Armathenia by Thorgirl1

JUDGE: RafiaZ
It's well written and the description she has given is very good. But some chapters were too short I think one should maintain a standard. It surely does make you wanna continue reading although I found it a bit, very slightly dry but overall it was a good book.

The Foreigners in The East by mYu514

JUDGE: RafiaZ
It was truly a great novel, and the way she has written is extremely good. The vocabulary was good too. There is a slight need to add a bit more description and there was some confusion in understanding in some chapters but overall I think it is very good. I felt like I was reading a novel by a professional author.

The Dragons of Russia by xDRAG0N0VAx

JUDGE: RafiaZ
This novel was amazing and I did not find a single weak point. The plot is very different and very well written. Description, vocabulary everything was pretty good.

Sixth Sense by Mind_Power

JUDGE: RafiaZ
The story you've written is good but you really need to pay attention towards the tense you're using. Also you need to improve your writing style. Add a little more description. But overall it was a nice book and I enjoyed it. You've describe some of the action scenes very well.

Time Limit by Fab-Fangurls

JUDGE: anonymous
I don't usually read many fandom/fanfiction type books because it doesn't really interest me. Time Limit is different to me, the colloective group of authors work to pull you in and hook your attention. There is a good amount of difference between characters-whether it be attributes or attitude- because each character really is a different person. I can see this book going far and I will finish it after I finish judging??

JUDGE: RafiaZ
It was nice but more of a fanfic and I wasn't really expecting that. But overall it was good. There were author's notes in between some of the chapters which kind of looked unprofessional. Like you're reading and suddenly comes "yo are you a fan of this too" etc. Also I'd say that maybe you should introduce what happens in the academy in the first few chapters too. But that's just my opinion. Otherwise it was a very unique and different sort of novel. Great job

Timeline by YourmyPast

JUDGE: anonymous
- I was hardly able to continue reading it.
- I've read a few books like this before... and it is a spin off of another book
- There wasn't much to go off of and this book left me completely confused :(
- I think there may be a good idea somwhere within this...book... but it definitely needs some MAJOR work.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
The plot is pretty original and the story is good. But there are so many punctuational errors and grammatical mistakes and although these may seem like little things but they can really bug the reader. Otherwise it's a good book. Try to add more descriptions.

When It First Struck - MasterEpicnesss

JUDGE: anonymous
Your writing style is good. I'm literally holding my breathe while reading the first part.
I actually read your book last as your cover doesn't really capture my attention. But when I started reading it, I actually got hooked that I had to read the original version of your work just to figure out what happened next. I felt bad that I judged a book by its cover again.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
It was a good back although I've read a few like these. Not a page turner but it was very well written. I couldn't fine any mistake and I think this book deserves to be recognised.

My Life as a Slave After Being an Arabic Princess - arabic_writter

JUDGE: anonymous
- Ok, first, practice using a comma and a semi colon. I was reading your book without pauses and it didn't really made any sense. You are also driving your readers away on the first few paragraphs due to grammatical errors. I assume english is not your first language that's why the flow of some sentences need some improvements. Try joining some clubs here on wattpad so you can improve your work, try "Improve your Writing Club" as they actually comment feedbacks like this (better than this actually) on books.
- Your writing style is great if you are writing a script or a dialogue for a play.. or something. But if you are writing a book, specially on first person POV. I don't really think stuffs like these are an option;

"Me: my name is maram
Lian: ..."

- I was really excited to read your book since for me, It had the best cover on your genre but the first chapter of your book actually drove me away.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
Your plot seemed pretty good but you really should reread and edit your chapters thoroughly before you upload them. There are no pauses between sentences and people don't usually continue when there are so many mistakes just in the first chapter. You need improvement in almost everything,  but if you do that, I think you can write an amazing story.

Scales - flyingunicornz_

JUDGE: anonymous
The writing is good and so as the plot. Just a little bit cliche since I think I've seen something like this on a Korean Drama. Good start. It captured my interest... especially the first part where it had a bit of a thrill. But as the book went on, all I saw were stuffs that can be seen on teen fiction novels. Other judges might like the little romance-ish in it but apparently, I'm an old lady who's not into teen novels or romance, sorry lol. But in spite of that, your scores on other criteria are pretty good.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
The plot is good but there is need of some serious editing. There are too many grammatical and tense mistakes. These might drive your readers away. Characters were introduced with out much description. Writing style needs improvement too. Some scenes could've been described in a better way.
What I like about it is how she has ended most of the chapters with a cliff hanger that makes you wanna keep reading.

The Resistance - roguewarrior2002

JUDGE: anonymous
I didn't read your blurb before reading Chapter One so I was a little bit surprised on the last part where you revealed the main plot of your story. I thought it was another plain doomsday book. English wasn't really my first language so I'm not bothered with very small mistakes. Your novel crosses the line of both originality and similarity, just a little bit cliche but it still make me wanna read some more.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
Such a unique plot it was. Very well written and great dialogues. There were a few mistakes but none too serious or frequent. I think any one would enjoy this story. Cliffhangers make you wanna keep reading.

Ridden-Off Innocence - Cray-CrayReading

JUDGE: anonymous
- Noticeable grammatical and punctuation errors.
- Crosses over the line of both originality and similarities
- Characters doesn't leave that much impression but not that bad either.
- Not much cohesion with the flow
- Good enough.

JUDGE: RafiaZ
Feedback:
There were too many mistakes throughout. Grammar, tenses, word mistakes. I suggest get your chapters properly read and edited before putting them up here. And too many characters were introduced with no background or even a brief intro.
But otherwise it was a good one and if you sort these things out, I think you can write a good book.

Dreams: A Love Story Which Never Happened  -  MAckMalice

JUDGE: anonymous
You might wanna fix some grammatical and punctuation mistakes on the first few paragraphs of your book as it might drive your readers away. The idea is pretty much unique but the execution of that idea needs improvement. Writing Style is slightly confusing but it gets better as the chapters go on. I won't continue reading it with its current state but I believe it will be a great book with some editing

Feedback: RafiaZ
It was a very unique book. Never read any thing like this but I think that it could be presented in a better way. Their were some mistakes here and there and the words and sentences used were not so impressive. But still it was very good. One of the few books I enjoyed reading.