Under The Stars (Remake vers.)

So this is more like a remake. So last week, kidneypoop published my story called Under The Stars. However, he said it was terrible. So I decided to remake it with Amourshipping instead of Hoennshipping. Let's see if this could become any better.

Serena stepped out her tent. She couldn't sleep so she wanted to go stargazing. She realized Ash was watching the stars, too. She walked to Ash and put her hands on his shoulders.

"Hey, Ash. Can't sleep?" Serena asked with a smile

"Yeah, I still feel happy when I defeated Valerie" Ash smiled back. Serena then sat next to him and wrapped her arm around him. She then stunned from what she did and blushed.

"Oh, sorry Ash. I-I didn't notice" Serena panicked

"It's okay, Serena. You can do it if you want to" Ash smiled, but he did blushed a bit. Serena felt more confident and kept wrapping her arms around Ash.

"It's a beautiful night, right Serena?" Ash asked

"Um, yeah, it's so sparkly and beautiful" Serena answered

"Hey, let's see if I can count all of them" Ash said

"Oh yeah, try it" Serena giggled

"One, two, three, four..." - Ash counted - "five" He finished counting while his finger pointed at Serena

"Uh, what? I'm not a star" Serena blushed

"Come on, Serena. You shone like a star after your Pokemon performance"

"T-Thanks" - Serena blushed slightly - "Hey those stars are beautiful, don't you think?"

"But not as beautiful as you" Ash smiled at Serena

"Wha, wha, wha?" Serena blushed and panicked

"Yeah, you're more beautiful" - Ash stared at Serena's eyes - "I've never seen any female companion like you, Serena. You're my star of hope. I love you"

Serena began to have watery eyes

"Oh no, sorry Serena. I understand if you don't feel the same-" Ash got cut off when Serena put her finger on his lips

"Oh Ash, that was the tears of joy. I've been waiting for this for so long. I love you too"

Serena leaned in and kissed Ash. He was blushing at first but got back to his own self and kissed back

"Let's share our love together, under the stars" Ash smiled

"Yes, Ash" Serena smiled back. Then she laid her head on his shoulder, watching the shinning stars on the night sky

"Look, Serena. There's a shooting star, make a wish" Ash pointed at the shooting star

"Ok, Ash" Serena clasped her hands and wished

"So what did you wish for?" Ash asked

"I wished I could be with you forever" Serena smiled

"Me too, Sere" Ash smiled back and kissed her

Meanwhile, Bonnie was behind, watching from the start.

"Love is really beautiful but also simple, right Dedenne?" Bonnie asked Dedenne, and the little mouse nodded. Pikachu was watching as they kissed with a smile

"My boy Ash finally confessed huh?" Pikachu thought to himself

Yeah, when I wrote this I didn't put much effort on it. This is just a remake from an author who was triggered

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