i want to restart this story, keep the plot but write it out better/slightly different

i mean i was in my teens when it was first written, it's very embarrassing to read back, what was i thinking?!

but anyways, i'm thinking of rewriting the chapters, i'm open to ideas but i'll keep most of the original chapters the same unless i come up with something better.

in saying that, i think i will keep the original chapters in the story. shows my growth i guess aha.

what do you guys think?

revised chapter 1 is almost finished

- S.