Account: livykittykat

Rater: missace123

Username: 4/5

I'm slightly (just slightly) confused. Whilst I understand that 'Livy' is your nickname, 'kitty kat' is what I assume is your love for cats. However, I do enjoy how it works so well together! Also, having 'cat' start with a 'k' is pretty creative!

Display Name: 3.5/5

Your display name is the same as your username, which is pretty useless since we already know that information. Instead, you should put your name as 'Olivia' or 'Livy', which would make more sense. That way, you can also eliminate that piece of information from your bio.

Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm assuming that the profile picture is of you. It's really nice, however it does clash awfully with the header since it's the same, which I'll explain more below. 

Header: 3/5

I dislike how your header is the same as your profile picture. It's especially unflattering with Wattpad's way of enlarging the picture, and I think that switching to a more simple picture such as a solid beige, roses or leaves background would suit it more, since all of those elements are part of the profile picture, yet compliment it.

Bio: 2.5/5

Probably the worst element of your profile, which is a little unfortunate. Your bio is short and gives a snippet of you, as well as your reading life. However, I think that there could be quite some room for improvement.

First, there is no need for the amount of space between paragraphs that you use. Only one or two lines should be skipped.

Secondly, your punctuation needs some work. Make sure that there is no space before a full stop comma, colon and semicolon, however there is a space afterwards. Remember to always put full stops at the end of sentences, and that there is no need for full stops when you're making a list such as the one you made.

Lastly, make sure that your text is in full English and not next language.

Location: 3.5/5

There is no need for the "im in" and "bro" when you write the location. Just "my mind" will do. Also, I really appreciate the slight sarcasm used.

Book Covers: 3/5

Your book covers are all over the place. Some just have the default Wattpad cover, which makes it seem as though you made no effort, and others, such as FITNESS TIPS, have great and suitable covers. You should keep that attitude the same for all of the covers.

Reading Lists: 4.5/5

I really enjoyed your reading lists! They've been categorised beautifully. Just make sure that you put the most significant reading list at the top that will interest other Wattpadders (e.g. "You should read these books"). 

Website Link: 4/5

I like how your link directs Wattpadders to one of your YouTube videos, however I think that it would be better if you'd link it to your YouTube channel rather than one specific video. 

Theme + Colour Scheme: [no score -- will not be added to final score]

You don't have much of a theme or colour scheme, and therefore I cannot judge this criteria.

First Impression: 8/10

When I first looked at your profile picture, I knew that you'd be a writer. It's great how minimal and simple you've gone yet made it so presentable. One of the first things I noticed was that you had one thousand followers, so I was really excited to check this profile out! I think that after some revision on your bio and covers, you should be good to go!

OVERALL SCORE: 40/55

I really enjoyed reviewing your profile! It was so simple and professional, and only a bit of editing is to be done!