Username: smittenwriter23

Rater: missace123

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Username: 4.5/5

I enjoy how you expressed the fact that you're a romance writer here on Wattpad! It was something that immediately popped into my mind when I first looked at your username, so well done on that. The only confusing part is the number, though it does make the username sound more complete!

Display name: 3.5/5

Unfortunately, since it was the same as the username, it was really difficult to tell me more about you. Though it's fine to keep your name hidden, it would be more suitable if you'd used a pen name, or even just 'Smitten Writer'.

Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm going to assume that your profile picture is a picture of yourself, which is really nice and gives a small insight about you! The only suggestion I have is to update your profile picture every two or three years to a more recent photo.

Header: 3.5/5

I'm neutral on this one. Despite the motivational and inspiring quote, in my opinion it doesn't suit the profile. It would have been more personal to you if you'd put something else as your header, such as coffee, which you state that you're addicted to.

Bio: 3.5/5

Staring off positive and strongly, I was impressed by your bio. It included the right amount of information needed, and you haven't made it too vague or detailed, despite the length. The link threw me off a little though, but it's apparently illegal on Wattpad to have shortened links on the bio. However, I feel as though it's quite jumbled, which I'll explain.

I'll call each paragraph 'paragraph n', excluding the short welcome.

Paragraph #1 and #3 belong together because they're an introduction about you as a person. Paragraph #3 and #4 work perfectly together, since they're about your works, which is nicely fitted into your bio. Paragraph #2, however, should just be above paragraph #5 (the final paragraph), because it's offering services to others and receiving something in return.

Location: 4.5/5

I think your location is really nice, since it translates to your love of classics, or the Wizard of Oz, where the famous quote came from. It also gives an element of suspense and mystery, which is quite unique. I think that adding a rainbow emoj would finish it perfectly. 

Book Cover(s): 5/5

I really enjoy the minimalist style of your covers, some which involve a little bit of photo manipulation. They suit the book perfectly and are particularly eye-catching. Great work!

Reading Lists: 4/5

The reading lists are organised and clearly labelled, just as they should! Great work on this aspect. However, the only confusing elements are your top two reading lists, titled 'smittenwriter23's Reading List' and 'Stories That Make Me Giddy'. Though your first reading list has more award books, there are still general fiction books part of that reading list, which makes me think that the reading list should be edited and re-named.

Website Link: [no score -- will not be added to final score]

Since you don't have a website link, I can't judge this. Don't worry though, this will not be added to the final score to make it fair. I have noticed, however, that there is a social media link to your Twitter profile.

Theme + Colour Scheme: [no score -- will not be added to final score]

You haven't followed a specific theme or colour scheme, and therefore I find it impossible to judge. However, it's brilliant how you've just gone for the simple writer style, which suits your profile nicely.

First Impression: 8.5/10

When I first glanced at your profile, I automatically knew that you were a newcomer (I was sort of accurate, since you joined less than a year ago). It's great that you've used the time you've been on Wattpad wisely. You've gained over two-hundred followers and you've won a few awards! However, your profile is quite stuffed and could use some polishing, as mentioned above. My only suggestion that has not been mentioned yet is organising your published works by their success, often reader to voter ratio (divide reader count by voter count and you have the average amount of how many votes are given per read), since that story would most likely interest other Wattpadders more.

OVERALL SCORE: 41/50

Overall, your account is impressive and above the Wattpad standard, and with a little bit of organising, it should be good to go!