Hello Beta Readers!

Firstly, I'd like to thank each and every one of you for helping with this story. :) I really appreciate you all!

I decided to start now with beta readers because I recently wrote something and I'm not sure if it's out of place. It's just two sentences but I'm not entirely sure if it fits right there. I won't say where it is or what it says because I'd like to know all of your true opinions. (Sorry if I didn't explain my reason well :P)

Please look for these things throughout the story:

- Errors (*Facts, Mispellings, Grammar Issues, etc.)

               *Example: I could at one point say my character Amelia is having a birthday on October 21st, but then she ends up having one on December 4th because it's been so long since I announced her birthday that I forgot when it really is. Or I could have given Hagen two different last names by mistake. :P

- Unrealistic Happenings, Feelings, etc.

              Example: Two characters could meet one day and declare their love for each other the next (I would categorize this as both "happenings" and "feelings"), or even much simpler things, like someone sneaking onto a plane.

- Subplots and Mysteries

                 Did I forget a subplot or to reveal a secret?

- Anything Else You Can Think Of

In the "External Link" is a "Beta Reader's Job Description" page. Please check it out if you'd like.(:

How To

If you find an error somewhere inside the chapter and you are using a phone to read it, please highlight that specific word, paragraph or sentence and write your comment regarding it. If you're on a computer/laptop, you can, in the comments section, write that specific word or sentence in quotes and then your comment outside of the quotes.

Please keep in mind that this story IS incomplete, so I will be adding to it.

Thanks again sooo much!!! :)