Buried Alive - _Diarra_16

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar: This book has very very very few mistakes I would even dare to say none existent, but they are there and sadly I had to go with the 4. I'm pretty sure if the author gives it a once over the grammar would become perfect. :)
Character Building: This book only has 5 chapters but I can honestly it was enough to judge on these criteria :) The character built up is perfect. It leaves a really strong impression to the readers especially me. In the short 5 chapters I fell in love with Laura, and I could even see myself being friends with her :)
Writing Style: Not only the writing style was unique, easy to follow it was perfect. I loved the way the writer wrote this book almost like a song. I was very surprised when I started reading. You don't find writing like this very often :)
The uniqueness of the Plot: The plot of this story completely differs in every aspect. There's a little similarity in the forced marriage, but honestly, the girl is a Muslim. Is something you see in that religion, but the writer managed to make her unique and her own. A really good job.
Overall Enjoyment: This book is amazing, 5 chapter wasn't nearly enough. I was left needing more. I fell in love with the character and the story. I am reading this book until the end. Totally a page turner!

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Corruption - amandajacobson1

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story had very noticeable mistakes. I had to stop reading and re-read the sentence to try and decipher what the writer wanted to tell.
Character Building- There were a few slip-ups on character discovery, but they were very little so don't get discouraged by it.
Writing Style- The writing style was very unique and easy to follow, a really good job on the writing style.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The story was really unique and completely differs in every aspect. I don't think I have read a story similar to this one. It's about corruption in a totally new and inventive way :)
Overall Enjoyment: I enjoy reading this story. Keep up the good work!

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Fiery Sugar vs. Savage Spice - KozmicKookieDxD

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
The grammar was perfect in my opinion. I didn't find any grammatical error, no incorrect use of punctuation. No type errors.
Character Building- There are only 8 chapters in the book, but in my opinion, the characters built all the way through. They left a strong impression on me the reader. :)
Writing Style- The writing style was very unique and very easy to follow. It was very inventive and refreshing to read.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The story crosses the storyline of both originality and similarity. Is a love and hate story about the Major daughter and the Mafia's son. It had a hint of cliche but the author added a lot of twists that made me wanna keep reading.
Overall Enjoyment: Overall I like the story. I am looking forward to reading more.

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For His Sake - lily97000

Judge: rageynerd

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story had very noticeable mistakes.
The character Building was good enough.
Writing Style- The writing style was very easy to follow.
The uniqueness of the Plot- When you start to read the description of the story you think is going to be like any other romance novels that involves a hot CEO and the girl, but this story gives you a nice surprise and it completely differs in every aspect, is not the usual CEO meets girl, have some rough start then fall in love. This story is very heartbreaking from the very beginning making you feel bad for Emily who's in love with her best friend who doesn't feel the same way about her. :(
Overall Enjoyment: The story was good enough and has the potential to be great.

Judge: ar_ya_writes
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Glass Castles - aubrynn_writes

Judge: rageynerd
Does it start on ch.4? The storyline buildup seems off. Felt like I was halfway through the book and dropped off in the middle in the first posted chapter. In my opinion there was too much dialogue. In the storyline and setting there was not enough description in general, and certainly not enough to balance out the dialogue. By chapter 3, you should already be introducing us to a conflict of some sort. We have the angry Asian boy but that's about it so far, and it's not a plot. In what I'm assuming is the end of chapter 6, it seemed like we were gonna get one, and then chapter 7 completely abandoned it. For future writing, as yourself this: what is gonna make readers want to read about Vetta? What separates her and her friends from every other story about college roommates? Don't let this discourage you, just consider taking it from a different angle!

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- Has very few mistakes. I could have read the book smoothly and wouldn't even notice the errors if I wasn't looking hard enough for them
Character Building- Good enough. Doesn't leave that much impression but not that bad either.
Writing Style- I love the writer's writing style, it was unique and easy to follow.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The story was very unique in my opinion as I read I didn't have to stop reading because I had a sense of dejavu from other stories. It usually distracting when your reading a story and have to stop thinking you read that sentence or that situation before... I love that about this book.
Overall Enjoyment: I like it. I enjoy reading the book.

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Glass Sight - silentscarlettt

Judge: rageynerd
I don't have many critiques for this story! You have talent as a writer, no doubt. The storyline is unique and the style of writing is beautiful to read. There are one or two grammar mistakes but other than that, I really enjoyed it!

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- I didn't find any mistake in the book. The grammar was perfect, not grammatical errors. No incorrect use of punctuation. No type of errors.
Character Building- The book only has 8 chapters. But so far the character building is perfect I fell in love with Yuyu. In my opinion, the character built all the way through and leaves a very strong impression on the readers. Especially me :)
Writing Style- The writing style was very unique and easy to follow. I love the way the writer wrote this book.
The uniqueness of the Plot- Completely differs in every aspect.
Overall Enjoyment: I learn with this book the real meaning of never judging a book by its cover. I am the type of judge that would read the book I'm judging even if it doesn't interest me and I'm glad I was judging this one. I am in love with this story, the more I read the more I love it I couldn't put it down it was totally a page turner! I could see this book being the next one feature in a Netflix Movie :)

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Locking His Heart With Mine - theindi_girl

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Judge: rageynerd
The lack of grammar, personally, was too much for me to get past, but that may just be because I'm a grammar Nazi. But I must ask, why the bold, italic, and caps in random places? Those should only be used in emphasis for the flow, like in thoughts and dialogue, not for main points. Just my opinion. Plus, the hate to love trope with successful businessmen is overdone. However, let me say that I love the fact that they're both successful business men and women!! I've yet to see that in any business story. It's so refreshing.

Judge: ar_ya_writes

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story had very noticeable mistakes.
Character Building- There were a few slip-ups in characters discovery but not so bad.
Writing Style- The writing style was inventive but slightly confusing.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The story had a lot of similarities to the typical story of the genre, but the writer changed it and made it so I wanted to keep reading.
Overall Enjoyment: The story is good enough and has the potential to be good.

Love Hate: Friendship Stage (Book 1) - RedZetroc18

Judge: Cky1208
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Judge: rageynerd
I love the idea that the books are separated by stages of their relationship. I also love that the book is "written" by a character. And, plot twist, partly nonfiction?! Sweet! All the more alluring. Not many, if any, grammar mistakes as well, so that's impressive! I enjoyed Joaquin especially. He's a completely different type of guy than us readers have seen in a very long time. Refreshing!

Judge: ar_ya_writes

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- Has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothly and wouldn't even notice the errors if I wouldn't be looking hard enough for them.
Character Building- Character built all the way through. Leaves a strong impression to the readers.
Writing Style- The writing Style was very unique and easy to follow.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The plot completely differs in every aspect, the writer did a really good job making the story unique.
Overall Enjoyment: I somewhat like the story. The reason why I found myself stopping after I have the answers for the grading. Is not that the story is not good, I'm just a hopeless romantic and was looking forward to some romance in the story and you won't find it until after more than half of the book.

Love Me Hate Me Marry Me - A_qween_16

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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story had noticeable mistakes.
Character Building- After the introductions of the book, prologue and disclaimer there was about 4 chapters on the book and so far the character building is good enough but doesn't leave that much impression towards the reader, it wasn't bad either.
Writing Style- The story doesn't have that much cohesion with the flow.
The uniqueness of the Plot- As I was reading the story I kept thinking I read this story before, it was very similar to another storyline.
Overall Enjoyment: All in all, I really enjoyed the story. After working on the story and fixing a few mistakes and the grammar the story does have potential to be great.

Maid of Dishonor - autumnkeely

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Judge: rageynerd
This story feels slightly unrealistic... the main character feels inconsistent as well. She's afraid to stand up for herself but doesn't hesitate to backhand Eric? The good news is the grammar wasn't too bad. There were a few mistakes here and there but nothing horrible. The characters seem a little jumpy, but more like they just aren't distinct enough. As soon as you remedy these aspects, though, your story is sure to be perfect!

My Fragile Heart - Moonlight_Rose9

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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story had very noticeable mistakes.
Character Building- Character building was a little jumpy, making all of them almost similar to each other.
Writing Style- The writing style was very inventive but there were times where it became a little confusing.
The uniqueness of the Plot- The story only had a few similarities to the typical story of the genre.
Overall Enjoyment: The story has a lot of potentials to be good. It has a good ideal of what the plot is, but I think it needs a lot of work, and there are a lot of mistakes in the writing that needs to be fixed. But I like reading the story.

Judge: rageynerd
I could barely notice the mistakes. The main love interest here makes a fairly strong impression, which is good. The writing style isn't very different from typical aside from the prologue being a weird set up. You get anti cliché points for this being a true story, however it seems to be a very common one. I hope there's a twist at the end!

Stuck on Flamingo Lane - misspopgoingnowhere

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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- Has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothly and wouldn't even notice the errors if you wouldn't look hard enough.
Character Building- There were a few slip-ups on character discovery but very few. I was impressed.
Writing Style- Unique and easy to follow. I love that the writer made the story read as if it was a poem.
The uniqueness of the Plot: There were very few similarities to the typical story of the genre.

Judge: rageynerd
no grammar mistakes that can't be forgiven for the sake of creativity. I love the theme and expectation of self growth here. It's like a collection of poems, or an anthology maybe? that connect to a greater message. Very Interesting

The Incredible Life Of Vegas J. Clearwater - ARod1298

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Trouble With The Billionaires (Bachelor Series #1) - _musu__

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Trust - eternalfelicity

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The Abreaction of Us - SevdimOldum

Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The story has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothly and wouldn't even notice the errors If I wasn't looking hard enough for them.
Character Building- The character building is good enough. They don't leave that much of a big impression but not bad either.
Writing Style- I like the writing style it was easy to follow.
The uniqueness of the Plot- There were only a few similarities to the typical story of the genre.
Overall Enjoyment: I like this story very much it was very interesting and easy to fall in love with.

Judge: rageynerd
I'm a sucker for employee-boss romances. This particular one reminds me of Grey's Anatomy. Instead of Meredith and Derrick, there's Isla and Jan. The grammar was great. Isla didn't give me a very strong impression, but as you find her voice you can always go back in the beginning and edit, because you do need strong characters in the beginning. Sometimes the phrasing is a little wordy or awkward, so make sure you're checking the flow. I do like the psychiatrist student angle, though. That's new!

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The Incredible Life Of Vegas J. Clearwater - ARod1298

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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- I did not see any grammatical error. No incorrect use of punctuation no type error.
Character Building- Character built all the way through. Left a strong impression on me. I really enjoy reading this book and see how the character builds perfectly.
Writing Style- The writing style was easy to follow and very refreshing to read.
The uniqueness of the Plot- There were some similarities to the typical story on the story genre but not that many.
Overall Enjoyment: I read this book in one sitting I couldn't put it down. I needed to find out what was next!

Judge: rageynerd

Trouble With The Billionaires (Bachelor Series #1) - _musu__

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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- There were noticeable mistakes in the story.
Character Building- There were a few slip ups on character discovery.
Writing Style- There wasn't a coercion with the flow.
Uniqueness of the Plot- The story was a little cliche, but the author added a lot of twist that makes me want to keep reading.
Overall Enjoyment: Overall the story was very interesting and enjoyed reading about it.

Trust - eternalfelicity

Judge: ar_ya_writes
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Judge: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar- The grammar was perfect. No grammatical errors. No incorrect use of punctuation. No type of errors and I looked.
Character Building- There were very few slip-ups on character discovery. Nothing that a good edit and redo would fix. Great job :)
Writing Style- Inventive but slightly confusing.
The uniqueness of the Plot- I found the story to be very unique and completely differs in every aspect.
Overall Enjoyment: I like it

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