Story Excerpt

The girl sat herself down on the small black chair. She took a deep breath, then, with her eyes shut, lightly pressed the piano keys with her small fingers. A beautiful melody rung into her ears, craving a smile on the girl's face. A wave of calm overcame her as she began to forget about all of her surroundings. In her mind, the audience was no longer there. It was just her and the piano, alone in a room. There was no reason to be afraid. There was no reason to stop playing, to hesitate, to think about the idea of several eyes upon her.

As she pressed the final keys, a feeling of satisfaction came to her. The figures that were still before now stood up and acclaimed her performance with great applause. Blushing, the girl meekly bowed, but deep inside, she was glad to have been upon the stage after all.

Is this good? I need more improvement on my writing, and so I decided to write a little excerpt to give you a little glimpse of my writing skills. If you know a way on how to improve my writing, let me know!

Not that I'm impatient to write really good, but so far I keep rushing things in my stories.....(can never make things take a long time to come around no matter what, dunno why)

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