LET'S REWRITE!
Chapter 1: A Chance From A Text:
Failboat's Pov:
It was almost the end of summer and I was feeling frustrated. The reason? Well I haven't confessed to my crush and I promised myself I would. At moment I was laying in my bed, I was hating myself for a breaking a promise I made!
I'm not that forgetful, I don't forget things easily that is until my crush is on my mind. His smile, his personality, it's just everything about him makes me get lost in thought. Sometimes Purple Shep has to remind about things.
I met my crush during 1st grade, I still remember that fateful day. It was like destiny when we met each other. He was just so adorable when he was shy. As I remember my times with my crush, I feel my phone vibrate.
I had just received a text message from my crush, ExplodingTNT. It read: "Hey Failboat wanna visit my house today in the afternoon?". I thought about his invitation and realized that this could be my chance to confess.
"Sure, I would love to!" I responded. I began to play on my computer while waiting for the clock to strike 12 since it was 11:00.
~Le time skip~
I got ready for my visit to his house. I go outside and walk to his house. I reach his front porch within minutes. I ring TNT's doorbell waiting for him to answer.
A/N: Alright I'll explain why I did this. I want to show everyone how much I improved in my writing since well it's been a long time since I wrote my first ever fanfic. This is actually the first chapter I ever wrote and if you want to read my first well it's called "Summer Love" although beware since this is my first so don't expect it to be perfect. It's so cringy anyway I hope you notice how much I improved because I can. Literally compare this rewrite with the picture up top (the orginal chapter). Okay I'm gonna my vacation now bye
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