poetry winners!
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Hi! We have the results for the poetry section of Psychi Poetry (and One-Shots) Awards, and we're excited to crown our winner! Since there were so many participants, we'll only be posting the first, second, and third places here. For the rest of the participants, we'll be PM'ing you the results! Remember, all results are out of 75, not 100.
Winners: Check the prizes chapter for your points, and you can redeem them in Phoenicia's Points Shop! You have a month to redeem your prizes! DM your email for your sticker! If you're not comfortable with giving your email, just let us know. We have alternate ways of getting it to you!
Special thanks to ridithestorylover, NooniTHEbest, VITTEY1234, and wOt_iS_tHiS_LiFe for judging!
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\\ Third Place \\ One Million Shades of Red \\ 69 \\
Title: 3/5
The title didn't really tell me that the book had poetry in it.
Cover: 4/5
I really like the cover because it went really well with the title because of all the red color.
Blurb/Synopsis: 5/5
The blurb was really good
The coherence of Structure: [9/10]
I LOVED these poems there were divided into stanzas and some of them even rhymed and I just loved that.
Originality: [9/10]
The poems were really amazing and they pointed out issues people might be facing.
Storyline: [9/10]
Yes the poems followed a storyline and it was really clear about what was happening.
Language: [10/10]
There were a few curse words in the poems and it only added to the emotion and I really liked that.
Grammar: [15/15]
Yes the grammar was very accurate and good.
Overall Enjoyment: [5/5]
This is literally one of the best poetry books I have read.
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\\ Third Place \\ Musings and Pinings \\ 69 \\
Title: [4/5]
Title works well with poems; is a somewhat general title without any specific idea, but still goes well with it.
Cover: [5/5]
Cover is simple in a nice way, the black and white works well in my opinion. You can clearly see the title, and it adds a softer tone to the colorless image.
Blurb/Synopsis: [4/5]
Blurb makes it sound interesting, without making it a complex description. It's simple and sums it up well, although I wish the writer had elaborated a bit more than just "a couple poems of my observations of life", as this doesn't exactly give the reader a hint as to what some of the other poems are about.
Coherence of Structure: [9/10]
Structure often is consistent, occasionally changes but it works in favor of the writer and helps the flow.
Originality: [9/10]
The writer's poems can go from more light to heavy in just a few lines, concepts of poems are something I personally haven't seen much of before. Has relatable concepts worded in an original way.
Storyline: [10/10]
Poems flow well, you can tell there's emotion and that there was purpose when it was written, not just words thrown around into a form.
Language: [9/10]
Easy to understand but not too simple and boring words used.
Grammar: [15/15]
I did not find any mistakes.
Overall Enjoyment: [4/5]
I enjoyed reading these poems and will most likely read some more, I especially liked the imagery the writer used.
Total: [69/75]
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\\ Second Place \\ Black Dwam \\ 70 \\
Title: 5/5
Nothing much to say- it really fits well with your blurb and cover!
Cover: 3/5
Pretty good cover- just feel that the text could be made better. Otherwise, I really love the atmosphere your cover gives!
Blurb: 5/5
Great blurb! I really like the ideas involved in your book- "fragments, flashes, memories, unrequited memories and pain". It gives me a good overview of the themes of your poems.
Coherence of structure: 8/10
Haven: I felt like your rhyming didn't have a particular pattern and some rhyming endings didn't seem to work well.
The structure of your poem and length of each line was more or less similar, but it wasn't confusing or muddled.
Dew: I could see a consistent rhyming pattern; just the last line, "of what your heart see..." doesn't flow well as "see" is inaccurate in terms of grammar.
Nebulous: Loved the rhyming, just feel "post" and "lost" aren't perfect rhyming pairs.
Time: I'd say this poem is the best in terms of structure and rhyme- I genuinely enjoyed it.
Originality: 10/10
Your poems were based on intriguing topics- especially the 'Raven' one.
Storyline: 10/10
You really focused on bringing out the emotions in your poems and the way you executed them with your poetry and language was perfect.
Language: 10/10
Your descriptive language was great, it really fit the dark undertone I was expecting from this book.
Grammar: 14/15
Throughout the four poems, your grammar was flawless; but in your poem 'Dew', the last line, "of what your heart see..." isn't grammatically correct.
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
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\\ First Place \\ Pick Up the Pieces \\ 73 \\
Title: [5/5]
Title hints at emotion, which is strengthened by the description in the blurb. Is simple but a nicely flowing title.
Cover: [4/5]
Simple in a nice way. Title is clear and easy to read. Picture seems to hint at emotional poetry. Personally, I'd have used more greys and blues, but the cover still works very well.
Blurb/Synopsis: [4/5]
Creative, tells what the collection may feature.
Coherence of Structure: [10/10]
I always found it easy to find the rhyming pattern, and the lines were all pretty consistent, which I liked. The only thing is for some of the poems, the lines were pretty long which made it flow slightly less well, but only when the lines got super long.
Originality: [10/10]
I've not read poems quite like this before!! They were all unique in their own way, but all stuck to the same style of your poem writing, at least from what I've noticed.
Storyline: [10/10]
These poems all felt like they were written with so much emotion that the reader (I think) will feel that no matter what. Some of them were soothing, some made me feel good, and overall it was just a beautiful collection!
Language: [10/10]
Use of vocabulary was great, and when there was repetition, it was used well so that it was effective. Good job!!
Grammar: [15/15]
I don't recall any grammatical errors.
Overall Enjoyment: [5/5]
These poems were beautiful. My favorite was definitely "remember", it made me feel a lot better cuz I haven't actually been feeling very good about myself lately. But this poem was so beautiful and made me feel a lot better, so I personally wanted to thank you for that. These poems were so amazing, and you should be very proud of you work.
Total: [73/75]
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