Alpha's Bargain - mistandfuryy
Between Love and Hate  -  belkisaris
Foreseen Nightmares  -  edara1999
Hunger - Claceshadowhunterpt
In Love With Him  -  SayantiDatta
My Possessive Vampire - VolleyGirl_104
Searching For My Heart  -  weaver_of_tales
Silent Verses  -  whiteshells123
The Alpha's Daughter -  rebeccagragg
The Fallen One  -  ZaynieBear
The Gifted Masters: A Silver Century - Celestious91
The Last of Her Kind - BFWorlds
The Lycan Within  -  xlionheart
Twisted  -  marialoveswednesdays

Alpha's Bargain - mistandfuryy

JUDGE: underatedpessimism
- Nice intro engaging: by introducing character flaw its not 100% typical
- But by devil, I literally thought the devil lol
- Ooohh then I find out the devil isn't like the typical 'the devil is my mate' but its      actually her father..PLOT  TWIISSST

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar: Has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothy and wouldn't even notice the errors if you wouldn't look hard enough.
Uniqueness of the plot: Completely differs in every aspect.
I liked the uniqueness of this plot. Usually with werewolf books they are instantly in love as they see their mate's. With this one there was attraction but it was instant love. It was refreshing to read.
Character Building: A few slips ups on character discovery
Writing Style: Inventive but slightly confusing.
Overall Enjoyment: Good enough

Between Love and Hate  -  belkisaris   

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar
I read all the way thru chapter 20 and I did not find any. The story was perfect. No grammatical errors. No incorrect use of punctuation. No typo errors.
Uniqueness of the plot
Completely differs from other stories of the same genre.
Character Building
The was no similarities between characters. They were all different. Character built all the way through. Leaves a strong impression to the readers.
Writing style
I love the writing style of this story. Sometimes you're reading a book without feelings or anything. This story gave you goosebumps in the right places and make you cry in the right scenes. I'll be honest. I saw 54 chapters I cringed. I was about to stop at chapter 10 is all I needed for the points but I couldn't stop. The writing style was unique and easy to follow
Overall Enjoyment
It was a totally page turner Book! I read all 54 chapters.

Foreseen Nightmares  -  edara1999   

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar
Very very very little grammar mistake. When I found the first one I went Damn. Almost perfect lol.
Uniqueness of the plot
When I started to read the story I was thinking it was going to be the same flow. Following the storyline as other. But I kept reading to give a good review. All the way thru chapter 7 I was glad I was wrong. The story is completely unique and differs in every aspect from other story of its genre. It was truly refreshing to read.
Character Building
The characters build all the way thru. I read all the way to chapter 9 to answer this question. The author only have 10 chapters so far
Writing style
I had to give a * because the story was really really rushed. And even though I like stories that move that fast. It was way too fast to the point that it got confusing at a times. I would like to see more development in the story to get it gradually to that point in the chapters. Maybe make the chapters a little longer to describe the scenes more.
Overall Enjoyment
The previous comment was the only thing bad I had to say about the story. It was totally a page turner. Besides the writing style being too fast. It was a page turner. I finished this story in 30 min. Great job and keep up the good work. Maybe make the new chapters a little longer so it could hold more description.

Hunger - Claceshadowhunterpt 

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
• I had to read some sentence again to make sense of what the author was trying to say. I believe with just a hint of a small proofreader or help. The grammar would be perfect.
• The story crosses over the line of both originality and similarities. I found myself getting deja vu from other's stories of the genre yet it has its originality.
• I would say more than good enough. But it danced from not giving a good impression and not being bad either, to a little jumpy.
• Just as it said in this there was not much cohesion with the flow. Now with saying that, that didn't mean it was bad writing style. I believe if the Author goes back and reword some of the chapters. The author could make the writing style perfect.

In Love With Him  -  SayantiDatta   

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
- I had to change the score to * because I found really really really small mistake. I found myself saying damn. I should of stop at chapter 10 slightsmile emoticon But great job overall with the grammar
- I found the story fascinating and unique. Vampire books is something I read a lot. I can honestly say the story was completely different from other story of its genre
- Character build all the way through. Leaves a strong impression to the readers
- The same as the plot. The writing style was unique and easy to follow.
- Read the whole book in one day. All 27 chapters

My Possessive Vampire - VolleyGirl_104 

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
• The story crosses the line of both originality and similarities. The author shouldn't get discouraged though. Is a story about a possessive vampire. Aren't they all though?
• I like the character's development. It only had 9 chapters but they were on their way to character discovery. Only a small hint of character slip ups.
•  The writing was unique and easy to follow. I love the writing style it was very unique and refreshing. I love the way the author use description for this story.
• I'm a sucker for vampire stories. It's kind of endearing not to know if it is romance as nothing hasn't happened yet.

Searching For My Heart  -  weaver_of_tales

judge: underatedpessimism
-  first with your intro it's great but its also very typical add a twist or something that would draw the readers in like a flaw
- Chap 1 : 'feeling much worried' sounds grammatically incorrect, if it is pls fix it up
- Start is very typical but still engaging.

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar: Has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothy and wouldn't even notice the errors if you wouldn't look hard enough.
Uniqueness of the plot: Differs slightly from the typical. I know werewolf books just like vampire's book tend to be similar to one another. But there are ways to make a story unique.
Character Building: Character built all the way. Each character's were different from each other. Really good job there.
Writing Style: Slightly different to the basic layout. I think the writer should re- read her story and change the writing style a little.
Overall Enjoyment: Good enough

Silent Verses  -  whiteshells123   

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar
The author had a lot of noticeable Mistake but not so bad that it became cringery to read. There were some chapters though that had more mistake that correct ones.
Uniqueness of the plot
The story was slightly unique but there were some scene that seem similar to other抯 story of its genre.
Character Building
Very few slips up between character building. But they were all different from each other. Again only a few slip ups and they had some similarities between each other. But not a lot.
Writing style
The story was creative in some ways but it got kind of confusing. It felt rush somehow?
Overall Enjoyment
I did like the story, but it was hard to enjoy because of the many errors on it. I believe the story would become better if the author proofread it and fix them.

The Alpha's Daughter -  rebeccagragg   

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar
Very very little mistake. If I wasn抰 looking for them I would read the book without even realizing it had that small grammar mistake.
Uniqueness of the plot
The story crosses over the line of both originality and similarities of story of the same genre. I read werewolf books and they all seem very very similar. This one included but it has his originality and those part I enjoy reading.
Character Building
A very few slips ups on character discovery but the author is just starting. I am confident the author character will get better as the story progress.
Writing style
The story wasn抰 confusing for me. It was easy to follow. But I didn抰 feel it was unique. It kept giving me sense of deja vu. I wouldn抰 want the author to get discouraged though. I had read a lot of books. And I love the writing style of this one
Overall Enjoyment
Literally a page turner. I read this book in less than an hour. Great job and keep up the good work.

The Fallen One  -  ZaynieBear   

judge: underatedpessimism
- love the character choices
- Intro was a little typical with the "this is the story of how I fell in love with.." (show don't tell maybe?)
- Nice start with the abomination and accident thing drew me in

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar: The book had noticeable mistakes.
Uniqueness of the plot: Only a few similarities to the typical story of the genre.
Character Building: Good enough. Doesn't leave that much impression but not that bad either.
Writing Style: Inventive but slightly confusing.
Overall Enjoyment: I Like it!

The Gifted Masters: A Silver Century - Celestious91 

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
• First book of the fourth I read I didn't saw any grammatical errors. Great Job.
• I was surprised at how unique this story was. I never seen a story so unique. Usually I would get a glimpse or dejavu of another story. I found none. Great job.
• very very few slips up in character building. The author almost went to the perfect line.
• I have to give it * points although the writing style went too inventive and unique. It was a hint of confusing but in that department. Yet I don't think there's more the author can do to make it less confusing. Once again it was almost perfect. Almoust.
• very unique and interesting story. I enjoy reading it

The Last of Her Kind - BFWorlds

JUDGE: anonymous
- You could read the book smoothly and wouldn't even notice the errors if you wouldn't look hard enough
- I'm not really a fan of Vampire & Werewolf books but your book gave me a new impression for these genres.
- I like your narration and description. Not too much and not too shallow.
- Writing style is smooth and easy to follow. Makes me wanna read more.
- I liked it! Tho I think it's time to change your book cover. It doesn't capture my interest.

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar: Has very few mistakes. You could read the book smoothy and wouldn't even notice the errors if you wouldn't look hard enough.
Uniqueness of the plot: Only a few similarities to the typical story of the genre.
Character Building: Character built all the way
Writing Style: Unique and easy to follow.
Overall Enjoyment: Good enough

The Lycan Within  -  xlionheart 

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
• This book has little similarity with others of the same genre. It was refreshing to read something so unique
• Character building is really perfect in this story.
• I like this story very much it was very refreshing and entertaining. A little bit of proofreading and it would be a perfect story. Very well done job.

Twisted  -  marialoveswednesdays

JUDGE: underatedpessimism
When mason was introduced idk, he didn't seem that threatening, so I assumed he was the 'good guy' in the stereotypical plot line, just some food for thought:)

JUDGE: RomanceFanatic1
Grammar
Noticeable mistakes. Some chapters were perfect but some of them had noticeable mistakes.
Uniqueness of the plot
Differs slightly from the typical... I had a quick sense of dejavu as if I was reading a twilight type of fan fiction.
Character Building
Good enough. Doesn't leave that much impression but not that bad either. Character's were slightly different between each other.
Writing Style
Basic... I think the story has potential to be good. Even Though the fact that it kept distracting me because it was too similar to twilight. I think the story just need a little bit of work. You can take ideas out of a story and make it your own in a way that it doesn't take you back to other stories.
Overall Enjoyment
Good enough. I like the story. The story has potential to be great is is reread, and re written in a way that doesn't make it too similar to twilight.