Username: cool_reader_

Rater: missace123

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I really enjoyed reviewing your profile! You're a perfectionist and you didn't disappoint. Please make sure to complete the rest of the payment!

Username: 4/5

I'm kind of lost by your username here. No doubt that you're pretty cool, but I feel as though 'reader' isn't the right word. It's likely that you read here on Wattpad and in real life, but since you also write, I think that "reader" should be replaced with 'writer'. Or perhaps 'cool_witch_', since you consider yourself a witch here on Wattpad.

Display Name: 3.5/5

Similar to the username, I'm kind of unsure about the reasoning behind the name. The first thought that came to mind was the classic book with the same name, which would then link to the current username, but then I read your bio and realised that it was your witch name. No doubt that it holds an element of mystery and suspense, however I feel as though I am missing something here.

Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm not sure whether this is a photo of you or not, but my main focus is the filter. It compliments the header beautifully and gives me those witch vibes. The only problem is that the photo isn't HD, and therefore became slightly pixelated when Wattpad enlarged the image.

Header: 4.5/5

I love it! It matches your profile picture and has some kind of enchanting feel to it. The only problem is that the photo isn't HD, and therefore became slightly pixelated when Wattpad enlarged the image.

Bio: 3.5/5

Your bio is really neat, and everything is organised beautifully, and the introduction is a tad too long but gives a detailed insight about you. The only paragraph that I would move is the paragraph after the list of your works, which should be moved to the bottom.

The part that throws me off the most is the amount of different fonts. I suggest sticking to two fonts: one for the sub-heading, and one for the content. In fact, my MacBook couldn't recognise some of the letters from the font you used for the "Introduction", changing it to "🇮🇳🇹🇷🇴🇩🇺🇨🇹🇮🇴🇳".

Another factor that made me give you a lower mark are the many paragraph breaks. If the sub-heading and content have different fonts, there should be no spaces in between the two, since it's obvious that they're different. And when you list your stories, there should be no space in between them, once again due to the font.

Location: 4.5/5

This suits you really nicely, because it actually tells Wattpadders your real location as well as a fictional location. They work nicely together, but since your bio was written by you as a witch, I feel that 'Witch's Cavern' would suit it better.

Book Covers: 3.5/5

You can definitely see development from your least recent book to your most recent! These covers are minimal yet effective, but I feel as though a number of the covers do not suit the book at all.

For example, your rant book has a picture of a witch with large, bold text over it. Some of the text is almost unreadable and doesn't stand out because some of the picture is quite light. I would suggest having a headshot of the witch (with photo manipulation) and then have the rest of the background a mystical colour like your header, which would make the text stand out more.

P.S. My favourite cover is the cover of Forbidden.

Reading Lists: 3.5/5

Wow. Nineteen reading lists. That's a little too much, if I do say so myself. However, I do like the way that the books were sorted, and there's only one which I am confused about.

"Dreamland Rush" sounds similar to "Gems of 2020" and "Gems of 2019", though I may be wrong because you might have only liked these books, but not loved. But it is something to look at.

I'm also not sure what The Midnight Awards are, but if it's particularly sentimental to you (perhaps you hosted it), continue to leave the list as it is! Otherwise, if it was hosted on a different account, I think that you should remove it since that profile most likely has the list of winners.

Also, I'm not sure what "For Him" is for.

Otherwise, I really like the way that you sorted the numerous books. 

Website Link: [no score -- not added to final score]

I can't judge this since you don't have a link, but your profile is fine just the way it is without the link!

Theme + Colour Scheme: 5/5

I really enjoy the witch theme, and it's repeated throughout the entire profile. The slightly dark colour scheme fits it perfectly, and I don't see a reason to change anything that falls under this category!

First Impression: 9/10

I was quite impressed when I saw your profile for the first time. When you said you were a perfectionist, it seemed that you were right! Your profile was so organised and tidy, which is something that every Wattpadder should aim to achieve. As I have already said, the witch theme has been carried out throughout the entire profile, which is quite amazing, since it's a hard task to show the same attitude throughout the entire profile. Well done!

OVERALL SCORE: 45/55

Overall, I really enjoyed your profile. It was so professional and unique, and the way that you interacted with other Wattpadders on your message board was really charming.