The following is only the intro to the game. It will play after the player starts a new game. I just wanna know if this is a good plot in the first place. If so, please tell me in the comments. If not, I welcome all criticism. Thank you. (Seriously though, I need feedback. All is appreciated.)

Scene: Late at night. Area is fairly dark, but a Cipher grunt is clearly seen pushing a crate of pokeballs labled "entertaining Pokémon". The grunt approaches an intercom in front of a massive gate. He pushes the button.

Intercom: Hello, welcome to Poketopia! We're sorry to say that we are still working on our grand reopening. Please come back in three months.

Grunt: It's me. I've got the goods.

Intercom: Excellent. Is he following you?

Grunt: No. I don't think so.

Intercom: Do you have the prototypes?

Grunt: You bet!

Intercom: Come on in then, and be careful not to drop any.

(Gates open the grunt pushes the container through the gates. The gates close. Camera shifts to show a man in a cloak, hiding behind some rocks.)

???: I knew Cipher was still around, but what are they planning? Why Poketopia? Why a theme park that failed so spectacularly? I'll have to wait until it reopens, but for now, I should prepare.

(??? Takes a snag machine from his backpack.)

???: I'll be to obvious, I'll need to find someone else to use this...

(End of introduction)