Untitled Part 2

You probably didn't expect me to update this and quite frankly neither did I. Here you go anyway.


The snores of a cosmic space dragon could be heard as his assistant floated up to him and shouted, "Eternatus, wake up!"

Unfortunately, this first try did not stir the sleeping behemoth, so Deoxys continued yelling until Eternatus finally woke up, asking, "Deoxys, what do you want? This better not be wasting my time, or you're in for it!"

Deoxys slowly backed away and said, "Calm down! We got some submissions!"

The look of rage quickly turned into one of excitement as Eternatus yelled, "Seriously?! People actually turned in submissions? Well, ain't that a surprise. There's no point in waiting here. Show me, and get the cameraman!"

Deoxys briefly flew off and shortly returned with a few more papers. Eternatus snatched them away from his tentacles and started to read aloud the first one.

Name: Char (submitted by ultimatecharizard9)

Species: Charizard (no duh)

Gender: Male

Personality: kind, caring, angry (if pissed off)

Unique Traits: I'm not gonna bother listing this part, because basically all it was was a bunch of overpowered crap. Seriously, he was apparently able to take out Arceus in a matter of seconds.

Relationship: No

Evolve: already has

Team: 1

Role: Good

Eternatus simply stared in shock at the paper, unable to comprehend what he'd just read. He slowly muttered, "This guy needs nerfs. Gigantic nerfs. Char is so much of a "Mary Sue" it's crazy. Yep, definitely nerfing him. Bring him more up to speed with actual Charizards. But, it's in."

He looked up and announced, "Well then, on with the next one!" before looking at the next OC.

Name: Quin (submitted by roharocky)

Species: Milotic

Gender: Female

Personality: calm, quick thinking, critical-minded, kind and generous to those who have gotten her trust

Unique Traits: Smaller than the usual Milotic, issues with a trainer in the past

Relationship: Yes, with a Gyarados not on the island

Evolve: already is

Team: 2

Role: Evil, but later Good

Eternatus scratched the top of the covering protecting his skull-like head, soon saying, "An interesting submission. Looks like a bit of an introvert. That might be a problem, because where Quin's going, she won't be alone for very long. It's in."

Eternatus chuckled a little to himself and then flipped to the next page and started to read again.

Name: Vine (submitted by PlatLia)

Species: Servine

Gender: Female

Personality: Mostly level-headed, but tends to ramble when she gets extremely nervous (usually when someone else starts to catch up with her and so). She may act like she doesn't like others, but she secretly cares for anyone she spends enough time talking to or being around with. She also likes to get revenge on those who have misused her trust.

Unique traits: She's able to use Vine Whip with more efficiency than most other grass types. She can use them to carry multiple things and to lift heavy objects almost twice her weight. She also has a sharp eye for things.

Relationship: No, but she doesn't mind to wait longer to find someone

Evolve: Yes, around the middle of the story

Team: 2

Role: Good

Eternatus read the paper again and soon spoke, "Well, that's descriptive. An interesting character, kind of reminds me of Quin. I hope she likes dealing with the fumes on the island. She's in, too."

Flipping through again, Eternatus came to the next submission once again.

Name: Vendetta (submitted by JirachiAJ)

Species: Banette

Gender: Male

Personality: A prankster but loyal and determined when he battles

Unique traits: Head tail is upright and zipper pattern is present above left eye

Relationship: No, but doesn't like to wait for one

Evolve: No

Team: 2

Role: Either (he's kind of both)

Eternatus smiled upon seeing this one. "Something tells me Leviathan wouldn't exactly like this guy if he met him. He seems like a fun guy. I can't wait to torture him just like everyone else on this Arceus-forsaken island! He's in."

There was only one paper left now, so Eternatus flipped again to see the final submission.

Name: Greer (submitted by JayDaShinigamiKitten)

Species: Morpeko

Gender: Female

Personality: Angry Scottish kid

Unique traits: Golfing cap like the female MC in SwSh

Relationship: if ya wanna give er one— go for it

Evolve: Nah

Team: idfk

Role: Chaotic neutral (basically both)

Eternatus sweat-dropped reading this one, soon announcing, "This one reminds me an awful lot of that Scottish girl who subdued me in Galar. Ugh, she pissed me off to no end. This will be fun, she's in too."

Tossing away the last paper, Eternatus looked up to see Deoxys, with the terrified cameraman next to him, who said, "Got the cameraman, Eternatus. May I go now?"

Eternatus sighed and said, "Yes, you can go now, Deoxys."

While Deoxys desperately floated away, Eternatus looked to the camera and continued, "That's all of them. Now then's let's see what spots are left now.

Kanto: 3

Johto: 4

Hoenn: 1

Sinnoh: 3

Unova: 2

Kalos: 4

Alola: 4

Galar: 2

Alright then! Now while I wait for the next batch of OCs, I'm going to resume my nap. Until next time on POKEMON ISLAND: ASTRAL CHAOS!"

Deoxys suddenly appeared in front of the camera and interrupted, "I don't think it's necessary to be that dramatic, Eternatus."

Eternatus turned to Deoxys and simply replied, "Shut up."



Oh, and you can submit up to two OCs. Just saying.

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