Phat Question

Should I re-write this book? The formatting will be exponentially better. The writing will all be in 3rd person. No POV changes. At least no [Person's POV]

The book will have some semblance of a plot, and maybe? less typos.

Answer here or whatever.

I know it's kind of like "but saying no is rude so like people probably won't say no." But I won't be offended. I want to know if that will be worth my time, and if it is not, then I will simply start writing Overwatch fan fiction until I feel like I'm good enough to move to a different platform.