F/D." I say.
The waitress took our order and went off.
"So how is our day so far?" She asked.
"Really good! Especially since my best friend got a reservation at my favorite restaurant!"
"And who is that best friend..?"
"Hmmm... F/N!"
She pouts and stares at me.
"Just kidding! It's B/F!"
"Yay!"
We laugh.
This is going to be a fun day.
TO BE CONTINUED...
So that's it for the first part of this oneshot! I'm welcome to any suggestions or improvement.
So please correct me if I make any spelling or grammar mistake and you can also give tips on writing.
Cause I'm pretty sure my writing is boring and terrible af.
Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed and SAYONARA!
Edit:
I'm not gonna continue this because,
1. I don't really know how I can continue this.
2. There's no way to continue the cliffhanger.
3. I have no sense of imagination.
4. I'm terrible.
So yeah. Bye.
PS: Just kidding! I'm just lazy.
I'm probably just gonna make another oneshot different from this.
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