• Name of the Book: IN BETWEEN THE LINES.

• No. Of  Chapters: 32(completed)

• Genre: Literary Fiction and LGBTQ+

• Title of the story: The title of the story is justified and attractive...both as in this story you have shown how a ghost writer was able to understand the hidden meanings that were present between the classy lines the actual author wrote in his books and how the ghost writer helped him to complete his own creation.Some readers may get confused but still it's good.

Ratings: 10/10.

• Book cover: The most important thing though we tell the readers not to judge any book by it's cover but they do. In your book cover....literally a man is standing between the lines. It's well matched but not attractive. As an online author if you wants to attract readers, the cover should be more colourful.

Ratings: 8/10.

• Description of the story: You have described your story in a proper and simple way but it is not too interesting. A reader always reads the description before spending few minutes for a book. Your description is not that attractive. The quality of your description is lower than the actual story. Try to match it with the quality of your story which is amazing.

Ratings: 7/10.

• Plot of the story: Your plot is different, interesting but too classy and difficult to understood. Wattpad is mostly used by youngsters....so, you will find difficulties to find readers for your story. In the story, we see how professor Hardwin become a ghost writer to help Astorious, who writes using Psedonym 'Asra'. The plot is good....I don't think any change is needed. Simple but emotional story.

Ratings: 9.5/10.

• The middle of the story: The middle part is not that much interesting though it reveals many secrets of the author and his reasons behind using Pseudonym 'Astra'. The growing feelings between Astorious and Hadwin. It's good but needs to add spice in it. You should have add  more romantic moments in it and less about the sequel.

Ratings: 8.5/10.

• The ending of the story: It's heartbreaking and as a reviewer I am impressed. But you should have end with a/n....to give a little conclusion of the chapter. The ending was good but it deserves to be more creative.

Ratings: 9/10.

• Characters development: The main leads are Astorious and Hadwin. As you have shown Astorious as an active and passionate writer but as the story proceeds...the passion for his writing is shown slightly less. At the same time Hadwin's character doesn't need any improvement. The way Astorious is drowning in depression slowly...slowly while writing has became an obsession for him is only shown in last chapter. The character 'Astorious loose his madness for writing a good book loose it's acceleration while he gets it back with the help of Hadwin. Though suddenly he shows his obsession for writing in last chapter. Though it is a little matter but still would like to point out.

Ratings: 9/10

• Grammar and punctuation: Well one of the impressive thing about is I am unable to find grammatical mistakes in your story which is rare. That's why I told that it's too classy.

Most of the writers avoid using complicated punctuations like ; ! : etc. as it changes the meaning of the lines...so they just simply write the lines. But you have done it properly. The lines of your story is expressed properly due to proper use of punctuation. Just keep it up. I think readers will surely appreciate your work.

Ratings: 10/10

• The matters in which your story is lacking behind:

° Prologue is absent where any important moment of story is shown to give the readers an idea about where the story will take turn

° Character Sketch is absent where you introduced the main characters. You have to intoduced the characters individually. So, when the readers will start reading they gets an idea in which sense the character is expressing emotions while saying the lines.

° Epilogue is also missing i.e the last chapter where the author essembles the whole different parts of the story together which also indicates that the story is finished. Readers will get confused after reading your story whether they should expect more from this or it is the end. So, epilogue is an important part of this story.

° Communication with readers is also less. As it is online platform so communication should be more with readers.

√ I will not give any ratings on this part as you have to improve it and  well I would like to give ratings on Communication  6.5 /10

• The matters I wants to point out

° The starting is interesting as well as the endings but in middle its all about their working together for the Sequel. You should either maintain the interest level or increase it like add more romantic moments.

° If there is any sequel of your story please mention it or else some readers may gets irritated by this. Don't end your story with cliffhangers without explaining the readers about the end.

^^^^^^^The overall review^^^^^^^

The story has a nice plot but you have to work on those matters which I pointed out. You have potential of becoming a professional writer just needs to improve on those areas of story. And about publishing your story somewhere else or as a book you needs to improve those things first. But I would really like to read your book in a train journey or plane journey. Your book has the capability of winning many hearts just you need to work on the creativity more.

So, for the overall ratings I would give the average of all the ratings you got, i.e your over all ratings 7.7/10

As a reader I will recommend this book to those who likes to read classy romantic books. You really had a potential to attract the readers with your matured writing skills.

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I hope you like my review on your story. I have covered each and every part you asked for. So, just work on the particular matters I pointed out.

I also hope that you prosper in your life and all the best for your future which I am sure will be bright my friend caCrisostomo 

Try to give your little more attention in your stories then your story will surely get the deserve appreciation. 😍

And according to me your story is an amazing mixture of an author's feelings and romance.

Reviewed and Published by 124nablove124