Reviews in Order
1. Beginning of an End  -  Jelmo03
2. Dawn Of Corruption - teklis
3. Ellie and The Prince  -  JMStengl
4. God's Daughter - _musu__
5. Guardian Angel  -  Lickerfish
6. Reclamation  -  Alpacat
7. Rhistmaege - WilliamHowells
8. Ocean's Child - PaintingBlossoms
9. Queen Of The Night - xDRAG0N0VAx
10. The Angel  -  Meggie_shadowhunter
11. The Blood Reader  -  Twinning94
12. The Gathering, Bloodmoure Chronicles - JRShepherd
13. The Last Princess - kakpie291203
14. Thief  -  MagicAnimals

Beginning of an End  -  Jelmo03

JUDGE: underatedpessimism  
The Writing style kind of confused me, because in the first chapter there was a car crash and then we suddenly went to the mother finding out about it. That contributed to the character building, where I had no idea what was going on. Your unique plot line is your strongest element:)

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
Your strongest feature is your writing style. The uniqueness of the plot is pretty good too. You had many Grammer mistakes that made the story confusing at times. Also, the way you jump around can make the story confusing. You are telling the story as if we know everything about the universe/time period you story takes place in. You need to slow down and explain some things better in order to allow your readers to better understand it.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
The punctuation could be better, and adding one or two more commas wouldn't hurt, especially with a large paragraph. The first chapter had me hooked, and the character development was awesome, but you could make the bio longer, and maybe you can delete the last sentence, and let the readers discover why you've chosen "beginning of an end" to be your title.

Dawn Of Corruption - teklis   

JUDGE: kaninga_duh  
The cover was fantastic, it drew me in, making me want to explore more. But for me, I didn't particularly enjoy the book, because I've never been that much of a fan of stories that enter a whole new world without any similarities to the human world, but I can see why this book has won a few competitions before. It's writing style is good, doesn't jump from place to place and it has enough description, just enough to let the reader understand what's going on, while having a aura of mystery. Sorry if this offended you.

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
You have perfect grammer. You are very good at character building and writing style draws me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your plot has about as few cliches as possible meaning the only cliche I could find was that a girl wakes up with no memories and has to help someone. Your story is very unique and interesting to read!

Ellie and The Prince  -  JMStengl

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
This is an amazing book. It has a great concept that is executed nearly perfectly. I love how the characters are developed and act like real people would. You even included the mean girl that everyone hates! I was so into this book that I lost track of time while reading it!

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
I love the plot, the characters and the setting! Just reading the first chapter made me addicted to it. If it wasn't for this judging phase, I wouldn't have picked up this book. At first galnce at the cover, I thought it has a bit of  "happily ever after" which is kinda cliche, in my opinion. However, this book turned out to be quite different, with new unique characters and you described it so well, I can imagine it all in my head. Great work and keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next book!

God's Daughter - _musu__

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
This book is a different story but it has many gramatical errors that make it difficult to read at times. The characters have a few similarities to your everyday high schooler but have good depth. This story is interesting to read but difficult to get into and enjoy.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
The grammer was confusing, especially about the past and present tenses, so a 2 for grammer. Angels and Gods are a bit old in fantasy stories, but there was a good twist to it. When i read the prologue, i thought it was just angels hiding someone and something seeking revenge, something like that. I was a bit surprised when I found out that the main character was hiding in the normal human world. There were some clashing places, like how Lexi doesn't have friends to talk to, yet she has a bestie.

Guardian Angel  -  Lickerfish

JUDGE: underatedpessimism 
Some grammar mistakes but your writing style definitely is your strongest element it contributed the most to my overall enjoyment.  I like the biblical references at the start and it's relation to angels, interesting..:)

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
I like the concept of the story. It is something that I haven't seen before. You develop your characters pretty well but you use cliches when developing them. I love your descriptions of events but sometimes you use too many details and it gets confusing. Overall I think you are doing a pretty good job at writing this book.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
From what I've read so far, the background is kind of similar  to Divergent, except it's a bit more organized and not war-torn. The entire place where Alexa knows is fake, just like what Tris learns in the books. However, there is some differences from Divergent and your story is quite entertaining, thus earning a 4 for uniqueness. Your description of everything-even the grass, the flowers, and the trees is very detailed, good job.

Reclamation  -  Alpacat

JUDGE: kaninga_duh 
The character names were a bit hard to follow and I'm not that sure if Amora-Tae's power is healing. Is it? Overall, this book is splendid, and with so much description it makes everything flow. I also didn't had much trouble following the story line.

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
I like the premise of your story but the terminology is slightly confusing. I like how you have the glossary to help your readers understand but your world is so different that it is confusing. The names are also hard to keep track of. I like your details and storyline though. Your grammer is great and your writing style is interesting.

Rhistmaege - WilliamHowells

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
I thought that the writing wad jumping from one event to the next event, without much connection to the previous events. I've never read something following this storyline, so a 5 for uniqueness. The grammer is perfect, but then again, I'm not that much of a grammer nerd, so I may have missed some errors.

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
You do a great job with details but your storyline seems to jump around from time to time. Your grammer is pretty good as well as your character building. You get a 5 for uniqueness because I haven't read a story with this premise before.

Ocean's Child - PaintingBlossoms

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
I've actually read something similar to this book before, but generally the books I've read that are similar to this is in the category teen fiction. This story has me hooked right from the start with a murder case right in the first chapter and a lot of relatable stuff too, despite being a fantasy story.

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
You do a good job telling the story and most of it is pretty creative. There are some cliches but it is still a great plotline. Your grammar is great. I enjoyed the story and could really connect with your characters. If I had to change one thing it would be that you dive into the story really fast and I would like some more back story before you jump into the events. Maybe telling about her brother leaving for the party or something. Other than that it is great.

Queen Of The Night - xDRAG0N0VAx

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
This book has a semicreative plot line but the beginning develops a bit predicatably. The characters are detailed and relatable and match the plot. This book has a great storyline and is very fun to read. Continue the series!

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
The prologue was captivating, and I was tempted to give a 5 for writing style, but after the start of the first chapter, I grew a bit uninterested as it all seems a bit bland and nothing really happens in the middle of the first chapter. However, I couldn't deny the fact that the plot of the story is very unique, thus a 5 for uniqueness. Keep writing, and I'm confident you can make the most unexciting parts exciting.

The Angel  -  Meggie_shadowhunter

JUDGE: underatedpessimism  
There were a few grammar mistakes at the start which you want to fix up so the reader gets a very strong first impression. Engaging story, loved it, wish there was more to judge :)

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
Great concept for a book! Contains a few minor grammatical errors and a few cliches but has a good storyline and is developing well. I wish there was more to judge so I could better grade your character development.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
I didn't really spot any grammatical mistakes, but i think the story is kinda cliche, and angels running around Earth and all that. I think your writing style is okay, but you could make the chapters longer, but sometimes short and sharp sentences really make the story impactful, which is what I like about your story

The Blood Reader  -  Twinning94

JUDGE: kaninga_duh 
I really enjoyed reading the book, because I felt like I've stepped into a whole new world, even though I thought the start of the first chapter was a bit cliche-ish, with the main character running away and having powers and all that. I noticed some typo errors, but it didn't really affect the smoothness of the story's progression.

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
Your story starts up pretty cliche with the in character on the run but the premise of the story is pretty unique. I like your character building and how you bring new characters in. Your grammer is very good and your writing style is great.

The Gathering, Bloodmoure Chronicles - JRShepherd

JUDGE: underatedpessimism  
This is what someone told me about my first story: "First impressions are everything and no offense but I didn't get a good one." It's harsh I know, but its true, maybe you could start with a "DING!", sound?
Nice character building, that was your strongest element. The description at the start was great, but it was used to your advantage better in the next few chaps:)

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
I love the details! You made it so easy for me to picture the events. Your characters were easy to understand and relatable to real life. Your story has a few cliches, but what story doesn't. Your writing style is effective and made the story come to life for me.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
This story had me hooked right from the start and I don't know what to say because I love the storyline, the characters, everything! It kept me up all day reading it and I was determined to read half of the book so I went to sleep at 2. Your grammer is great, the way you picture the character and write everything you picture in words, the careful choosing of your vocabulary...I wouldn't be surprised if you won!

The Last Princess - kakpie291203  

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
This book follows an unusual path with the plot but it does so in a way that makes it interesting. The main character seems to get all of the breaks that allow her to escape a bad life. Although the storyline is creative, you put few cliches in the book such as the main character falling liking twin brothers. Other than that, the Last Princess leaves me wanting more and waiting for updates.

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
The book has an unusual storyline, but the rebels sounded a lot the ones from the Selection stories, missus the powers that yours have. Considering this is your first story, great job! This was definitely one of the best stories I've judged.

Thief  -  MagicAnimals

JUDGE: underatedpessimism 
My only criticism is that the characters were introduced all at once, so as a reader I hardly had an idea of what the protagonist's personality was like. Consequentially I got the names of different characters mixed up. Loved the plot (slightly predictable), very clear, I understood it straight away. :)

JUDGE: wi_se_gi_rl
You developed your characters really well. I love the storyline and your writing style is great. There were some grammatical errors that confused me at times but other than that, it is a good story. Keep writing!

JUDGE: kaninga_duh
Even though this book wasn't 100% original on the plot, (I've seen something like this before) I think your style of writing is very smooth, and it really manages to catch the readers' attention. I feel like you could have a more extensive use of vocabulary, such as replacing happy with delighted etc etc