Name Of The Book: Love Story 2026

Author: Kiara_falcone

No. Of chapters: 9 and ongoing

Genre: Romance

REVIEW ----->

Title Of The Story: The title is simple that describes that it's a love story, what I couldn't perceive was the meaning behind 2026. I didn't find it apt for the story till chapter8.

Rating: 6/10

Book Cover: Though the cover provides clarity about your story but its too simple for a romance genre. We say that don't judge a book by its cover but truth to be told, readers do judge. I will advise you to change the cover in order to attract readers. The Internet is flooded with amazing and captivating pictures, make good use of them.

Ratings: 7/10

Description Of The Story: You have described your protagonists very well but I believe you should have described your story as well in the description. No doubt it was enticing but not enough to lure more readers. Though the way you have described your protagonists in your blurb is amazing.

Rating:8/10

Prologue: I found the prologue quite intriguing. It had few mistakes here and there but it can be overlooked as it enticed me to read further.

Rating: 9.5/10

Plot Of The Story: This was the part I liked the most. Your plot is different and catchy. The story revolves around two high school students Amulya and Prateek, how they met, and their feelings towards each other. I was actually reminded of my own school. The most intriguing part of your story by now is the cricket match. The way you have written it builds a curiosity inside readers and makes them eager to know what happened next.

There were some scenes that I thought were completed in haste.

(P.S-> I am looking forward when they will encounter each other in college)

Rating: 9.5/10

Characters Development: The female protagonist Amulya is shown to be a free-spirited girl who doesn't like to live in boundaries and that's why she changed her school. There is nothing significant change of character as of till chapter 8.

The male protagonist Prateek was shown to be shy at first but slowly and steadily there was some change in his character. He came out of his comfort zone only to win his lady love. His character progressed and that was applaudable.

It will be interesting to know what will happen in their college and how the change of environment affects them.

Rating: 10/10

Story Telling: I found you lacking in this part the most.

Although I liked how you have used short sequences, still you need to work on the organization of the story.

Example:-The flashback event of Prateek when he was on his way back to the hostel was a little confusing. I believe you should have used either different font styles such as bold or italics or should have wrapped that particular sequence within special symbols.

Note---> What I have perceived that your story is in parts as you have included the school events in Part 1. You should add an author's note before that, stating about the same because it might confuse the readers.

Rating:7/10

Language: The language used is simple and easy to understand. Not for once, I couldn't discern the message you wanted to convey.

Rating: 10/10

Grammar and Punctuation: There were few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, though it felt as if it was either a typo or the author didn't proofread before updating the chapter.

These are certain points I would like to mention:-

1) In many instances you have used "....." instead of a full stop '.', that completely changes the meaning of the sentence, so please make note of it next time.

2) Use of 'i' instead of 'I'

3) Don't use SMS slang that you have used a lot, such as 'dint' for 'didn't' and 'jus' for 'just'.

4) Few spelling mistakes were there as well:-

Studfents-> Students

Were-> wherr

Was-> wall

Her -> herv

(These seemed typos to me)

Rating: 6/10

PROS And CONS:

Pros ->

1. Unique Plot.

2. The way the male protagonist character has shown positive changes in his character.

3. Way to build curiosity in readers.

4. Use of simple language.

Cons ->

1. Grammatical and Punctuation Mistakes.

2. The cover should be a little more alluring.

3. Need to work on the organization of the events.

Overall Review: As a reader, I really liked your book. I believe a lot of people can relate to your book as I was able to. I could easily picturize the scene in front of me. I will recommend this book to those who love to read sweet highschool or college romance.

Overall Rating: 7/10

Note To Author: Dear Author, you have the potential to shine out. Your story and the short sequences you used not to bore your readers is commendable and not to mention the way you tried to build curiosity in your readers. But the mistakes I pointed out, can't and shouldn't be ignored. Just a few more efforts from your side to correct them and your book will receive a lot of reads very soon.

All the best for your future works.

Thank You and I hope I was able to cover every point in the review. You will have my support from now on. :)

Reviewed and Published By:  shrishtee_suman