Username: FictionalMagicTamer

Rater: missace123

Username: 5/5

I can definitely see the link here. "Fictional" obviously means that you enjoy reading and writing fiction. "Magic" must mean that you enjoy fantasy a lot, and "Tamer" is related to fantasy, as the first thought that came to my mind was a dragon tamer. Job well done!

Display Name: 4/5

I really enjoyed your display name! It's like NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month), and it's really creative! It cracked me up a little. The only reason why this didn't receive full marks is because I don't think that every Wattpadder would understand.

Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm not sure which anime/manga the two males are from, but it obviously shows your love for them! I also enjoy the small banner on the picture, which conveys the message of you helping the community.

Header: 4/5

Similar to the profile picture, I don't know the fandom it's from, but no doubt that it's effective. The only problem is the fact that Wattpad cut off quite a large chunk off your image, so it would be more suitable if you found a landscape image instead.

Bio: 3.5/5

You asked me to see whether it tells Wattpadders the message of you wanting to help others, and I must say that you fulfilled that! You listed the communities you're part of and the introduction of yourself, so well done! However, there are some things that could be improved.

In your introduction, instead of one blocky paragraph, you should separate it into smaller paragraphs. I suggest after you do the basic introduction (your name), then you should make a paragraph break in between. Though the second paragraph will still be wordy, it will look a lot more tidy.

Your second sub-heading, the people you consider family on Wattpad, should have a colon at the end, just as the rest of the sub-headings have. Make sure you keep it all the same style.

Also, when you state that you are a member of a group profile called 'I Am Strong', you should put that under "Affiliates", where the other community profiles are listed.

Otherwise, you're bio is quite decent, and I love how you're promoting mental health!

Location: 3/5

I'm slightly on the edge for this, since you provide two locations.

The first location, "in your heart", shouldn't have the "in", since there is no need for that in a location. But it is very cute and I enjoy that.

Your second location says "It;3", and I'm very confused about this. First of all, the "&" sign should have a space afterwards. Second, I'm positive that you're referring to the It movie franchise, and if you are, please make sure that you change the semicolon to a proper colon. 

Book Covers: 2.5/5

Unfortunately, especially with your most recent covers, it seems as though that you're not making an effort into the covers. The colours don't work well with the image(s), and some areas have been cut off to fit Wattpad's size.

However, the images suit the book pretty well, and that is something to be really proud of, as well as the awards I see that you've won/been listed.

Reading Lists: 4/5

Your reading lists have been categorised nicely but have not been organised nicely. I enjoy the way that you have different reading lists to support different fandoms.

I suggest that you rearrange order of reading lists, putting the must read and favourites reading lists near the top, the fandom lists below it, and the miscellaneous at the bottom. 

Website Link: [no score -- not added to final score]

You don't have a link, and therefore I cannot comment on this area, however you have plenty of links to other profiles on your bio!

Theme + Colour Scheme: 4.5/5

Your fandom-loving attitude is shown consistently throughout the profile. I can't say too much since I don't watch any animes or mangas, but I like the way you showed your love in every category.

First Impression: 7.5/10

When I first checked your profile out, I knew that I would be looking at an anime/manga lover's profile, and I was correct and wrong at the same time, for you did show your love for many animes/mangas, but there was so much more to you than just fandoms!

I fell in love with the way that you tried promoting mental health on your profile as much as possible, which is a job well done! I also enjoyed the fact that the communities you were associated with all had similar purposes. 

OVERALL SCORE: 42/55

Your profile started out pretty strong, but then I discovered that there were some elements lacking and weak. With those improved, your profile could be amazing!