Account: Rachel_MercuryHolmes

Rater: missace123

Note from Rater: 

This has been my first review in almost a month, so apologies if this seems less professional than my previous reviews! I have tried really hard to make it as great as possible.

Username: 4/5

I genuinely believe that it's brave to put your real name out on social media, which is what you've done with your username! However, it is quite long, and I would suggest you shorten it down to something along with @Rachel_Mercury. That way it is much easier to remember.

Display Name: 5/5

I found it quite obvious as it is stated in the username, but it makes no difference! As I've stated, it's a difficult choice to put your real name on the web, and I don't think that anything else would be able to replace your name. Personally, I find your name really interesting, a factor that appeals to Wattpadders.

Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm assuming that the profile picture is you. While I do think that it's a high-quality photo that is very effective, it is tilted in an awkward angle, making me have to tilt my head along with it. 

Header: 3.5/5

The header for me is quite a let down. You cannot see the faces of the singers (though I'm assuming that it's the band Queen), and the quality isn't as good. However, Wattpad automatically dims the brightness of the photo, and doesn't clash awfully with your profile picture. I suggest finding another image that fits Wattpad header size (1920 x 600 pixels).

Bio: 4/5

Emoji, emoji, emoji. Those were the first things my eyes laid on when I looked at your bio. I don't think that there's anything wrong with using emojis, but I believe that there is a limit to the use before it looks like a colour bomb. In your case, I feel as if you used emojis a little too much. I suggest to tone it down a little by removing some emojis such as the scales and the silhouette, and only leave those that truly leave a message of the representation such as the crown and lion.

Besides that, I think that your bio's fantastic! You talk about your hobbies, interests, being a writer, your age, and even offer some services! Well done!

Location: 4.5/5

Wow, you're from Yangon! It's great that you've put a real location, however I would consider to put it as 'Yangon, Myanmar', as I don't think many who stumble upon your profile will know where it is unless they search it up.

Book Covers: 1.5/5

The score seems a little harsh, and I feel very ashamed to put this score. However, your book covers are just images, which, in my opinion, is not much of a book cover. Whilst Four Old Ladies does have the title on the cover, it still looks as though minimal effort was put into the covers.

People often say, "don't judge a book by its cover." However, on Wattpad, the first thing you will notice is the cover, which appeals to readers.

I think you could gain more readers by looking for a graphic designer on Wattpad if it's not your forte. The TreasureCommunity has a graphic shop, other Wattpadders have graphic shops, and the Wattpad forums have numerous threads. There are so many places on Wattpad where you can find amazing cover makers for a simple payment. Some even offer free covers!

Reading Lists: 3.5/5

Three (3) reading lists is not a lot, which for me, is a relief. I have already seen your love for Queen, and was not surprised to see a reading list for that fandom, as well as a reading list of books you've read / are reading. However, the final reading list for me is difficult to understand. Do the emojis mean that you're currently reading them? Are they your favourites? Is that a to-read list?

Website Link: [no score -- will not be added to final score]

Since you don't have a website link, I can't judge this. However, the final score will be adjusted for fairness.

Theme + Colour Scheme: [no score -- will not be added to final score]

You didn't have much of a theme, but your love for Queen has stood out and if any Wattpadders want to read / discuss anything Queen related, it will only take them a glance to realise that you're a fan as well.

First Impression: 7/10

When I first looked at your profile, I was shocked to see that you haven't even been on Wattpad for a full month. You've certainly wasted no time into being a member of this community, which is great to see!

It was obvious that you're a big Queen fan, perhaps one of the biggest, and I find it very engaging that you managed to convey your love for the band onto the screen.

I truly believe that if only a few things were tweaked, then your profile could look even more amazing than it is!

OVERALL SCORE: 37/50

Overall, your account reflects who you are in real life. I think with a few minor changes, it could make you think back every time you look at your profile and think proudly to yourself.