~March 1,2021~

The voice of train's horn is coming.

A women wearing a simple saree nuptial chain in her neck and hairline filled with sindur.
A man wearing army uniform hugs her.

Naina : (Hugging him more tightly) Pata nahi is baar aapko jaane dene ka bilkul maan nahi kar raha...... aisa mnn krr raha abki baar aap ko naa jane do

Rajveer : Tum tension mat lo mein jaldi wapas aa jaunga

Both hugged each other tightly.

A child pulls his jeans.

They broke the hug.

She was standing pouting and folding his hand.

Rajveer : kya hua sweetu

Raina : Saara pyaar mumma ke liye mere liye kuch bhi nahi

Rajveer : Oo ho..

He takes her in his arms.

Rajveer : I m gonna miss u too my sweetu.

Raina (hugging him): I will miss you , Rajveer

Naina glared at Raina.

Naina : Raina

Raina : dadda dekho abhi aap gaye bhi nahi ho abhi se daant ne lag gi mumma

Rajveer : Heyy nainu , meri sweetie se koi kuch nahi kahega.....samjhi

Naina : Okk....mein nahi dataugi ..par ek shart prr ki Raina ko bhi meri hrr baat maan hi hogi

Rajveer : Raina promise karo ki aap mummy ki hrr baat manoge

Raina(thinking wala reaction): Ok....pinky promise

They both kissed her on each of her cheek.

Rajveer : Mere pass aapke ke liye gift bhi hain

Raina : Kya??Kahan??

Rajveer : Aapke room mein

Raina: U are the best dadda in the world

Rajveer : And u are the best daughter in the world.

They both hugged each other.

Naina(pouting) : Aur mera gift

Rajveer : Vo bhi hai....Raina vo dekho aeroplane

Raina looked in the opposite direction.

Rajveer instantly kissed on Naina's cheek.

Raina : Dadda waha toh koi aeroplane nahi hain

Rajveer :Aree udd gaya hoga ..

Suddenly , the announcement was made for train's departure.

Rajveer (Shifting Raina to Naina's arm) : Aacha mein jaata hoon..byee..aapna aur Raina

Naina and Raina : Khyaal rakhna

Naina and Raina giggled and hi-fied.

Rajveer : Raina

Raina : Mumma ko pareshan mat karna... Mumma ki har baat manana...

Naina : Dekho ise bhi yaad ho gya hain

Rajveer : Haan toh thik hain na..byee

He kissed on their foreheads and waved a good byee

Rajveer: jaldi aunga.

Train departed from there.

Naina : Raina ab hum bhi ghar chale

Raina : Haan mumma pata nahi papa mere liye kya gift laye hoge

At night

Raina and Naina were sitting on the bed. A notebook was laid in front of him.

Naina : Mumma kya mein yeh homework kal kar sakti hu please

Naina : Noo..itne dino se aapne koi kaam nhi kiya

Raina : Vo toh papa aae hue the

Suddenly, voice of phone ringing came.

Naina(searching for it ): Mera phone

Raina : Mumma vo raha table pe..pakka papa ka hoga

She ran towards the phone.

Seeing the contact name.

Raina : Dadda

She again came near Naina and gave her the phone.

Naina picked up the call.(It was a video call)

Naina : Hello aap puch gaye kya..Kaise hain aap..thik toh hain..khana khaya

Rajveer : Bas Nainu control...tum toh rajdhani express se jyada tez question puchti hoon.. batane ke mauka toh do

Naina : Thik hain ..ab bolo

Rajveer : Haan mein thik hoon..abhi pohcha..... khana kha liya..Aur meri sweetu kaha hain

Raina jumped in the frame.

Raina : Mein yaha hoon dadda

Rajveer : Hii champ..aese muh kyu banaya hua hain..kya hua

Raina : Aapki Naina jabse mujhe padha rahi...aur hum aapko miss bhi kar rahe hain dadda

Rajveer : Aww ..i am missing you too my champ ...Accha ab bhut raat ho gyi hai aap so jao...

Raina : Good night dadda

Saying this she covered herself with the duvet.

Naina : Dekha kitni jaldi so gyi...

Rajveer : Tumhe bhi good night

He gave her a flying kiss.

Naina (Blushing): Good night ..apna khyaal rakhna

She cutted the call.Went near the cupboard and took his black jacket .

Naina(Hugging it) : I miss you.

Next morning

Naina woke and saw three missed calls of Rajveer.

Naina (sad face): Oh no!! Unka phone aaya tha aur mai soti reh gayi ab pure din baat nahi ho payegi

Suddenly, she saw a whatsapp message by Rajveer.

She opened it and saw it was Rajveer's video message.

Rajveer : Good morning Nainu .. mujhe pata hain tum abhi uthi hogi aur khud ko daat rahi hogi ..so don't worry when ur rajveer is here .Tumhara phone busy aa raha isliye yeh ..

Mein puch chuka hoon, khana kaha liya, aaram bhi kar liya,tumhe aur Raina ko bhut miss bhi kiya , ab duty ka time ho gaya hain toh byee.. aur humesha aise hi muskruate rehna

Naina smiled a little.

Rajveer : Aur meri sweetie ko mat daatna..byee

Video ended.

Naina hugged her phone .

After sometime

Naina was doughing the flour in the kitchen.

She rembered.

Flashback:

It was Naina's first rasoi .

Naina was standing confused what to do as she doesn't know how to cook anything.

Rajveer came and back hugged her.

He kept his chin on her shoulder.

Rajveer : Toh meri wifey aaj kya bana rahi hain

Tears flew out from her eyes.

Rajveer : (Rubbing her tears with his thumb) Hey kya hua....why are you crying

Naina hitted him

Rajveer: Auw nainu lga mujhe..... ab yeh batao ki kya hua

Naina : Aaj mera phela din hain aur mujhe kuch bhi banana nahi aata ...pata nhi sab mere baare mein kya sochege

Rajveer calmed her.

Rajveer : Don't worry when I am here...mein kuch bana deta hoon

Naina : Aapko cooking aati hain..i mean..

Rajveer : Mrs. Shekhawat mein ek army officer hoon aur mujhe aapna khana khud bana aata hain

.... ab tum yeh batao ki kya khaana hai

So Raina were doughing the flour. Naina's back was touching his chest and their hands were mingling.

Flashback ends

A smile forms on her face and some tears flew from her eyes. She wipes them and starts doughing again.

Fast forward ⏩

It was their daily routine to video call each other day and night.Both missed each other.

After one month,

One day

Video call was going on.

Suddenly, a voice of gunshot was heard.

Naina : Kya hua??Sab thik toh hain

Rajveer: It's a attack.. mujhe jana hoga.

Naina : All the best..aapna khyaal rakhna

Rajveer : Tum bhi ..byee

He gave a fly kiss to both of them and cutted the call.

It has been four days since his call.

Naina was chopping vegetables but was lost in rajveer's thoughts.(Rajveer nei usko khaana bnaana sikha diya tha😜)

Suddenly , her finger got a slight cut and blood was ozzing out . She sucked it.

Flashback:

Naina was collecting some broken pieces of glass.

Suddenly, one glass piece piereced in her finger resulting ozzing of the blood.At the same time Rajveer entered the room.

Rajveer : (Took her hand angrily) Kitni baar kaha hain kaam mat kara karo par meri toh manai hi nahi ..ab chup chap yaha baitho mein first aid box leke aata hoon

Naina : Rajveer chotti si chot hain

Rajveer : Chup ek dum chup dekho kitna khoon nikal raha

Rajveer came back after bringing the first aid kit and sat beside her.

Rajveer (Applying ointment on her finger): Ab se tum koi isa kaam nahi karogi..servants hain na..apne baare mein nahi toh kisi aur ke baare mein toh soch liya karo mere baare mei to sochti nhi ho

Flashback ends

Naina: Agar aap abhi yaha hote toh mujhe bhut daat te

Her chains of thoughts was broken by phone ringing.

Naina jumped excitedly.

Naina: Raina dadda ka call aaya hain ..jaldi aao

Raina came running.

Naina picked up the call.

Naina : Hello.. finally aap kya call agya

Rajveer : Haan. Aur humara mission successful bhi hua..heyy sweetu..kya kar rahe ho

Raina : Aapko miss

Rajveer : Toh aa raha hoon na mein kal

Raina : Sachi

Rajveer : Muchi

Raina (Jumped in joy): Yayyy..kal dada aa rahe

Raina : Mein abhi Alekh mama ko bata ke aata hoon

She ran from there.

Naina : Aap sach mein kal aa rahe hain

Rajveer : Nahi mazak kar raha hoon..

Naina's face saddened.

Rajveer : Aree sachi mein aa raha hoon...

Naina : I can't wait..kal itno baad hum sab ek saath hoge phir se

Rajveer : Yes..meri pyaari biwi ji

Naina : Accha byee.. mujhe ab bhut saara kaam hain

Rajveer : I love you (Giving her fly kiss)

Naina : love you too

She cutted the call and ran outside.

In hall

Raina : Aur mumma ab mein koi kaam nhi karuga..na hi kal mein school jauga

Naina: Raina .. dadda shaam ko ayenge

Raina (with his puppy face): Dekha mamu , aapki yeh pyaari acchi behen mujh jaise chhote se pyaare se bacche ko kitna daant ti hain

Naina glared at her. Meanwhile everyone bursted in laughter.

Alekh : Ooho..tu mere pass aa.. naina ..kal raina ghar pe hi rahegi..kal school ki chutti.. happy raina

Raina : Bhut jyada.

She showed his tongue to prachi.

Naina : Accha ab khana kha lo

After dinner, at night

Raina had slept down.

Naina went near the photoframe kept on the table and hugged it.

Flashback

Rajveer along with baraat entered the marriage hall.

Naina was seeing him through the window.

Rajveer's eyes falled on her.

She hid behind the curtain seeing him looking at her .

Rajveer smiled at her.

After sometime,

Pooja brought Naina and made her sit beside Rajveer in the mandap.

Rajveer (In her ear): Vaise aaj tum academy ke dino se bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi ho.....Meri Naina bnn krr

Naina blushed hard.

Flashback ends.

Next day,

In kitchen

Naina was cooking .

Meanwhile , Pooja came opened utensils.

Pooja : Ohho..aaj toh saara khana sir ki pasand ka baan raha.. banati rahe

Saying this she left from there.

After sometime Rajveer called naina.

Naina picked up the call.

Naina : Aap nikal gaye kya

Rajveer : Nahi..haan bas thodi der mein nikal jauga ..aur phir tumhare saath..aite hi sabse phele tume ek tight sa

Naina : (interrputed as she knew what he was going to speak) Bas bas ... Jaldi aana

..byee

Rajveer : Byee

At evening

Naina was sitting at the sofa.

Raina : Mumma aap bhi khelo na bhut maza aayega

Alekh: Haan aa ja na

Naina : Nahi ..tum dono khelo

Her gaze was fixed on watch.

Her heart was beating so fast as someone very close to her was in danger.

After sometime

Doorbell rang.

Naina ran towards the door.

Naina (Opening the door) : Aap aagye

As she opened she fall on the floor with a thud.

It was Rajveer's body coved with tricolour flag.

Everyone came running thinking what had happened.

Officer who had brought rajveer's body: We are really sorry... Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat is among the bravest army officer. Wo desh kii raksha mei Shaheed ho gye

Pooja : (Crying) Yeh sab kese hua..vo toh

Officer: Jis train mei aa rhe thhe usme blast ho gya....he saved everyone but not himself.

Raina: Mumma dadda

Alekh hid her in his embrace.

Naina was still in shock.

Pooja went near naina and shaked her.

Pooja : Naina

Naina stood and ran into her room.

She closed the door.

She went near the photoframe and hugged it.

And cried her heart out.

After few minutes

She went near the dressing table and took out a bottle labeled as sleeping tablets.

She took out the tablets and was about to engulf them .

When someone stopped her by holding her hand.

It was Rajveer's soul.

Rajveer: Kya kar rahi ho Naina..itni jaldi kamzoor pad gyi

Naina : Toh kya karu..yeh naina is Rajveer ke bina bilkul bhi strong nahi hain ..yeh tabhi tak strong jab tak uska Rajveer uske saath hain

Rajveer : Toh yeh Rajveer tumhare saath aaj kal aur humesha rahega....mai to tumhaare dil mei bata hu na....tumse alag kaise ho skta hu. Tumhe strong rehna hoga is Rajveer ke liye , raina ke liye , humari family ke liye

Rajveer (Wiping her tears with his thumb): Mujhe meri nainu rote hue biklul acchi nahi lagti ..ab baahar chalo

She tried to hug but realised that it was her illusion.

Naina : aapki naina Ahh singh aapki Raina ke liye strong bnegi

She moved out.

She saw raina crying.

As raina saw , she ran towards her and hugged her.

Raina : Mumma dadda

Naina : Kuch nhi hua mera baccha

Raina : Vo hume chod ke liye chale gye

Naina : (Wiping his tears ) Vo kahin nahi gye hain vo humare saath hain ab bhi aur humesha..aur agar ab ise rote rahe na vo mujhe bhut daate ge..aap chahte hoon ki vo mujhe daate

Raina nooded her head in no.

Alekh kept his hand on Naina's shoulder.

Alekh : naina

Naina : Alekh agar aap sab ise rote rahe toh yeh sab dekh kar unko bhut bura lagega ki uski wajah se hum ro rahe hain aap sab chahate hain ki unko bura lage..

I know at the end it became very emotional. Sorry So now I wanna give the credits to the people who deserve

1) The whole plot of this story as well as the dialogue belong to pikachucreates she was the one who wrote it in Pranbir Fandom. I did some minor changes and brought it in Raina Fandom

2) The pic of the little girl which I used in the cover belongs to Pinkytiwari123. Dii used it in her story. So she is the sole owner of this pic.

pikachucreates and Pinkytiwari123 thanks a lot to both of you☺

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