I saw an Instagram post and decided to do the entire song-

This is an edit for the song "Lullaby for a Princess" and I changed the lyrics to fit Dream and Nightmare. I just want to see if there is anything I could change

Here we go-

Fate has been cruel and order unkind

How can I have blocked you away?

The blame was my own; the punishment, yours

The harmony's silent today

But into the stillness I'll bring you a song

And I will your company keep

Till your tired eyes and my lullabies

Have carried you softly to sleep

Once did a monster who shone like the sun

Look out on his kingdom and sigh

He smiled and said, "Surely, there is no monster

So lovely and so well beloved as I"

So great was his reign and so brilliant his glory

That long was the shadow he cast

Which fell dark upon the young brother he loved

And grew only darker as days and nights passed

Soon did that monster take notice that others

Did not give his brother his due

And neither had he loved him as he deserved

He watched as his brother's unhappiness grew

But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly

Takes hold of the mind of its host

And that foolish monster did nothing to stop

The destruction of one who had needed her most

Lullay dark prince, goodnight brother mine

And rest now in moonlight's embrace

Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth

Through cloud, and through sky, and through space

Carry the peace and the coolness of night

And carry my sorrow in kind

Nightmare, you're loved so much more than you know

May troubles be far from your mind

And forgive me for being so blind

The years now before us

Fearful and unknown

I never imagined

I'd face them on my own

May these thousand winters

Swiftly pass, I pray

I love you; I miss you

All these miles away

May all your dreams be sweet tonight

Safe upon your bed of moonlight

And know not of sadness, pain, or care

And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there

Sleep... 

(Still figuring out the reason Dream sang this-)