Book name - Disastrous Ties

Author- Capellarc

Genre: General Fiction Romance

Number of Chapters: currently 26 chapters and ongoing.

Lets get to the review-

•••Title of the book-
"Disastrous Ties" proves the appropriateness of what the author wants to convey. It provides exactly the briefing as the book is based martial relationship along with the highlights and newly developed romance and changes in the life of newlyweds and their ways to cope up.

So, 10/10 for that.

•••Book Cover-
The book cover provides the clear image of the theme of the story. The book cover is giving you the exact message what author is saying in words.

So,10/10 for this classy book cover.

•••Description of the story-
If we talk about the description of this book, it is based on the marriage of male and female leads. But don't compare it with any other book. Although its based on marriage but you can find various Humour Satires which will never let you bore with the story. Sometimes author even presented some real emotions and feelings in a funny Manner which is an appreciation in itself. The issues and problems, which came in their ways and lives, their way to solve them is unique in itself.

So, 9/10 to this part.

>>>Prologue-
I like that author's way to provide the briefing of story. The prologue that author writes starts from the some description of the life experiences of female lead. And the trying attempt of male lead in coping and opening the heart of the female like.

It's again the mixture of emotions which provides the essence of what the story will be and what's its emotions will be, not to mention romance, you'll find it in cute amd humourous form. Every feeling has its own taste and that's you find in it in entertaining manner.

So, 9/10 for this part.

•••Plot-.
If we talked about plot, it's a little bit common, as it starts from the marriage itself of male and female leads. After marriage things will starts changing. You can find all kind of adventure and real life funny situations with everything. Incidents, adventures, problems, solutions will give you a glimpse of real life situations.

Again 8.5/10 for this part.

As the story is still ongoing I'm hoping there will be a lots of twist and turns and also contains variety of shades of other emotions and situations also. And this number will be increased with further development.

•••Character Development-

As the readers gets the theme of the book from its prologue. But its only the idea. For know actually what is happening how it's started, you have to get in the book.
The female lead is a tomboy and has trust issues. Her attitude and character is itself gives a glimpse of situations in which she can get in.
And if we talk about male lead, he is supportive and  caring.

If we talk about supportive characters, they are also strong and playing their part Well.
The choice of cast is very good as they are justifiing the emotion and requirements of characters.

I give you a 10/10 for that.

>>>Story telling-
The story telling part is also good. The pace and speed of continuation of the story is also good. The moving of storytelling is impressive. As there are some potrations, by which you can feel actual emotion.
The additional notes in storytelling and descriptions given are impressive.
So, I'm hoping you'll continue it.

Everything in whole will give you a total entertainment.

So, 9/10 for this part and when story goes ahead, it may change further.

>>>Language and Grammar-
The language is appropriate. Author used simple and understanding language rather than that flowy English and Grammar. I will appreciate this part and thinking of author as what's the use of using weighted amd flowy English with typical words when they can't portray emotions and illusions.

But, there are some words which we can say that are heavy words. So readers may find it difficult if their English is not as strong.

So, in order to avoid troubles of readers, i suggest you If you use these kinds of words, do give their meaning behind it also or emotions.

The words used for additional details are also good.

So, 9/10 for that.

Grammar-

From the grammatical part-
Till the chapter I read, i didn't find any particular grammatical error and mistakes.

For the punctuations-
Again for this, i didn't find any mistakes particularly.

Author used direct word and speech to show conversations.

So currently, i will say that i didn't able to find as such mistakes.

So currently I'm giving 9.5/10.

NOW PROS AND CONS-

PROS-
• Steady plot.
•Unique character.
•Choice of cast.
• Speaking language.
• Maintenance of continuation in the story
•Speed of the story.
•Images used.
•Creating illusions of real life problems and adventures.
• Humour Satires.

CONS-
• Except some heavy words didn't find any yet.

Note- mentioning of heavy words is also a pro, only if they didn't trouble readers as not everyone is good with languages. Giving the meaning or idea behind the mentioning these words, will avoid unnecessary troubles only from both the ends

Overall rating- 9.5/10

I would like to tell the readers of this book, that don't judge this book and give comments and views soon.. Wait patiently, Author Don't disappoint you. And author is entertaining too, so surely you'll have fun while reading.

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Honestly speaking you are good in writing and creating illusions, and playing with humour (in positive words).

The story is still ongoing and I'm pretty sure that with further story development, we will get a more and more of your package as 'best is yet to come.'

But anyway,I hope I have cleared everything you asked for.

All the best and You'll have my support from now on.❤

Reviewed and Published by- Riverlovliness