Rating by Ace: Degal_Heartfang

Username: Degal_Heartfang

Rater: missace123


Username: 4/5

I enjoy how you used your pen name as part of your username. My only question is the 'Heartfang' part. If it's a name based off a fandom, I apologise for not knowing it. Otherwise, great work!


Display Name: 5/5

I love how you made the display name the pronunciation of 'Degal'. This may sound biased of me since that's similar to my Instagram display name, but it's so creative and I enjoy it so much!


Profile Picture: 3.5/5

I'm not sure who the dog is exactly, but I'm assuming that it belongs to one of the fandoms you enjoy. If it was, and if another Wattpadder recognised it, then it would tell the Wattpadder that you enjoy that particular fandom.


Header: 4/5

I love the tiles and your name as the header. It's really aesthetic and attractive. Not that this is your fault, but the way that Wattpad darkened and enlarged your header makes it slightly unflattering since it isn't positioned perfectly. Also, the header seems misplaced, since the rest of your profile is dedicated to many fandoms.


Bio: 3/5

Your bio is much too long— probably the longest I've seen. There are a few paragraphs that should be erased completely and some that should be reorganised.

The four quotes near the bottom are quite unnecessary. I'm not sure what the purpose was, but in my opinion, it is mainly for humour purposes and doesn't have much use.

Your paragraph about joint accounts should be moved to the bottom with the other Wattpadders tagged, since they fall under the 'tagging' category.

Your greatest achievement, quote above "Proudest Words", the sixth paragraph and the ninth paragraph are all out of place, which could be scrapped and wouldn't affect the profile in any way. Getting rid of unnecessary information is important, since the bio shouldn't be too long and become a bore.

However, I love your detailed introduction, the list of fandoms you enjoy and your stories.


Location: 3.5/5

I don't really know what 'Heartfang Studios' is, but I like how it's linked to your username. It sounds like a pretty cool place and somewhere I would want to visit. However, "Chillin' in" is not part of your location, it's your status, so I suggest removing the first two words.


Book Covers: 2.5/5

All your covers suit each book, varying fandoms and images. The reason why this score is so low is because it seems as no effort was put into the covers, as though you found an image online and then used that as your cover (especially with your older works). I understand that you don't have the time to make new covers for all forty stories, but you could possibly revise a few covers yourself and hire a graphic designer on Wattpad to make some other covers for you.


Reading Lists: 4/5

I enjoy how there are so many reading lists made especially for a certain fandom, and it's obvious why each book was categorised as part of that list. My only concern is the fact that you have two or three separate reading lists, all with the same purposes.


Website Link: [no score -- not added to final score]

Since you don't have a link, I can't judge this. However, the final score will be adjusted for fairness.


Theme + Colour Scheme: 4/5

Your profile was obviously influenced by many fandoms, making it both obvious that you love certain genres and shows, comics, etc., however making it untidy at the same time, due to the many fandoms incorporated.


First Impression: 7/10

At first, when I saw your profile picture and header, I thought that I would be reviewing a very clean and professional portfolio. Instead, I was surprised with a fandom-lover's Wattpad account, but that didn't stop me from liking your profile anyway! It's amazing how you have published forty works, and it's no surprise that you almost have the nine hundred followers you deserve. I think the most disappointing elements of your profile were your book covers and the length of your bio.


OVERALL SCORE: 40.5/55

Overall, I really enjoyed your love for many fandoms and how you expressed them on your profile. By making your profile more presentable by the length of the bio and putting more effort in covers, your profile has great potential!

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