This Popstar's Story

This Popstar's Story by JustRunawayFox

Title: This Popstar's Story - 8/10

Seems to be a suitable title but it's not really creative.

Cover: 8.5/10

I like how it's a simple cover and that you made it yourself.

Summary:

Cast: 9/10

Levi Jones as Frans King

Emma Watson as Thea Sterling

Candace king as Victoria Accola

Orlando Bloom as Fred King

I love your cast...except this is the first time I've heard of Levi Jones also, I am curious about who plays Annie.

First few chapters: 8/10

The first few chapters(5 to be exact) all seem sad and depressing. It doesn't mess up the story but I personally don't really like sad stories but, I like how your writing isn't rushed and is flowing.

I've only read to chapter 6 right now but I'm assuming this is a romance story too?

Thea seemed to have lighten his mode in the first chapter he met her which, strangely fits well in your story with out making the romance part of the story overbearing.

Grammar,Editing: 10/10
I'm not keen on finding grammar/spelling errors in stories but a lot of Wattpad stories are poorly written and your story doesn't seem to be one of them.

Overall: 87%

This is a good book and I'll continue reading it in my free time.

Would I recommend it:
Yes, I would recommend it.

Especially since Emma Watson is in it, I love her!

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