Story name : Sunshine

Author : JyeshthaMalviya

Genre : Fan Fiction, Romance

Number of chapter's :37 chapters without author notes and notices (it's  Completed).

Let's start with the review :-

Title of the book : "Sunshine" well its a classy and very suitable title for the story.
         Without Sunshine there is no brightness in our lives  similarly in this story it means that the person is always smiling and happy like a warm ray of sun.
        
                 10/10 for the title

Book cover : In order to make a good book cover. It's important to first understand its purpose. A cover exists primarily to entice potential readers to read the book.
It has to relay information about the book in a way that grabs potential readers and inspires them to investigate further.
          This cover is very simple and nice but doesn't give description of the story. As it's a fan fiction you can use pictures of the cast which u choose and create more describing and interesting cover.
         
              8/10 for the cover

Story description  : your way of describing the story is awesome. Your blurb is so cool and grabbing attention leaving them wanting for more.  The way you portrayed the story in prologue makes readers hitched to your story
   
           9/10 for this part.

Plot : it's kind of unique plot which is attracting people to read more and as it's fan fiction this plot is amazing and very expressive. 
Very creative and interesting storyline. Readers can see different emotions and relations which are portrayed really well.
        
              9/10 for the plot.

Character development  : As the readers get the main message and storyline from prologue author has done a great job there.  The description of characters and their introduction is well done.
     The female lead emotions and feelings in the first chapter itself are very nice. The male lead is friendly and caring person.
       If we talk about supportive characters there are many people who are supporting this story and the leads. Khushi and Rishab are very strong main leads.
      
           10/10 for this part.

Story telling  : The story telling part is good. The pace and speed of the story and it's continuation is good with normal pace. The moving of story telling (or) development of characters is great. The emotions are displayed very well. The additional notes and pov is some what lagging in describing who's pov author is trying to tell. Try to use third person pov in the place of regular pov it will be more specific and describing.

          9/10 for story telling.

Language and Grammar : the language is appropriate. Author used simple and understandable language Rather than that fast and flowery English vocabulary and grammar. The
Hindi is also used but basic and understandable words are used.
The emotions and illusions are portrayed correctly without grammatical errors.
    I suggest please write the Hindi words meaning in brackets () or  in the end of the chapter.

            9/10 for language and grammar.

Now pro's and con's :

Pro's :

. Steady plot
. Unique story line.
. Choice of characters.
. Speaking language.
. Maintenance of continuation of the story.
. Portraying emotions and illusions very well

Con's :

. Please change your cover to more expressive cover. It should describe your story.
. Use images for creating interest as it's a fan fiction.

Overall rating  : 9/10.

I would like to tell the readers of this book, that don't judge this book by its cover and give comments and views soon.. Wait patiently, Author Don't disappoint you.....

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Honestly speaking you are good in writing and creating illusions.

The story is completed and I'm pretty sure that the further story is able to change my and other views because I know 'best is yet to come.'

But anyway,I hope I have cleared everything you asked for.

All the best and You'll have my support from now on.❤

Reviewed and Published by-Clariedsoza