Book by bookwormrp

Cover 9/10
Mostly, it's a pretty good cover. The image is clearly the main character, Zephyr, and it does look like he's made of stone, which pretty accurately describes the title and blurb. The one thing I do have to critique however, is the text. It's a bit small, so when you see the book the smaller text is pretty hard to read. I also suggest changing the color of the authors name at the bottom, it doesn't pop out at all and nearly becomes invisible when you aren't on the book page, and is still hard to see when you're on it.

Title 10/10
I think your title is an accurate description of your story without revealing too much, since the story is about the wings of Zephyr, who turns to stone. Good job!

Characters 10/10
Though there wasn't dialogue or a whole lot of thoughts, Zephyr was a well-developed character who experienced considerable character growth and development throughout the story, and you can really tell without it (I think) being explicitly stated.

Plot/storyline 9/10
Despite there being no dialogue, the story progressed very well. It was also not too much telling over showing, and you paced it fairly well. I feel like the end was a little fast-paced, but just a little, and that's okay.

Enjoyment 10/10
I always enjoy reading your stories, and this one is no different. The first time I read it, when you first published it, I left a positive comment along the lines of "omg, this is really good. I really feel like I was in Zephyr" (or something like that), and I feel that still holds true. You invoked the emotions in me even though it didn't have any dialogue or flat-out thoughts.

Description 7/10
It's very short. Right off the bat, I noticed that, so a few points off for that, because when people see a short blurb, at least for me, they tend to think that it might not be a well-developed story because the blurb might not be thought-out. That being said, it does say who the main character is and what species they are, and the basic storyline of the story without giving too much away. I'm not sure how you could make it better, but I think you should attempt to make it longer. If you want confirmation on a different blurb if you do change it, feel free to reach out to me and I'll help.

Overall 55/60
This is yet again an amazing short story. It has a good plot and strong characters, and the only two things I suggest you work on the cover and blurb to improve its presentation. If you like short and sweet stories with fantastical elements, this one's for you.