As salam o alaikum everyone
Hope you guys are fine.😌

Guzar chali thi dabay paon sham e tanhai
Tera khayal jo aaya tow ankh bhar aai..

Please give my your remarks
Mjhe pata hai meri poetry blkl achi nai lkn koshish krne main koi burai bhi tow nai😉
And..
Happy new year in advance.,😍❤