All Hale the King - Halevetica

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: The story has a very few mistakes in regards with grammar. Another things was that, the author sometimes forget to put some punctuations after several words. But it's not that noticeable, unless you pay attention to it.
Character Building: The characters were good enough to swindle readers' emotions though it has some slip ups. Nevertheless, the character has strong impact and has an easy-going personality that makes the readers feel cool with it.
Writing Style: At first, I was confused whether the story was about some sort of mafia thing because of some things. But later on, as the story goes, I found what it's really all about.
Uniqueness of Plot: There are some similarities with other novels, but it doesn't completely follows those novels' paths that makes this story recognizable compared to other works.
Overall Enjoyment: I liked it! I like how the author take things slow.
☆ The story 'all hale the king' is written in a very entertaining way. It's a story where you'll find yourself curious of the things that was about to happen. It also possesses light aura that'll make the readers enjoy the story more. It's good that the author took his/her time in unraveling the things and showed very well how the characters differs in many aspects. Overall, it's a very good one and I recommend this story to a lot of readers. Just a tip, the author should also pay attention in applying punctuations after words (in doesn't affect the overall beauty of the novel though).

Judge: Riredia
There were a few minor grammar mistakes (knewly instead of newly) that were a teeny bit distracting, but I knew what they meant. The book is a fanfiction of sorts, but I imagine that the characters are well portrayed.
Some gifs were added, most likely from the show, but the writing was ver dead with no sense of emotion. I'm rather unfamiliar with the fandom, but it seems tropey.
Overall, I think that if you understood the show(or whatever it's from, I'm not sure) it would be good! But since I'm rather uneducated, it wasn't enjoyable for me.

Judge: Stargaryenn
-Grammar: A lot of missing punctuation marks and misspelled words.
-Character building: Gage is such a cinnamon roll. He is very lovable and grows on the reader very quickly. Also, Stiles is easy to like and provides an anchor to the plot since he is more stable than the other characters.
-Writing Style: It is basic with slight additions and descriptions. However, it could use some upgrading.
-Uniqueness of Plot: It is a cliché plot. Nevertheless, author keeps on adding twists, making the book enjoyable.
-Overall enjoyment: Even though the grammatical mistakes were annoying, I really enjoyed reading the book.
-comments: I honestly didn't think I'd like this book one bit since it's a fan-fiction of a show I do not watch or is familiar with at all. However, I was wrong. I actually found the book quite fun.

Build-A-Boyfriend - GotTheStyles

Judge: Stargaryenn
-Grammar: Misspelled words and misplaced comas and wrong sentences that needs correction.
-Character building: Hendrix is hilarious. We get to laugh with her. She's also so relatable and I kept on yelling "same" more than once.
-Writing Style: Very colourful style. Metaphors and funny limericks are used. However, with the mistakes available, sometimes the reader gets agitated and confused.
-Uniqueness of plot: Kinda cliché. However, the author adds a lot of plot twists making the storyline enjoyable.
-Overall enjoyment: Hilarious! Hendrix is such a funny, relatable character. I enjoyed the book.
-Comments: Overall, the story's idea is not new. Also, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. However, the author's genuineness and sense of humor made the book so much fun.

Judge: Riredia
perfect grammar, sarcastic narrator, funny plot, what more could you ask for? (It to not be a fanfic, but who cares? I live off sarcasm) however, characters don't change a lot, but there's enough of a change that's it more of an undertone.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Some grammar mistakes but it doesn't affect the overall story~ ♡
Character Building: Remarkable characters. Light and fun.
Writing Style: Very beautiful and east to follow
Uniqueness of the Plot: Haa similarities with other stories but it stood up on it's own way too.
Overall Enjoyment: Literally a page turner!
☆Review/s☆
Amazing! This novel is definitely worth-reading. Very beautiful, entertaining and every chapter will make you crave to read more. The main character is very cute and was built constantly together with the male lead. The story has light and fun theme that will surely capture every type of readers. But it captures, most especially, those who loves reading romantic novel the most~ ♡ Ut has some grammatical errors and lack of punctuation marks, but hey! nobody's perfect.

Cigarettes and Penicillin - lakeycreek

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Has very few mistakes but it doesn't really affect the story.
Character building: Though every chapter is a short one, the author did a good job in building the main character's personality throughout.
Writing Style: The story was very well presented, that any readers could understand it immediately. Though it's somehow confusing whether, what was really happening in the story? Yes, it's about war. But the author could've added some precise struggles of the main character.
Uniqueness of the Plot: I could say that the story has few similarities with other stories, but the author added some 'feels' that the story's impact became more realistic, like some third point of view's journal.
Overall Enjoyment: I liked every chapter. But as I've mention awhile ago, the author could've added more precise scenario, especially when describing JD (the main character) and the for the war itself.
☆Review/s☆
The story is good, unique on it's own way. It awakens readers emotions and it gives the sneak peek of what happened back then. What a medic (maybe) felt back then. I recommend this to be read by readers ^-^

Judge: Riredia
Perfect writing style. It was gripping and conveyed emotion really well. Each chapter was only a 100 words, but I got a lot of emotion from each thing. I felt the narrator grow up and learn and I felt the war was well done and everything drove forward. I absolutely loved reading this!

Judge: Stargaryenn
-Grammar: Rarely any mistakes. Just a few misplaced comas and few misspelled words.
-Character building: JD is the same through out the book. We don't get to know him personally and therefore we cannot relate with him most of the time.
-Writing Style: Mostly basic. All sentences are short and there are rarely any descriptions or metaphors.
-Uniqueness of the plot: Slightly different than the typical books.
-Overall enjoyment: Could've been better and more exciting if more emotions and descriptions were used.
-Comments: As an idea, the book is not bad. However, the book could use some changes such as better descriptions and more emotions.
Also, the reader needs to engage with JD and know what he's thinking and feeling in order to get hooked.

Color - thomaseng

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Perfectly written. It feels like reading a professional novel.
Character building: Character was built very well. Every description and simple thoughts of them, depicts everything that readers need to know about them.
Writing Style: Unique. Every simple description and scenarios were well written. A novel that you'll surely love to read.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Have a very few similarities with other stories. Nevertheless, the story is different in some aspects.
Overall Enjoyment: A story that you'll never get bored reading, as some say that historical fictions are boring. Very intriguing and exciting as the story goes.
☆Review/s☆
I definitely suggests this story to be read (red) by a lot of readers for it deserves better. The 1900's setting was perfectly shown and it's well-described. Interesting and refreshing as well, to feel like going back the times where modernization doesn't exist at all, just simple yet hopeful life.

Judge: Riredia
The characters in here grew well, I think. The grammar in here was perfect (if there was a mistake, I didn't see it..) and the writing! I could picture it! Such vivid imagery! The use of metaphors and similes threw me in. I like how the sport was the stepping stone for the story. It's not just a book about a sport, it's a book about people living their life in world war 1.

Judge: Stargaryenn
-Grammar: I didn't see any grammatical errors.
-Character building: Henry is such an amazing character. He got us to watch from a black person's point of view what it is like to be discriminated against. Also, the readers can relate to him and to his reactions.
-Writing Style: a very unique writing style. However, sometimes the sentences and the descriptions get a little confusing.
-Uniqueness of plot: It could be kind of cliché since a lot of books dealt with discrimination before. However, there are a lot of plot twists and moments that make the book unique.
-overall enjoyment: I really enjoyed reading this book.
-Comments: Usually, this book is not my type at all. However, it's very obvious how much the author engrosses his/her feelings into the story, making it very emotional and heartfelt.

Crown of Thorns - zanthenewt

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Very well. Grammatically pleasant and punctuation on point.
Character building: Characters leave a strong impact. It'll make you feel nervous, anxious and excited as well.
Writing Style: For me, the way it is written is very unique and clear.
Uniqueness of the Plot: It has similarities with other stories, but it doesn't mean that it depends on those stories. Instead, it shines brightly on its own way.
Overall Enjoyment: I really love it! It was exciting to read, for it makes the reader feel the roller coaster ride of the story.
☆Review/s☆
Very exciting to read. Every chapter will make you love each character, understand them and the way it was presented is very precise. It was like, the author's imagination wanders everywhere and it also brings you to where it goes. I hope that it'll get famous because seriously, this is a very good one

Judge: Riredia
I did not know this was a fanfic till I scrolled further down in the description... and that's amazing! Before I read that, I thought it was their own fully fledged story! Everything is well written and the main character seems 3 dimensional. I'm a sucker for some form of magic, so I want to read on, but it hasn't quite gotten to be a page Turner in the beginning.

Judge: Stargaryenn
-Grammar: Very few grammatical errors that i noticed along the way. Other than that, PERFECT grammar.
-Character Building: We get to live with Ayesha, know her fears and meet her family and friends. She's a very engaging character.
-Writing Style: Very, very well written chapters that are easy to follow and understand.
-Uniqueness of the plot: It could be slightly similar to other YA books. However, there are a lot of new ideas and also a remarkable plot.
-overall enjoyment: The book is so well-written and the author's style and descriptions are just beautiful. The reader gets hooked and needs to continue reading to know more.
-comments: The author is extremely talented and the book is enjoyable.

enchantement - Soulbond - PhoenixLex

Judge: GreenBlues
The first thing I noticed before I even began to read was the large chunks of paragraphs used. I don't mean this in a bad way, but readers tend to skip over lengthy paragraphs, so it would be better to space them, so it becomes an easier read.
In terms of grammar, there were multiple times where there were tense mistakes. I would recommend you take note of them and proofread or get an editor because there are some people who are extremely put off by mistakes and it would be a pity if they would not be able to experience your work. There were also words that needed the 'isolation' to give a better impact on the way people read the text.
I enjoyed the way you portrayed your characters as well as the pace of the story. Your writing improved as it progressed – in terms of your diction and grammar. I enjoyed the different spin on these two characters, especially in the beginning! Props to you for this really good work. I'd be happy to continue to read your work, and I hope you never lose your interest in writing!

Judge: Riredia
A majority of the paragraphs are far too long and left me wanting to skip over it. No one likes reading a wall of text, sadly. Try finding a break in the long paragraphs where the topic changes, the main thought changes, or if you start focusing on a different person. There's a lot of bold lettering. So much of it starts to strain my eyes, especially when it's full on paragraphs. Also, I can see what type of scene you're trying to create, but finding words that help describe the tone or setting would make it even easier for others to see.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: It has very few grammar mistakes, as well as to punctuations deficiency and typographical errors.
Character building: The characters were made systematically, though there are few slip ups as the story goes by.
Writing Style: As a judge, I really loved the story because of it's unpredictable outcome. Though at first, it was really confusing and the author should make it more broad and more approachable, in a way that even non-Harry Potter fans would easily understand the flow of the story.
Uniqueness of the Plot: The story is really beautiful. It's plot twist is something you don't expect to be. It's just that, it somehow resembles other Harry Potter fanfic stories at some parts.
Overall Enjoyment: I liked the flow and the plot twist of the story. It makes me excited and curious at the same time.
☆Review/s☆
The story is different from others, plot twist based. But it is somehow confusing, especially on the first part. In addition to, I'm not a Harry Potter fan myself, so there are some characters and scenario that I couldn't understand. So I think that the author shoukd make it more clear and understandable even though the reader is not a Harry Potter fan. Keep up the good work. Fighting!

her choice: rosé - matchaeee

Judge: GreenBlues
It was an adequately enjoyable read overall, however I wish that the plot wouldn't be so rushed. The story would be much more enjoyable if it was paced and you took the time to introduce the characters [even though we all know of them already] and their backgrounds instead of a few sentences only. The characters seemed very two dimensional, and there wasn't much depth to them. Maybe you could start with a simple conflict and work from there to show their individual characteristics.
Furthermore, the plot was interesting, but I felt that this was too much of a cliché and I wanted to see some more plot twists or changes that would make readers feel more intrigued to finish the story. Nevertheless, I applaud your efforts and dedication to write as many chapters as you have currently.
I didn't spot much mistakes in your grammar, and I was able to read the chapters smoothly. Another thing I wanted to note was the fact that you bolded all your dialogues which made it easier for readers to differentiate between the paragraphs and the normal monologues or descriptions. However, I hope you wouldn't use too much Korean words in your text without having the words after to allow the readers to get a gist of what the characters are saying because it might confuse some of us who are not proficient in the language. I love the fact that you can incorporate it into your dialogues though, don't get me wrong. But it would be preferred if you could describe what you wrote or include a glossary.
Please continue to write! And I hope you don't take my words as insults, and just creative criticism for improvement so others may further and truly appreciate your work..

Mr. Bloody Handsome - Prntai

Judge: crazySaddistAlien 
Grammar: The first part, which is the introduction, was very promising and encouraging. It'll surely make the readers excited and curious. But then, as the story goes by, you will notice that the story has a lot of mistakes than correct ones. I hope the author would work on that.
Character building: When making or creating a character, the author must set goals on how the character/s would look like. Description is a very critical and important role, but it is not necessary to have a one-shot definition. It could be shown through their actions and words. Don't make the readers confused of who's who. If it's necessary to drop the name of the characters, do it.
Writing Style: The story was actually good. But the author should have edited his/her work to make it more powerful and unique.
Uniqueness of the Plot: If the story is judged from the surface, it is noticeable that the plot is really cliche. But the author has her own way of making her story different from others.
Overall Enjoyment: The flow of the story is cliche, somehow, it's hard to understand because there's a lot of mistakes. But that's how the author expressed his/her self and I appreciate it.
☆Review/s☆
Overall, when we talk about the story, it is amazing. At the same time, very exciting. But as the first chapter started, a lot of mistakes are observable and it might drain the readers interest in reading the story (an ARMY or non-ARMY). So I suggest that the author should exert more time and effort in editing the story. Keep it up!

Judge: Riredia
lots of missed periods which makes sentences very run on. I liked your addition of a cast list, but instead of just listing facts, make it a short paragraph. Bonus points if you choose to treat it like you're interviewing them. Doing so could give readers a better sense of how the characters are.

Judge: GreenBlues
The plot was cute in the way you incorporated famous clichés – albeit overplayed and little rushed, but it added to the reading experience. Who doesn't love a little cliché every once in a while? However, I would love it a little more if you could slow the pace of the story and allow everyone to get to know the characters and fall in love with them even more which pushes me onto the topic of character building. I felt that the objective was too quickly introduced and there were no allowances for plot twists or anything that could spice up your writing.
As for grammar, I know there are a ton of people who speak multiple languages (hell, even English isn't my first) but I feel that the language used here was understandable but not without noticeable errors. The punctuation also needs a little bit more improvement.
On a brighter note, I loved the little details of gifs and photos you put at the end of the chapters. I felt like it added a little more dimension to your writing and gave your readers a better sense of picture as they read your story. Overall, I liked the idea of your story and I hope you will continue to write!

Reminiscence - -savagequeen-

Judge: GreenBlues
I swear I'm not biased despite the fact that I'm not at all in love with Lang Leav. Not as a person, but because of her writing style and her utter romanticism of mental illnesses. You may not agree with me. However, I did enjoy your poems – typically the first one because it was simple and moving.
I did not notice any grammar issues, because sometimes it comes with the way the poem is being written. As for character building, personally, as I couldn't see any progress of characters in the poems you write. Maybe instead of basing your poems on only one aspect of a love story, you could transition a story within the different paragraphs of a single poem. Or create multiple sequels to one poem.
Lastly, about the unique plots. I'm sorry to say but I felt that most of your poems were stagnant because it was mainly based on love – like how two people meet or how they break up. There are tons of poems based on love and I felt that since you have 42 poems currently, there should be more variety. Poetry should be about the exploration of your feelings and views on the world, and there is so much more to write about that I felt your talent was being wasted on simply limiting your ideas.
But please continue to write, and I would love to see your growth as a writer with more variety of your poems.

Judge: Riredia
I'mm a sucker for sad poetry, especially ones that seem unrelated but actually continue in a story-like manner as you read on.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Though it's poetry, the author should still check on some mistakes in grammar and use of words. Punctuation marks are also a critical part in making a poem.
Character building: All I could say is, powerful! The character was constantly built all the way through and leaves a very strong impact that you could say it's a straight-to-the-heart.
Writing Style: The poem is beautiful. Once you read it, it will hit the 'feels', though it is somehow confusing at some point.
Uniqueness of the Plot: I've read some of Lang Leav's poems/books and I could say that somehow, it really resembles the book that Leav did. But the author of reminiscence added color to her own poems that it can stand on it's own and easy to follow.
Overall Enjoyment: I'm really not a fan of poetry, but I appreciate how authors/poet constructed their poems in a deeper way. There's mistakes, and it is inevitable. For the author, keep doing your passion and strive hard.
☆Review/s☆
A kind of literature that you'll surely love as a reader, generally, and it's not just for poem lovers only. Amazing and well-built. Keep it up!

Ruination: A Poetry Oneshot - ESJohnson

Judge: crazySaddistAlien 
Grammar: There's a very few mistakes in terms of using punctuation marks, grammar and sentence structure. Overall, it does not affect the story.
Character building: The character leaves a strong impact especially to people who suffers the same feeling. Very beautiful and amazing.
Writing Style: In poetry, rules is not always implemented for free verse exists. The structure and the tone of the poem is well-written. Though I observed that the spacing was quite messy.
Uniqueness of the Plot: The kind of genre used was not that popular and as a result, the poem leaves a strong impression and impact to me, as a reader and judge.
Overall Enjoyment: Precisely, wonderful, beautiful, amazing! It's really a page turner.
☆Review/s☆
The poem created is amazing and awesome. It'll not only stand on it's own, but it is also a very powerful piece to be made as the introduction of a story (if ever). Though perfect grammarization and uniqueness of the plot in unachievable, the author still did his/her best in narrating the poem. Fighting!

Judge: Riredia
I'm not quite sure what this poem is describing. It's beautiful, yes, but what does it mean? I picture a few things reading it. Is it a man who has fallen head over heels for a woman who only wants money and power out of him? (And yes, i'm weird) but I also picture the sun and moon. The sun is bright, golden, undying. He longs for the moon, but she uses his power to make herself seen.

Judge: GreenBlues
I love the fact that this poem was based on off one of your very own characters in a separate story. Because even though I've never read any of your work before (which is now a basic slap in the face that I should start) I could imagine the characters and their folly. As for character building, I really like the fact that we could see into the character from the first paragraph. The only critique I could give would be to pace the poem. I would love to see the transition of the character within the poem itself instead of only focusing on one subject matter.
As for writing style, I lived for the isolation of your words and the all small caps because it only added to the overall aesthetic of the writing. Props to you for all the subtle details that enhanced my reading experience!
Lastly, in terms of plot uniqueness, despite having this poem being based off your original work, I felt like I have read poetry like this before due to the phrases that you use. Despite all that, I hope that you take my critique with only a grain of salt and continue to weave your lovely thoughts into more work to be enjoyed by everyone.

Sacred | Cameron Frye - singstreet

Judge: ANTARl
This Fanfiction was really good! I actually had to nearly force myself to quit reading it and move on! I didn't find nearly any grammatical errors, something I'm very happy about, as it makes the story flow much better if you don't have to pause and decipher out a word or phrase! Very well done!

Judge: GreenBlues
I really love the way you paragraph and incorporate your dialogues into the text! it's very smooth and easy to read, and you already seem to have a natural flair of weaving words into your text - not many people do. also, you use your 'stutter' dialogues sparingly which becomes really effective in my opinion!
In terms of any criticism, i wish that you would have introduced the inner conflict more quickly (don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with the pace of your story) but, as a reader, i would wish to see the conflicts quickly to keep me hooked on the story itself.
And finally, i loved your characters! they were a little cheeky and slightly sassy, which is just what i want in a character to spice things up. continue writing and good luck for this competition!! and cameron was such a shy thing, i just wanted to bundle him up and hide him away from the rest of the world. keep writing! i'd love to read more of your work!

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: I noticed very few grammatical mistakes.
Character building: Perfect! I love how different all the characters are and how the author manages each one of them without making them seem too boring or too loud.
I love the friendship between Cameron and Ferris even though they are the complete opposite with Cameron's quiet nature and Ferris's outgoing but caring one.
I love the girls too. Sloane is so much fun and Caitlin is adorable!
Writing Style: So unique and easy to follow!
Uniqueness of Plot: I love how cheesy yet adorable the plot is even though it's slightly cliché. It's so sweet! The characters and the events are so lovable as well.
Overall Enjoyment: One of my favourites by far.
Comments: I enjoyed this book so much! It's funny and sweet. It totally hooks the reader as well. Great job, author!

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: The story was promising. But the author still needs to work on some grammatical errors and punctuation failures that is really inevitable in stories.
Character building: I love how the author take things slowly. He/She did not rush trough and instead, he/she make sure that the main characters, as well as supporting ones, can shine on their own. That's why, it leaves a strong impressions.
Writing Style: It was simple yet very easy to follow with. Sometimes, simplicity was even better than complicated ones, so I gave a thumbs up for the author. The writing style was also friendly or it posses a light aura that it makes the story easy to follow and understand.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Since the story depicts the life of a student boy, it kinda resembles some story with that kind of plot/flow. Though it was not really cliche at its finest, it still has the element that the other stories also possess.
Overall Enjoyment: I liked how I can easily relate to the story since I'm also a student ^-^ I also liked the flow of it.
☆Review/s☆
The story was really good, no doubt. It was easy to follow with and it's more easier to understand and to love. Even if the reader was not familiar with the main character, it will not affect or hinder the readers while reading. Keep up the good work, FIGHTING!

Silver Darkness - Witto150

Judge: GreenBlues
I really liked the descriptions you included in your writing! even without the pictures of the different characters, i am able to imagine their movements and the way the scene plays out! well done in that aspect!
Your grammar was good, and i could barely find any errors. however, the only criticism i have for your writing style would be the way you isolate your paragraphs in between dialogues. i wish there would be more space and the paragraphs would have more 'character' in a sense.
Long paragraphs make it easy for readers to just skip over, but equal length paragraphs make it harder to understand and identify where the dialogue and finish reading through because of the way it sets the pace of reading.
Despite that, i really liked your plot even though it seemed a little less mature compared to the things i normally read. that is one of the only things that actually affected my overall enjoyment, however it is a matter of preference and please do not take this comment too seriously. not every book appeals to every reader no matter how good it is!
Continue writing & I wish the best for you in this competition!

Judge: ANTARl 
Not much to say about this one! I did really enjoy it, but I found myself getting easily confused about who was talking, or who was doing what.

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: The book contains some grammatical mistakes that are noticeable. However, it doesn't bother the reader that much. They could be easily corrected.
Character building: I like how each Hedgehog has his own personality that makes him different than the others. I also like how they have different types of powers as well.
Each hedgehog is special in his own way, making it fun to read about them.
Writing Style: The book is written in an inventive way but could be slightly confusing in some parts.
Uniqueness of Plot: Very unique plot and contains a lot of exciting events. Also the plot shows how imaginative the author is.
Overall Enjoyment: I liked the book. I like how creative the book actually is and how the author is able to describe different events and characters in a precise and fun way.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: By reading the first part of story, which is the author's note, it'll be too early to judge the story being lame, since the author said he/she wasn't fluent with English. But then, by reading the story, the reader's will change their mindset and would rather love the story's structure. Though of course, it is not avoidable to have errors.
Character building: The characters were kind of confusing since there's a lot of descriptions about them and they were slightly similar with each other. But as the story goes on, the characters were eventually presented.
Bonus: I love how the villain was characterized with a heart. It was not selfish, but rather loves the family it has.
Writing Style: Having the story's genre was refreshing at the same time, confusing. Reading the story without deeper understanding about the characters and settings was really hard. The way it was written was good, the usage of words and technical terms were appropriate, but it should also be easily understood.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Every story has it's similar ones, so I gave a points of 4.5
Overall Enjoyment: I liked the story though it's confusing, I'm not a fan of it, but it flows really well.
☆Review/s☆
Silver Darkness was really a good story. It not only tackles the adventure of the main character, but it is also about the build-up of stronger relationship with one another. I hope the author continues his/her passion to inspire and to write the story.

Surreptitious Waterfalls - Exodus_Reimagined

Judge: GreenBlues
Okay before i start, i'd like to mention was honestly one of my favourites! i really liked the way i could your point of view through the poem itself, and agreed with the entire thing.
Moving on, your grammar was spot on, i could see almost no mistakes. however, it is a given with poems that the normal bars to language are slightly blurred and do not really apply as literature is forgiving when it comes to poems.
In terms of character building, there are not many characters. despite that, i really liked the way you incorporated your views into the text.
In terms of writing style, i read plenty different styles in a single book and was extremely pleased. you included the pretty and light descriptions that make people just go, 'wow' and you also had the nitty gritty words that make people cringe at the insult in them. i absolutely love the variety you present and i hope you will continue to do so!
I like how you write poems base don your experiences or what inspires you, but i hope you would explore more topics. you could try controversial topics, or taboos like racism, or maybe homosexuality in certain areas of the world?

Judge: ANTARl
Character Building: there were no characters, really, as it was poetry, so I'll be using this as whether or not the author grew
Plot Uniqueness: again, no plot, so this will be about whether or not the theme of the poem continued throughout the poem
Comments: This book was really fun to read! I've really read poetry before, so I'm glad that I got the chance to read this one!

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: Such a talented poet! The poems are written perfectly with no grammatical errors.
Character building: Each poem has its own character, with a little piece of the author or one of the author's beliefs in it. The author was able to create personal poems that are able to touch the heart and the soul.
Writing Style: The author owns such a unique and sophisticated style. The descriptions are perfect and the author knows how to deliver a message through the poems. I also love the fact that some poems rhyme while others don't.
Uniqueness of Plot: Each poem has its own story and background, each being authentic. The reader doesn't know what to expect the next poem to be about, making it such a lovely poetry book.
Overall Enjoyment: a lot of the poems spoke to me on a personal level, making my heart hurt a little. Honestly, the book is nothing but gorgeous with its cover and the pictures added in each chapter related to the poem. The poems are beautiful and the author is really talented. Love it.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Structure wise in writing the poems. Though, there are some terms that has different meaning than what the author really wants to say. Though, overall, it's good.
Character building: It creates strong impact that reader's can learn something by reading the poem and the attached quotes. Very inspiring and beautifully made.
Writing style: By having poetry as a chosen literature, it already means the writer is trying to be unique. But the equivalent of that was also hard. It's good that the author kept the poems simple yet constructive.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Though the poetry was good, it still resembles some literature inclined with poetry. The plot or thoughts were somehow used by other authors, too.
Overall Enjoyment: I enjoyed reading the beautiful poems. It inspires me to also write and share my thoughts in unique way with regards of particular topics.
☆Review/s☆
The title of the story was eye-catching and it is something that would get the reader's attention. The way the author expressed the suppressed feelings were somehow strong enough to move one's amazement towards poetry. Well written and planned.

Symphony of Lilacs - mszame

Judge: GreenBlues
personally, i really love historical fiction pieces so i may be a little biased when i say i love the time frame it is set in and the different character behaviour.
as a reader, i was able to see the conflict from the beginning, and was immediately intrigued from the first chapter. your grammar was really good, and i didn't spot much errors at all. maybe a few punctuation errors, but we all have that sometimes.
in terms of character building, i really like the flow and pace of the description and inner conflict. i was able to see the complexity of mathilda through the eyes of the doctor. however, what i wish is that you would switch point of views to her, or maybe even provide an omniscient view so that readers will squirm at the information they receive that the characters may never know of.
regarding writing style, i feel that it fits the time period, despite the modern language you use. even though it was a risky decision considering the era you were writing about, it allowed readers to easily understand what the characters were saying instead of using old english. because who honestly can understand every single thing shakespeare wrote without referring to the internet?
anywho, keep writing and i shall continue to read your story (of my own accord) while the competition proceeds. good luck and have fun!

Judge: ANTARl
In this book, I'm a bit confused, to be honest. I don't understand some of the slang terms used, and the writing is a bit hard to follow. However, with practice, I'm sure that the authors writing will improve.

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: Perfect grammar.
Character building: I honestly like the characters a lot. I like Matthew's personality and how he's such a gentleman. I love how very decent all the other characters in the book are, including Matthew's siblings and his mentor. It's refreshing to read a book that takes place in times where everything was so classy.
Writing Style: As beautiful as the writing style was, it was slightly confusing to me especially that the author chooses to use less names in the book and prefers referring to the characters as "the former/the latter". In my opinion, it would be better to use the names of the characters more so the reader won't get lost.
However, the writing style is so unique and lovely.
Uniqueness of Plot: I love how creative and new this plot is. The fact that it takes place in older times makes it even more unique.
Overall Enjoyment: I really liked the book! The author is very talented and can manage the book perfectly. Amazing!

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: It was carefully written to the point that it could be compared to those of professionally written stories. It may have some flaws, which in unavoidable, but it didn't really affect the story. I guess one day, I'll see it as one of the most famous book coming from wattpad.
Character Building: Having a perspective coming from a guy is very interesting since a lot of stories were written in POV of a girl, or it's commonly the main protagonist. In the story, characters were mysterious and it will really dig someone's interest on reading the story.
Writing Style: Though there are terms that is somehow unfamiliar with me, personally, it still makes the story more attractive. (Note: Thank you for additional knowledge). It's unique yet easy to read and understand. It's straight to the point and unlike other stories, it's not something that will make the readers sick of redundancies and irrelevant words.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Despite it's beautiful plot and story, it is also not shocking to see some similarities from other stories.
Overall Enjoyment: It's not that light and it's also not that heavy. Easy to follow and understand. Amazingly made by the author, so thumbs up for it.
☆Review/s☆
The story was awesome. Having a story with modulated tone was very unusual for me. It wasn't that serious and not that easy too. A promising story that I guess I'll see on bookstores, sooner or later. The story title along with it's cover is very eye-catching. For the author, keep on inspiring a lot of people. God bless

The Cheshire Cat - MaryEllenCampbell

Judge: Riredia
Grammar- I'm aware that it was intentional, but it is too distracting. My brain latched on to commas intended to create a pause for a poem form.
Character Build - Characters were rigid, but they did not need to grow in a story like this. Cheshire Cat had a few changes, from searching to working.
Writing Style - The writing style was not how many write today! It was definitely meant to be an homage to how Lewis Caroll and other children fantasy writers wrote during the times. It felt whimsical, but was hard to get a good flow.
Plot - The plot was simplistic, but was a relatively interesting tale. It didn't read me wanting to read on, but it also didn't make me wish I could set the story on fire.
Enjoyment - I would not read it if I wasn't judging it. Still, it was okay, and if I could ignore the grammar and gotten really into the flow of the book, I think it would've been an okay read.
Total - Mary, I'd reccomend writing it more like poetry and dropping some of the emojis, they were distracting. I really enjoyed the photos added, they were really quite beautiful!

Judge: ANTARl
I didn't like the formatting of the text that much, as pictures often were stuck in between paragraphs, along with emoticons after particular words.

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: No grammatical errors were spotted.
Character building: The cheshire cat is such an entertaining character.
Writing style: The writing style was inventive and special but a little confusing for me as a reader.
Uniqueness of plot: A very unique piece of writing, showing the talent of the author.
Comments: I liked the idea of the book and the author's way of writing and expressions.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Using appropriate words and punctuation marks was never easy and so, it'll never be perfect.
Character Building: As a poet, you should have strong personality, stand and belief so your readers can relate to you easily and you'll be able to persuade them into something that you believe or what you're trying to portray. The author amazingly characterized the story into something deeper than what I've expected so, I gave a perfect score.
Writing Style: I was personally used in reading poems that follows the standard form of writing poem. Nevertheless, the author did a great job writing his/her pieces that sometimes follows-sometimes not the standard form and the words used was not that deep not to be understood by readers.
Uniqueness of the Plot: When it comes to uniqueness of story, one cannot really achieve the uniqueness they've been working for since making a story was also inspired by other external factors that other authors might also be inspired to. Though, the story itself was beautifully made on its own.
Overall Enjoyment: T'was really enjoyable and I enjoyed reading it. I may not a fan of reading poems, but it's an exception.
☆Review/s☆
The poem was made carefully. It was surely an entertaining one yet it portrays something deeper than what you just read on the surface. Symbolism at its finest, I could say. It's good that the author also made it more approachable and used English that is easier to understand by majority. The background he/she have included at the end was also very informative. It was shocking for me, if someone would ask. For all, the story-poem was really good and I recommend readers to read this beautiful art.

The Dream Travel Adventures, Book 2 - Cristalina_Starr

Judge: Riredia
I like it, but I'm confused because every character is thrown at your face without much explanation. I get that it's book 2, but you should reestablish basic facts in a better way.

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: Spelling mistakes, misplaced and missing punctuation marks. Also, sometimes the tenses are not constant.
Character building: A lot of characters are introduced at the same time, with each his/her own POV, making it hard to concentrate on one character and to get attached to him/her.
Writing style: A lot, A LOT, of POVs in the same chapter. Although this might be slightly interesting, it is also really confusing. Avoid jumping for one pov to the other so quickly.
Uniqueness of plot: New idea; however, I'm slightly confused, not fully understanding what is going on. I'll assume it's because I didn't read part 1 of the book. However, if in book one, the stuff about doppelgängers and other worlds are not explained, then it needs more organizing and explanations.
Overall enjoyment: It's a good plot, but the spelling mistakes and the jumping from one pov to the other is irritating.
Comments: it needs some editing. Also a lot of mistakes between You're and Your that needs changing. Also, make POVs more concentrated and longer.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: As I've read on the introduction, it says that it was written by three authors. It was a good story, but grammar mistakes, improper usage of punctuations and wrong spellings of words were kinda noticeable. I could suggest that the authors could have helped each other to proofread the others' work so they can change some mistakes.
Character Building: Characters were kinda confusing and when they were exchanging, I feel so lost.
Writing Style: The writing style was also confusing. Since it was written by 3 authors, it is good to have literally 3 different persona, but at the same time, it can make readers confused on who's who.
Uniqueness of the Plot: It reflected similar stories so I rate this as 4.5
Overall Enjoyment: Reading the story was exciting and it will rise someone's curiosity. It has a lot of things to improve, but what's important is the heart of the story, it's message and author's desire to go on.
☆Review/s☆
The story was actually good, it is exciting and was actually different from other stories. The theme of the story was actually quite unique, bridging the cliche walls of other stories. But as I've mentioned, it requires improvement and editing. All in all, readers will surely love reading this.

The Shadow Chasers - jettmanas

Judge: Riredia
I think it's well written. I understand the point of bolding the location changes, mainly because that's how you see it in TV shows. You laid out basics of Totally Spies and I thank you for that. I've never watched it. I might end up reading more when I have free time.

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: Perfect grammar, couldn't even spot a single mistake.
Punctuation marks are well used and placed. The tenses of the verbs are constant throughout.
Character building: The characters all seem the same, even though whoever watches the show knows that each girl has her personality and her own comments and remarks.
Writing style: Easy to follow and to keep up with. It's not considered confusing or boring.
Uniqueness of plot: The plot is kind of cliché, but the author adds enough twists and personal touches that it makes me want to continue reading.
Overall enjoyment: Even though I love Totally Spies, I wasn't sure I'd like this since I'm not a huge fan of Fanfics other than Fanfics of books. However, the book is so much fun and well-written. It is very easy to read and to enjoy.
Comments: The book is well edited and carried out. Also, very interesting to read.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: The way the author used description was appropriate without being too cringe-y.
Character Buiilding: Characters were described vividly and it's good that the readers could easily identify each characters' characteristics. It's also good that even not-totally-spies-fan could easily go with the story's flow through characters identification.
Writing Style: A story where you can think of as written by professional writer wherein it undergone professional editor. The way the characters were described are too beautiful and amazing.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Though the story was really enjoyable, it could never be unique without reflecting other stories' story, so I rate it with 4.5, having a similarities with other stories.
Overall Enjoyment: It feels like reading a book that is written by a well-known author, it's enjoyable and a total page turner. Good job!
☆Review/s☆
Good, inspiring and easy-to-fall-in-love-with kind of story. It does not require a dictionary to be on your side to understand the terms used. A very friendly kind of story but well-thought. Keep it up but be humble no matter what.

The Smart, the Sassy, and the Shy - infinitemonster16

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: The grammar is perfect; I couldn't spot any grammatical mistakes.
Character building: I like how each character has her/his own personality and traits. However, it is kind of irritating how it seems that they have only THIS SINGLE trait.
Writing style: The writing style is easy to follow and to keep up with while being unique.
Uniqueness of plot: Slightly cliché due to the fact that the Harry Potter fandom is huge. However, the author keeps on adding twists and details that makes the story interesting.
Overall enjoyment: The book is actually very entertaining and it hooks the reader but unfortunately in the later chapters not in the first few ones.
Comments: as a Potterhead, I'm very picky with my HP fanfics. This book, however, is refreshing and worth reading especially due to the fact that the "Trio" are not the main attraction, for a change.

Judge: Riredia
OMG! I like that the character aren't part of Gryffindor and interact with Harry. They are bystanders who witness his escapades and have their own story. It flowed nicely and I wish I read further to see why Scarlet seems so aggressive even though I think she has a kind heart.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: Good choice of words, it's not something that is used to show-off, but to be understood by majority of readers. Usage of punctuation marks and grammars were sometimes off, but it doesn't really affect the beauty of the story.
Character Building: Every characters leaves strong impressions. The three main characters were too cute and they were easily identified with each other. Very good way of describing them was giving them enough amount of time to shine on their own.
Writing Style: Very easy to follow with. When I first read it, it really got my attention. I guess it was one of the stories I've judged that I will going continue reading.
Uniqueness of the Plot: Has very few similarities with other literary works, may be famous or not, but it stand on its own so.. good job.
Overall Enjoyment: A total page turner. Something that readers must read. Reading it is not boring and it's really enjoyable. I'm sure, readers will also love the three main characters.
☆Review/s☆
I've enjoyed reading this fanfiction. It's really cute and amazing at the same time. Characters were easy to love as they portrayed their roles and personalities very different and accurate all the time. It's amazing how the story could touch a lot of topics and it also depicts a lot of message, not only for kids or teens, but for any age range of readers.

Voices In My Head - Euna__

Judge: Stargaryenn
Grammar: Noticeable grammatical errors, especially in the first chapters.
Character building: Since there are no characters in this book, I'll judge the "author" building. The author gets more personal along the chapters and starts talking about topics that are considered to be taboo and also talks about a lot of stuff that the reader can relate to.
Writing style: Writing style differs from one chapter to the other. A chapter could be a letter while the one following it could be a poem. Very unique style and the author shows talent in being able to manage the different styles.
Uniqueness of plot: Each chapter is different than the one before which makes it exciting since the reader doesn't know what to expect next or what topic would be tackled in the next chapter.
Overall enjoyment: I honestly enjoyed this book tremendously. It's heart-touching and heartbreaking. The author knows how to deliver what he/she feels in the most heartfelt way.
Comments: Progress is seen through the book since the first few chapters were not as good as the later ones.

Judge: Riredia
Here's a simple truth: Character growth isn't supposed to be here for this book. This is well-written internal thoughts that read like poetry of life and it's faults. The few mistakes seen were with commas, but I only noticed because I started looking for them after reading through the chapter once. I'll definitely be reading more later.

Judge: crazySaddistAlien
Grammar: A good way to voice out your thoughts is using proper words to describe something, and the author reached that standard. But of course, grammatical errors, typographical errors and punctuation marks errors were not inevitable. But I might say, it's not that disturbing for readers to not read/like the story.
Character Building: I believed that the author has really poured his/her feels and passion in writing the story. I could feel the raw emotions lingering and it's really amazing.
Writing Style: Uniquely written with feelings, I could say. The story did strike me right into the feels and despite of some things, the story was easy to follow with.
Uniqueness of the Plot: It's similar with other poems/stories, but this story was added by different flavor which made the work different from other ones.
Overall Enjoyment: When I read the work, I seriously did not realize what chapter I've already finished because it really striked me right into the feels.
☆Review/s☆
Amazing! Just simply amazing! It's really a work where you'll find yourself staring at ceiling or anywhere while reflecting on yourself. A story where you'll find yourself in tears, wondering why you're crying. It's a story where, personally, you can learn the value and importance of life. For the author, I would like to say thank you for creating your wonderful work. It was really inspiring and beautiful. God bless you and keep up the good work.