Hola Amigos !

Today we'll be telling you , how to use proper grammar in your stories and avoid over using it **

First and the most important thing is That you should write correct grammar rather than skilled grammar **

For eg : 1. Ragini's eyes were protruding from the sockets , conveying the notional idea of chronic sleep restricted state ..

Now this line is very good but for an average reader who is not well versed with the language , it may not seem to be so ....

2. Ragini's face looked pale , her eyes hollow with black patches beneath , she was sleep deprived , it could be clearly said ....

This line is better , essayed with simple lines and a deep portrayal !!

Now let us understand why the number 2 example seems better

Well , how many of you would like to read a story that is full of technical English words with very high vocabulary ??? I personally won't **

It's because we tend to read what we find easy to understand , afterall none of us would like to open google dictionary and search the meaning !! We have loads of other works to do !!

So it is very much important for a new writer to focus on the correct usage of words rather than over usage !!

Wrong grammar to many is a big turn - off , not only this but some grammar freaks also tend to correct your vocab publicly which can be embarrassing as well **

So we all must try to not use what is called 'tricky grammar ' and  language , rather concentrate on using the same old words in a better and interesting way **

For example : Let us describe a situation in which Ragini is crying

1. Ragini's eyes turned puffy , the pitch of her words seemingly dropping , her long eyelashes continuously linking up with the fluid build up beneath her eyes producing the sound of a snivel , looking sad and depressed .....

The words used here are quite technical and obviously we don't want to waste our precious time googling it !!

2. Ragini 's eyes suddenly turned red , with tears brimming up ....her otherwise flattery eyelashes  became wet as hot tear drops made their way through them , blurring her vision

Seems better right ???

Kindly use easy and understandable grammar for better response but yes do always proof read at least once before publishing , so that necessary corrections can be made **

So we must use correct and proper grammar but as it is said "Too much of everything is bad" , so is it with the language as well  ....

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Hopefully this was helpful....

A small tip : Use more adjectives to describe the state of a person (Happy , sad , angry ) rather than idioms or proverbs , this eliminates the wrong /over usage of grammar ......**

ThankYou