U want writing advice?
Don't say the word 'very.'
'That's hard', you say?
Not really.
Just replace 'very' with (insert word with things that beavers make) Then, nobody will have to read:
'The stove was (very) hot. It made my hand hurt (very) bad. We had to drive (very) fast to the hospital where I died after they didn't try to fix my (very) awful condition. So I died.'
^^^ wow, tell that to the children.

(Yayyy good job. Now u have writing adviceee)