8/12/13

Charcters are from my storys.

Character 1: Rovex - from Gohan da strongest

Character 2:  Zane - from Rings of  Honey Glue

Scene: in the lunch room.

Rovex looks around for a quiet spot and sits down

R1: Shes a demon...atleast i can get break.

Zane sits down at a random table with two plates overstuffed with food. Adjacent to Rovex.

Z2:  hm. hm.hm. My favorite time of day *grinning happily.*

Rovex slowly eats his meal until food flies at him.

R1: What tha hell...who did that? *looks around then see Zane eating like a savage*

Z2: hm? *stops with his mouth stuffed when he feels someone staring at him*

Zane gulps it down.

Z2: Is there something on my face? *he stared curiously*

R1: Its nothing.  *He looked away quickly and continued eating*

Zane finished his plates a few minutes later.

Z2: That did it! I guess i'll go train soon.

Rovex scanned Zane quickly and easily noticed he wasn't saiyan but a alien

R1: Hey, kid

Z2: Yeah?

R1: I know I seen your planet somewhere....

Z2:  What are you? I never seen anyone like you..

There was a ackward silent.

Z2: where are you from?

R1: My home planet is long gone... *He sighed*

Z2: .....sry I didnt know.

R1: Its fine. I cant afford to dwell on it...

Z2: Im from The Tchet Clan, not sure what a planet is...

R1: You live on a backwater planet, your civilization isn't as advanced as our.

Z2: You know some advanced words...

R1: Im smarter than some of my kind *says proudly*

Z2: Really?

A angry female voice comes over Rovex's scouter.

R1: Sir!?! Yes Sir..COMING! *He became scared cause his Team Leader overheard him.*

Z2: huh?

R1: Slave driver...* He mumbles*

Z2: Are you going?

R1: Yes, I m busy *sighs*

Z2: My names Zane *says woth a smile*

R1: huh? Im...Rovex. I dont have time to chitchat my leader gets quite testy when irritated.

Z2: ....ok, well seeya later!

Rovex dashes-off quickly.

Zane heads back home.

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I am practicing writing conversations more. Tell me any way I can improve this