🌺5/5/18 : [CONTEST 9 RESULTS] 🌺
Results have been calculated! Many thanks to the four participants who submitted their entries on time, making this contest possible. Thank you all for participating, and we hope that those who were unable to participate will join us next time!
Special thanks to our judges:
And now for the final results!
Note: thanks to the feedback we received, we have decided to try something new for this month's contest: Judge commentaries! Our judges have set aside a bit of their time to write a sentence or two about each entry. We hope their commentaries are helpful to you, fellow participants!
Coming in third place,
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A Dance Beneath the Moonlight by @Yui_Magic for an average of 39! You have been awarded 7 points!
Eclumbra:
"I enjoyed the message behind the one shot, as it's not very often that you find books (especially on Wattpad) where the relationship doesn't work out. Instead, the book focuses on the idea that you don't need a partner to be happy. However, I do feel like some aspects of the one shot were slightly cliché, and the grammar could be improved."
Cora-Chan:
"This one-shot, like many others, had subpar grammar. The plot was okay; I wish the fic focused more on the romance rather than killing off the grandma just to have angst."
Coming up in second place...
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A Dying Wish by @FurryGirlSlyvy with an average of 39!
10 points has been added to your rank!
Eclumbra: "The overall plot was quite unique. I haven't read many fanfics where the Chateu is burned down, and I really enjoyed the 'fairytale' theme of the oneshot. However, the grammar could be improved."
Cora-Chan: "This is easily the best one-shot. I just wish the writer didn't try to pull a Series of Unfortunate Events quirk and talk to the reader (second-person POV) because it takes you out of the story."
And now, for our first place winner:
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Nightlight by @_Micah-Drew_ for an average of 40! 15 points have been added to your rank!
Eclumbra: "Overall, the descriptions in the one shot were well done and didn't seem to be out of place. However, semi colons were misused throughout the one shot."
Cora-Chan: "This short fic is an easy, light-hearted read. The consistent grammar mistakes hold me back from enjoying it. My biggest criticism plot-wise is that the fic spends too much time in the PokéCenter describing the trainer instead of meeting his Pokémon."
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Haunted Mansion by @Nayoku
Eclumbra: "Although I found the overall one shot to be cliché, I did enjoy the ending. The grammar could be improved."
Cora-Chan: "This short, cliché one-shot was riddled with grammar mistakes and The Shining references. It's not scary, and that's a problem considering the author was going for some horror with the ghosts and all."
If there are any errors pertaining to your rank on the PWL Leaderboard, let us know so we can fix it immediately.
Thank you all for participating, and we hope to see you again!
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