Story name: Tainted

Author: ThatBiryaniWaliLadki

Genre: General Fiction.

Number of chapters: 12 so far and ongoing.Not completed.

Ok, So now I'm starting-

•••The title of the book-
I would say the title 'TAINTED' is a very simple and apt title for the book and it gives the readers a base and idea of what the story is going to be.So well done with that. 

I'll give you a 10/10 for that.

•••Book Cover-
The book cover is simple but the picture potrayed is giving the whole idea to the readers of what is going to be the basic plot or better say background of  the story.

So for that 9/10.

•••Story Description: Now Story description is what something that attracts readers to read the story along with the cover and title of the book and these are basic things that are noticed and generates interest.

In this book, you writes a few characteristic of female leads and that are well.

The thing, that I find that your description is totally defining the plot and some incidents.

But, for actual happening one has to read it.

So, its looking quite impressive.

For that 9/10.

•••Prologue- Well your story don't have any prologue. So its useless.
But if you include that it only makes your work impressive.

But that's up to you. If you find it necessary for work, you must think and write that.

So, No points.

•••Plot-

Talking about plot, it's based on how a female student deals with bullies. The female character is strong is her attributes like she's nerd and basically she is an overachiever but not getting her place.

Her journey while tackling all the situations and her rivals is impressive.

so, I'm giving 8.5/10 just on the basis of currently published part.

There is still time becuase the book is not completed yet and so I can't judge you too quickly in that one.

P.S- Your way of describing the incidents, which I personally like the most. And personally, there were same incidents in my life also and your work revives them.

•••Character development- The female lead is potrayed an Indian school student . She seems like other name of achievers.

The female antagonist, she seems totally bitchy. And don't talk about her minions.
(Well I'm biased here, Coz female lead is only tackling them. If I'm on her place, she was almost get beaten blue black by me. 😉)

If I talked about male lead, I'm pretty sure he's also a bully, if not...do tell me about that Kiaan.
(I hope he don't mess up in the future chapters.Fingers crossed.)

I really appreciate you author for this one and I give you a 9/10.

•••Story telling-

This part is what I liked the most. Evey incident you mentioned are good but that usually all these things happened in school life which I found general. As there is always a student in school who faced these situations.

I would like to say, that do add some more interesting incidents.

I know the book is not totally completed, so its early to say. But my purpose of saying this is precisely to make your work interesting. Do think about this.
So we can enjoy more your work.

I give you 8.5/10 for that.

•••Language and Grammar- This was the specially requested thing to be reviewed.

Starting with the language, the author has used simple and understandable English rather than those overly flowy words.I would say that is good because whats the use of writing a story when the readers don't understand.

For that 8/10.

Now for the grammar, well till the part i read, i didn't find any specific mistakes.

So for that I would give a 9/10.

•••The Pros and Cons.

PROS
° Steady plot of school life
° Way of naming Chapters
° Character's attributes
° Way of describing
° Not any specific grammatical errors.

CONS
° No particular images except naming part.
°Common Plot
° No prologue

Overall Rating - 7.5/10

I recommend this book to everyone who likes to enjoy the school life again and wants to beat bullies.

From the prospective of a reader,I surely enjoyed the story and is looking foreward for the next update. Keep going..💓

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I hope I have covered everything you asked for. Correct the mistakes, do think about suggestions and you will be one of the best.

All the best for the future❤.

Reviewed and Published by Riverlovliness